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Reviewer: ScoobyDawn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2012 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

I'm nervous. Buffy is being unfair to Spike and selfish but hey ho that's the way that often goes. The thing that has me nervous is how many chapters are left, my angstometer is spiking and I'm nervous. :s

Reviewer: Moi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Ah! How sweet! They're, like, the poster children for happy couples everywhere (excluding the "deep dark past" part and, you know, the whole family problem).
I was grinning the whole time I read this chapter. Spike + cooking + thoughtful video renting = just plain adorable.

=D Hee.

Reviewer: Brettpuppy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Im sure that this story has a very good ending so keep up the good work. I am into the fanfics because their not meant to be so Hollywood like so give it your best and Ill read it.

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2006 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

...And excitement grows....Finally back to California, oh-oh....So, why is it hard for you to write this? You´re doing well, really.
By the way, in the last chapter Riley said something like "maybe Spike has some kind of VD". What is it? Abbreviations like this are not mentioned in my dictionary unfortunately *sighs* ;)

Author's Response: VD is a sexually transmitted disease. Hope that helped clear it up!

Reviewer: Lulu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 07:40 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

nice fluffy stuff with a bit of darkness coming in. . . . so things aren't going to be peftect, which is cool.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

The dreaded trip home. Random parental tension is bad enough without having major trauma thrown into the mix. And Spike is a wonderful boyfriend to know that sometimes its just better to agree with your woman than to truly believe its the right thing to do. Great chapter.

Reviewer: KATE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

ThankYou for updating, i started this story a while beck but only just found it again. I love how things are progressing! keep up the good work

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2005 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Worth the wait. looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Bittersweetbloodbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2005 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Hey, this is still great. I was just wondering if there's anywhere (besides FFN, becuase I know you don't post there anymore) where one could find an edited version of this and other stories of yours. I don't have a problem with the way it's written, if that's what you're thinking; quite the contrary. I just find most fanfic smut reads the same, and I normally skim it. This is my favorite of your stories- update it soon!

Author's Response: No, there's not. I never appreciated having to edit my stories in the first place, and I'm no longer going to do it. Every scene is an integral part of the story, and I don't have sex just for the sake of sex. It plays an important part of the story, and I'm often trying to convey something in the scenes. If you don't like it, I'm sorry, but those scenes are as much a part of my story as everything else, and I've chosen to no longer chop up what I work hard to write. I write erotic fiction, and that's the way it's going to stand.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Awesome chapter. I think the waiting to tell Joyce and Giles is gonna blow up in Buffy's face, but then again, makes for more interesting chapters that way. I am loving this story, as I have all your writing. Sorry that you're having blocks. Sending lots of Spuffy thoughts your way.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 11:25 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

She let out a deep breath, hoping that they could make it through whatever they had to face back in California. Yeah ... me too! Looking forward to find out if these two can let their fingers (or lips) from one another close enough for no one to notice ;-) Good chapter!

Reviewer: Sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 07:01 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

As long as you at least *plan* to finish it, I am not gonna dump this. It's a great story and it's understandable that you can't just sit by the computer all day writing stories and doing nothing else.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

good update

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

I'm sooooo glad this story is being updated again. It's one of my favourites. I'm really looking forward to the trip back home. Should be lots and lots of angsty goodness. It's great that you've portrayed Buffy as so scared about her newfound happiness being shreded by any change at all. It fits really well with her character. More please!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Very nice chapter. Long periods between updates mean having to reread prior chapters to remember where we are. So, it's nice to see that your muse is working so quickly! I'm looking forward to the trip back to Sunnydale.

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

oohhhhhh update! yeah. . . this is really really good. Can't wait for more. . . new chapter you say?! Now?

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

So happy to see this story back!

Reviewer: demonica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

yay for the return of this story. Oooh, home with the 'rents. Can't wait to see what happens

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Glad to see this again. The unresolved issues with Joyce are going to be interesting to explore, though I think Buffy's made a mistake not coming clean about Spike. The sexual tension is going to add to the general tension, making it a great plot device. I liked this relatively angst free chapter, and that bit about Anya's sex swing - just glad I'd just swallowed my water! I'm looking forward to your take on the family.

Reviewer: jennybean Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Glad to see that this story is back. It's one of my faves. The trip back to Sunnydale should be interesting. I have a feeling they won't be able to keep the relationship secret.

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Yeahhhhhhhhhh you were able to come back to this one, I am glad. The muse finally cooporating. That hottness was worth the wait, though i am sure Buffy will let her shit get in the way somehow when they go home. Ughhhhhhhhhhh I look forward to the angst *grins*

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

It was so great to see an update for this. Even with the fact that you say it's hard for you to writew this and you have a lot of blocks in this story, it all flows so well and it doesn't sound forced at all. Great chapter. I hope Buffy doesn't push Spike too far. He doesn't deserve all her issues.

Reviewer: wiccangirl314 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

:) Yah I love this story. You are doing so great! Can't wait for more.

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