Date: 07/24/2006 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
AhhhhhhhHhh, my inner romantic is so happy right now.
*tear*
=)
Date: 05/25/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I thought it was great. I really liked seeing that side of Buffy as well. I thought it was a change for the better that she finally let Spike in. :)
Date: 03/28/2006 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Why weren´t you happy with this chapter? I liked the atmosphere, it was all so stable and safe.... Won´t hold long, probably.... Ask myself what´s going to happen.. :)
Date: 01/19/2006 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Somehow the one person she'd wanted nothing to do with had become the one person she couldn't live without.
about sums things up for them. have no idea why you didn't like this chapter, because its really good. and only anya woudl think of calling in sick because of orgasms would be a good thing.
Date: 11/29/2005 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
For what it's worth, I was happy with the chapter. They had a happy morning after infused with omlettes, more love making, and bits of deep confessions and declarations of commitment. I hope he can make her be not afraid again. Such a deperate and beautiful plea. I love how their relationship has developed from such deep loathing hatred to such a deep bond. They are so much better together, stronger than the sum of their parts. Even without your muse, your storytelling is wonderful. Great chapter.
Date: 07/28/2005 - 09:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Good job. I dunno if it's applicable now, but the GOTR song 'Goodnight Sweet Girl' could have worked very well in the club scene. Anyway, update soon!
Date: 07/28/2005 - 08:34 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great chapter. Def one of my favorite ones of the story. Just loved the way you could show off Buffy's vulnerability without it being too angsty or overly sappy. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 07/22/2005 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Awesome story. :D Keep it up, I love where you're going!
Date: 07/12/2005 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Is this the end? I better not be! :) i love your story!
Date: 06/18/2005 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
awesome story!! you're doing a terrific job!! just love it...thanx!!
Date: 06/14/2005 - 04:49 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
i loved it...i love the vulnerability buffy showed!!
Date: 06/13/2005 - 12:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Omeletts and Orgasms. NOW that is a diet I could stick too. You have nothing to worry about in this chapter. It needed to be written. A sort of transitioning into Buffy trying to let go completly. She is still reeling from some Angel stuff and being scared. Though I think she knows that n Spike is what she wants and needs in her life. There is a bond there and trust. I am very happy you have updated. The chapter was excellent.
Date: 06/12/2005 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
you should be mega happy with this chapter coz it rocks. it was well sweet and emotional. lol, my mum just told me off for yeling 'YES!' real loud when i saw this had been updated lol. --xXx--
Date: 06/12/2005 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
All I can say is more more more! And as fast as possible please...this is a great story:)
Date: 06/12/2005 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I just finished reading all 14 chaps and I love this story, especially now that Buffy and Spike are together. I like the playful comfort level in their relationship. Is Buffy's mom going to find out her daughter is dating her husband's son? Will that bring them together or just push them farther apart? I'm not sure if you've considered a reconciliation between Buffy and her mom, but it would be interesting to see Spike thrown into the mix. Plz update soon. You're doin great.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I think you did a wonderful job with this chapter. Both characters were credible and the dialogues were well written. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 08:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Thanks for a morning after with no drama. The phone call to Anya was funny, having sex is an excellent reason to call in! Buffy is being so open and vulnerable it's lovely to read.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great job! Love the story! Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 06/10/2005 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I thought it was a wonderfully written chapter and I really like the story....I don't think you need to worry if we like it or not, 'cuz if we didn't we wouldn't keep reading it :)
Author's Response: And that would be what I'm afraid of... ;)
Date: 06/10/2005 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Poor Buffy! I hope she doesn't go and push Spike away again! He can help her! Also, I'm curious to see if Buffy will repair things with her mother, I think that would be helpful for her healing. And drat... I'm out of chapters! lol! Update soon ok? I'll make omelettes for your muse! =D
Date: 06/10/2005 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I really liked this chapter. Liked the portrayal of Buffy. You hinted in earlier chapters that she could be like this once she accepted Spike into her heart. I liked their banter, and the fact that it's the morning after and there's no "drama." No crossed signals, no second guessing. They've been through so much APART that it's heartwarming to see all that they can be together!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 09:55 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Enjoying the story. Glad to see Buffy and Spike finally settled things.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 09:54 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I think it's a good fic and a very good chapter !! go on, please !!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 08:55 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
loving it!!! its a great chapter nice to see them happy - great fic - please update soon :)
Date: 06/10/2005 - 08:29 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
loved the update