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Reviewer: BruBrunetteoet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I'm enjoying the pacing of this story, and the way Spike and Buffy are attempting to heal their hearts before jumping into anything. I can't wait for this confrontation with Eve!

Reviewer: lyn2005@netscape.com Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I think the author's note you left after this last chapter made an insane amount of sense. I'm actually surprised that people have been complaining. This is one of the most original Spuffy ideas I've ever come across, and have been following this story since it's beginning. Good luck with it. Know that you continue to have a fan on your side!

Cheers!

Reviewer: Carrie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Great chapter (and also a great explanation about the time frame and stuff)! I loved their phone call in this chapter. It showed how neither of them are really over what happened. Now Spike just needs to see what a bitch Eve really is...I can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

GAHHHHHHHHHH thank the gods, she finally had the lil ephiany(sp). You worked this chapter wonderfully. Giveing Buffy the brunt of things for a change. Spike spoke the truth to her. I am glad it sunk in to her brain. She really decided to grow up and be adult about it all.

YIKES Eve at the door...ohhhhhh evil cliffhanger wench...you know i love every moment of it LOL.

I will look forward to monday's chapter. whoooooooo

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Bravo, I agree with the your sentiments at the end of the chapter. I want it to be realistic when everything happens in it's time. Oh boy, Eve oustide Buffy's door - not good. Wonder if she'll start causing problems, publicly for Spike. Well, it would be her true colors. Of course I want Spike to dump her, and I know he will, but yes, it would have been too soon had it happened when he left the other night.
I like this Robin and can I just say - can I be the one to console him, he's a cutey. Poor Buffy, she's got a lot to think about, but that's good. Of course dealing with Eve right now is the last thing she needs.
Update soon hon, I'm still luvin this story like there's no tomorrow.

Reviewer: Nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Oooo. Definately looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Having read your note I have now had a look at some of the reviews and I am utterly amazed. The relationshhip dynamic that you have illustrated so beautifully between these two seems perfectly realistic to me. Yes, I love them as a couple and I abhor the pain that they have endured, but hell, if it was all sunshine and flowers it wouldn't be much of a story now would it?

I am particularly astounded by those casting aspersions on Spike's intentions with Eve and his behaviour towards Buffy. I haven't read him that way at all. Ok, so he's not right all the time and nor is Buffy. They are fallible like most of us. Again, had they hboth been paragons of virtue, never putting a foot wrong: well we're back to considering what a scintillating read that would have made.

I feel bad that you are being driven to justify your decisions as the author when it does not seem necessary to me at all. Criticism should reveolve around plot viability, character consistancy, prose, grammar etc; none of which I can find particular fault with.

I am truly enjoying your story and the only frustrations I have with regard to it entail the wait for chapters - becuase patience and me are unmixy!

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Having read your note I have now had a look at some of the reviews and I am utterly amazed. The relationshhip dynamic that you have illustrated so beautifully between these two seems perfectly realistic to me. Yes, I love them as a couple and I abhor the pain that they have endured, but hell, if it was all sunshine and flowers it wouldn't be much of a story now would it?

I am particularly astounded by those casting aspersions on Spike's intentions with Eve and his behaviour towards Buffy. I haven't read him that way at all. Ok, so he's not right all the time and nor is Buffy. They are fallible like most of us. Again, had they hboth been paragons of virtue, never putting a foot wrong: well we're back to considering what a scintillating read that would have made.

I feel bad that you are being driven to justify your decisions as the author when it does not seem necessary to me at all. Criticism should reveolve around plot viability, character consistancy, prose, grammar etc; none of which I can find particular fault with.

