Date: 11/03/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Prologue - Deadline
Love this story already. great chapter, can't wait to read the next one.
Date: 07/15/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: Prologue - Deadline
Great story, unique and hot :D
Date: 06/28/2005 - 05:57 pm Title: Prologue - Deadline
Great update
Date: 06/16/2005 - 12:27 am Title: Prologue - Deadline
Great start and Spike already snarky - excellent!
Date: 06/14/2005 - 11:38 pm Title: Prologue - Deadline
OHH loving the way this ones sounding
Date: 01/12/2005 - 09:55 pm Title: Prologue - Deadline
Great start :)
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Date: 10/16/2004 - 05:08 am Title: Prologue - Deadline
wow.... here i am pointing fault at your writing and i can't even spell my own message right! sorry about all the mistakes in my previous post!!! :S
Author's Response: I am trying to work on that. Unfortunately most of my past writing has been for business where contractions are evil. Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/16/2004 - 05:07 am Title: Prologue - Deadline
fantabulous story- absolutely loving it! just one thing, and please don't take offense, but the dialogue is seeming too structures- it doent read as though people are speaking it. for example "oh, it is ok. i had not really thought......" instead, maybe something like 'oh that's ok, i haven't thought...." or soemthing along those lines. I think abbreviation is the key- I'm not I am, don't instead of do not, that's not that is.... you get the drift. But apart from that, this is an incredibly captivatign story!!!
Date: 09/13/2004 - 10:32 pm Title: Prologue - Deadline
Like the story and will continue to read. Would like to see " and ' used to make your fic easier to read though.
Date: 09/08/2004 - 08:22 am Title: Prologue - Deadline
Hey, Tara: Excellent beginning with fabulous potential. You're right about needing a beta, though. Once you get that minor detail taken care of, it's full speed ahead. I really liked it.
Date: 09/08/2004 - 01:00 am Title: Prologue - Deadline
I like your names for things. Playing at the crypt, name of the band is Slayer. It's cute. And it looks like an interesting story. Can't wait to see where it takes you. Oh and Spikikins is priceless.
Date: 09/07/2004 - 10:53 pm Title: Prologue - Deadline
i am definitely loving this story so far so please continue!!!