Date: 10/15/2004 - 12:00 am Title: More Than You Know
You know I think you write some of the most interesting sex scenes. I mean, when you read lots of these stories--like I do--you start to get so sick of the Buffy/Spike sex scene formula that you end up skipping over it because it's so damn boring. But in this chapter there's the scene at the beginning where he's imagining Buffy, dressed in a business suit, pressing her lips against the shower door. It's sort of creepy and erotic at the same time. It seems almost ghostly the way you've written it which just adds to the strangeness of Spike's character in this story.
Author's Response: Hot sex should never be boring. I try my best. There is more hot spuffiness to come. Thank you for the awesome review.
Date: 10/14/2004 - 07:29 pm Title: More Than You Know
Again, thanks for the update. I'm glad Spike found Buffy again although he throw the number away. Looking forward to more Spuffyness. :)
Date: 10/14/2004 - 12:17 pm Title: More Than You Know
Chapters 6 was very interesting , William's wounded personality making us understand his present behavior.
Then the last ch. was beautiful , and i liked the way he needed to worship her..
Author's Response: William is a little screwed up. Bad love can do that to you. It wouldn't be spuffy if I kept them apart for long. More spuffiness to come. Thank you for the review
Date: 10/14/2004 - 04:55 am Title: More Than You Know
Can't wait to see the spuffilicious ending to this story....
Date: 10/13/2004 - 10:01 pm Title: More Than You Know
Oh great they're back together. I sure hope Buffy can see through all of Faith's crap.
Author's Response: Me too but for how long? Whats done in the dark always come to light. Thanks for reading
Date: 10/13/2004 - 07:37 pm Title: More Than You Know
I'm loving this story and can't wait for more. I think Faith, though frusterating, is adding an extra ineresting dimension. I had saying not nice things, but one thing I noticed is you use a very lot of similes. Thats cool, but I didn't love the Pope's ring in the middle of sex. Kinda wierd. Of course, you are the writer and ultimately you need to include what you think is good, not what anyone else thinks, but I just wanted to leave some feedback about how I felt reading it. Again, loving it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Good observation about Faith. You are right about the similes. They are great for allowing people to paint their own mental pictures and run with them probably better than I can. Now that you mentioned it, the Pope's ring comparison is a little off-putting. I was looking at it from a worshipping perspective. My intention is not to offend anyone. Thank you very much for the positive feedback It is always appreciated.
Date: 10/13/2004 - 05:36 pm Title: More Than You Know
These last two chapters were so intense! I wish Buffy would have put two and two together and figured it out. This story is super erotic and awesome read!
Author's Response: The time will come. I promise you but maybe not how you think. I am glad you are enjoying the story. Thank for the review.
Date: 10/13/2004 - 05:17 pm Title: More Than You Know
This story is so hot. I wasn't even that pissed at him for doing Faith. But I'm freakin estatic for the Spuffiness! :) Keep up the frequent update!
Author's Response: You are probably the only one not pissed about that. You gotta love the spuffiness. It can only get hotter. Thank you the review.