I am truly enjoying your story and the only frustrations I have with regard to it entail the wait for chapters - becuase patience and me are unmixy!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Loved the chapter.
I'm glad that Spike called again and Buffy got something to think about.
And I understand why they sholdn't get together right away. They have to work everything out first.
But once again... Great chapter and love the whole story. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

This time the story was posted to late for me so I read it this morning :)
I was relieved to see that Spike was calling again. Though it was the next day. Seems the day before, when he had the fight, he wasn't calling Buffy. Maybe it was too late, maybe he was too upset to do it.
Oh good, now we come to the bottom of the whole trouble (so to say): Spike was sure enough (felt sure enough after talking to Buffy these last days) that he asked her why they did break up, why the their relationship didn't work. That's good. Only when they know why exactly it didn't work they know how to prevent the same error from happening again, making a new one work (even I don't think Spike thought about that when he asked; he wanted to know). And it wasn't only because of Travers... Spike could have hunted her down, get her back; but he didn't because he was to hurt. He just let it happen, too hurt to act against it. Spike wasn't sure Buffy loved him?? Buffy's old problem, not being able to voice her feelings? No, not like that. Spike felt Buffy didn't support him too? Yeah, they really should have talked back then. You can't expect the other to be a clairvoyant. They could have avoided the misunderstandings; but what is done is done now. Buffy thought back then it was better not to bother him. Maybe she should have shown more interest in this songs too? I don't know. And then, when he noticed Buffy was crying, Spike was disconnecting the line. Seems it is still upsetting him too. Too much for him (?). ~ Oh yeah! Buffy noticed that at last she still loves Spike and it wouldn't be right to be with Wood then (regarding him, too). Buffy is breaking up with Wood now. (Me? I think it was the right thing to do and I'm glad it happened now.) ~ And Buffy had a lot of thinking to do about what Spike said. I don't know that thinking forward and backward what she could have done different will Buffy help to find a better solution. Buffy has to look forward .. and don't make one-sided decisions next time. Maybe it will help. (Yeah, and when I'm honest I still waiting for her to go back to Spike *gg* but I'm sure you know it.) ~ Oh big surprise! Eve Hart is at the door? And the chapter ended here :) Cliffhanger. How evil lol. Your good with your cliffhangers; now I have two days to wait. Well if I'm lucky I'll catch it on Thursday evening.
Do we have to found a club of Eve haters now ;-) I hope Buffy stands up to Eve; she did it before. Buffy is on her own territory; Eve isn't. Don't let her beat you, Buffy! *crosses fingers* Oh I don't trust Eve and Buffy doesn't have a witness; Dawn isn't there. Lol and I don't talk of killing Eve. I just expect her to be mean and a witness would have make a testimony for Buffy. I think Eve is out for blood so to say. Well be proud! You have me on the edge of my seat again.
I hope Spike 'has seen the light' too now. That Buffy still means a lot to him (aka that he still loves her); that talking to her is more important to him than to be in Eve's company. And Eve suspects that Buffy is the reason for Spike's coldness towards her (and she is right, huh?). She won't be there to tell she is giving up Spike now. Did I mention that I'm at the edge of my seat? Good then ;-)
Oh soon Addie? I hope. *continues to cross fingers though it makes typing hard*
Thanks for the time line again. I tend to forget about it when I'm reading (that in the story the time doesn't pass so quickly). I hope the story will continue for a bit longer when Buffy and Spike are back together. I will miss the story, that's sure.

Reviewer: MaryBleached Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 02:01 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I agree with your author note from chapter 53. I'm quite happy with the way you're conducting your story. Always a pleasure to read it! Keep going....

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 01:57 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Love the story. I even enjoy the angst. More please.
And thank you for the good read

Reviewer: Kill_Pineapples Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 01:55 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Hmmm...Eve Heart in front of Buffy's door. This can only mean one thing: Lot's of bitching in the next chapter.
I really liked this chapter and I think you're doing a great job ^-^ *huggles*

Reviewer: Nichole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Hi Addie i love this story i'm glad to see that they are making some head way by talking..they are saying things they should have said 3 yrs. ago but just couldn't seem to get it together. I have read your other stories and really enjoy them so i know this one will not disapoint me. You are the author and where your muse go with this beautiful story i shall follow. Great update. Look forward to the next chapter.....N

Reviewer: RogueAngel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Not so much a review (though the chappie was great as always) but a response to your Author's Note at the end:

As always, I have complete and utter faith in you and the directions you choose to take *your* story in. I know you'll get us all there and I don't mind how long it takes. Besides, if you do it too quick, the story's over. And I like this one way too much to have it be over too soon. Thanks again for all your hard work.

