Wow, I am totaly in love with this story. It had me totaly hooked form the beginning and I couldn't stop reading it. Not only was the grammer beautiful, but the writing it descriptive, but not in a tacky way. I founda few grammer mistakes here and there, but that's alright. I personally loved how you added a few originial characters in the story. That shows creativity and thought. Thank you for the great story. It's coming along great! -Ashley K. Loomans

thank you for the update i loved it and i cant wait for more