I like the story and can't wait to see who this Matt character is. The only thing that bugs me is that there are eight characters which conflicts with the tag line "...seven strangers...". I know it's anal retentive but I can't help it. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: ooh, ooh, oops. see i didnt even know i did that. well, guess what? now it's 8 strangers. lol. thanks 4 pointing that out

Author's Response: actully, scratch that response. it's buffy, spike, ruby, willow, tara, riley, and marcus left cause if brother was killed, then comes in my new character. lol sorry

i really do like the premise for the story and look forward to where you go with this. My suggestions, though? Okay, i watch RW too, i saw Las Vegas, they had a 3some during the very first episode. However, i still felt like a lot of this is moving too fast, especially concerning Spike and buffy. You would have a better reaction and feeling for it if you spread the action a bit, built the tension. And...I'm also having a problem with Ruby. She's very Mary Sue and she's kinda like Faith-lite. I understand having other characters, but you are relying on her a lot in this story, almost making her the protaganist, as if the readers could relate to this character. More often than not, early writers put themselves in the story, make their own Mary Sues, and maybe that's what you did here(i can't say for sure, as i don't know you). However, what i can say is that as a reader I don't have any draw to her, i find her somewhat false, forced, and idealized in a way Mary Sues are, and wish the focus would be on the characters i do know. This is not a flame and i hope you see that. I see potential here and i wanted to give you some real advice. I do hope you continue and I look forward to more.

I really like it!!!! PLEASE continue I love this story!!!!!!!! Oh and could you have Spike kick Riley's ass just for fun!!!!

Author's Response: what good would the story be if he didn't?