Date: 11/08/2013 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Cute, but so many errors! For one, I think you mean "Leaning Tower of Pisa," not "Leaning Tower of pizza." Other errors that make this unintentionally funny... a good beta would catch.
Date: 10/08/2004 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter 4
next visit ought to be interesting
Date: 08/22/2004 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter 4
LOVE the story! Great idea! Hey, I adored "Curiosity"! I was wondering what book it was based on? (bondgirl0018@cs.com) I love your stories!
Date: 08/14/2004 - 12:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow this is quite good, i didn't think it would be that good but i am glad i was mistaken loved reading this please up date soon. This is brilliant.
Date: 08/13/2004 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter 4
great chapter and i am glad that they did it but i hope that she doesnt regret it or neither does he
Date: 08/12/2004 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter--I like the element of humour that you've given it. "Devil stick" Heh heh... *Shakes head* Please update soon :)
Date: 08/12/2004 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
great chapter :-)
Date: 08/12/2004 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
You've done an amazing job of building the sexual tension even though they managed to uh... well, climax a lot sooner than I expected them to. I must say that I'm clueless as to where you could be taking this, but I look forward to the surprise.
Date: 08/12/2004 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for updating! Cordykiten
Date: 08/12/2004 - 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
I LOVE THIS IDEA!!!! He mother getting her vibe - FUNNY! Please, write more very soon.