Date: 06/10/2005 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Girl, if this is you without the muse...lol...not gonna complete that thought 'cause that would just be a jinx. Suffice it to say, this is an excellent chapter. One of your best, in fact. Just keep writing and she'll come back.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 04:48 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
i thought it was a great chapter, it really established buffy and spike's relationship and it was very sweet.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I hope that didn't sound too critical. I wasn't trying to be harsh.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Can I have Spike cooking in my kitchen? PLEASE? - WONDERFULLY SPUFFY Chapter. Looks like they are both trying. I sure hope Buffy can let go and truly love again. And if you can write this well with your muse AWOL, I can't wait to read you write when your muse returns. more please.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I thought it was good and it moved the plot along in a Spuffy friendly direction, but it did seem a tad off. Maybe it's just that it's the first time I've read your Buffy being happy. NOT that I'm asking for angst, but this chapter read a little differently than the others, not bad, just different.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
LMAO at the phone call to Anya. That was soooo funny. you rule
Date: 06/10/2005 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I am happy with this chapter =D and looking forward to the next!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I love how open Buffy was with him. It was a big step for her and it was needed. And how funny was it when she called out to Anya and was able to use the sex excuse? lol. This was a great chapter, Buffy putting herself on the line and handing Spike her heart. Just hope he doesn't break it.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
this was a really great chapter, i love how she told anya about her and spike coz it shows she isn't ashamed of the relationship, it was a perfect chapter and i loved it heaps, please brng more soon!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great chapter. I'm glad Buffy has decided to open up to Spike. Loving this story. Please update soon. *bribes your muse with much chocolate and other yummy treats*
Date: 06/10/2005 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
OH sweetie. Have no idea what had you so worried. It was a lovely wonderful chapter. Just the right note after the intensity of the last one. Really nice coupley interaction. Nice inner thoughts and dialogue between them. Lovely. Nothing to worry about here at all.