Cliffhanger of doom! Ack. I love this story. The way that you write is amazing - the flow of your words, it puts me right in the moment. Your character voices are all spot-on. I especially love your Buffy and Spike voices. Great fic, I can't wait for an update :)

Author's Response: Oooh, "ack" is good. I like "ack." ;-) I also really appreciate your thoughtful comments, especially the bit about how the words flow. The flow of the narrative is every bit as important to me as the plot and the characters, and something that I try very hard to achieve. So it warms my heart to have that pointed out and gives me hope that I'm getting it at least halfway right. Thank you so much.