Reviewer: Chouchou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 11:47 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I must admit I don't review much...But just wanted you to know that I love this story...as a matter of fact I love ALL of your stories;) now I' gonna go to bed because I've got fever but i couldn't resist reading your update=) looking forward to the next chapter!=)

Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I gave up reading this story a few weeks ago but decided to check the updates today. Spike and Buffy arent back together yet ?

Author's Response: No, they are not back together yet. Would you like to suggest a helpful, constructive way in which I could've written this story specifically to please you and no one else?

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Once again a great chapter. As for your AN, I can only assume those complaining are new to your stories. If they aren't I don't understand how they are not trusting you. Also it is clear from reading these past few chapters that they have only been talking a few days and they are heading in the right (Spuffy) direction. So keep up the good work and post again soon please!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Phew. I was stunned when I went back and read the reviews of the last chapter. I really think that every Fanfic Archive site should have clear guidelines on the Home page explaining what feedback is and what it isn't, and then advising that anyone found flaming will be deleted/banned. Feedback, imho, should be given for two reasons: First, unashamed paise and thanks for a story/chapter that has given the reader great pleasure; Secondly, to offer constructive criticism - or Concrit, as it's generally known. I try to be more of a concrit reviewer.... people like Darla must have a lot of issues in their life...

Now for my feeble attempt at concrit.

I liked this chapter. The interaction on the phone reminded me a lot of discussions I used to have with exSpouseLinnit, many, many years ago. They'd always start civilised, polite and seeking to build bridges/understand.... but emotions are so raw, feelings so very fragile that inevitably voices raise, one or the other ceases to listen fully or is shocked too much by a revelation that discussion has to cease. Such a difficult time. And, with these two clearly still having immense feelings for one another, the call was highly emotive for me.

I also felt that Buffy's realisation that she couldn't continue to develop a relationship with Robil was extremely mature and responsible of her. I read your A/N above about the timeframe we're looking at here, and yes I recognise it's all starting to happen fast. But... and this is probably more to do with my own personal monogamous relationship morals than the way young people live their lives today, I think Spike must have been with Eve long enough now to be able to recognise that the feelings he has for her, compared to his feelings for Buffy, are in no way similar. Further, if he were as mature as I'd like him to be, he would have come to that decision forst, ended his relationship with someone he doesn't love, and then attempted to repair his relationship with Buffy and potentially recapture what they had before things went sour.

All of this though, is my opinion, and I do recognise you have a wholly different pov. I'm hanging on in because I know you'll make it right in the end and... you're a good writer, who is/has a great Beta. I promise not to miss more chapter, and to review with one para or less (actually, you can't have less than one chapter, can you? Or does a sentence not count as a chapter? Hmmm).

Nice upgate, pet.

Author's Response: I don't have a beta. I do work as one for a couple of people, but I don't have one.

I disagree that Spike would immediately leave Eve because he loves Buffy more. He does love Buffy more, BUT he also knew the moment they ended things that he would never love anyone the way he would Buffy. It was either settle for someone he loved less or be alone, and he didn't want to be completely alone. Furthermore, he wasn't sure after the party if he wanted to get back with Buffy since he was still hurting. Like I said in the AN--it's only been a week. I don't think it's showing immaturity for Spike not to decide within a day or two hat he's going to abandon his relationship with Eve and ignore all the bitterness he still has towards Buffy.

Reviewer: STATEOFMIND Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

loving it chucks want more please and i thinkits just right :D

Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Glad to see the new chapters in this story and that Spike and Buffy are finally talking to each other. Looking forward to when Spike finds out what a bitch Eve is which I assume he will soon and that Buffy has decided to break it off with Robin. Obviously after so long apart it is going to take a while before they feel able to step back into a relationship and I am looking forward to seeing how this happens. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 05:27 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Wow! I can't even believe Eve is there. I really really want to see what happens.

Reviewer: olivia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

You are the best Addie !! ;)

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Cue the serious "dun dun dun" music at the sight of Eve at the peephole! Can't help but wonder if Spike has also broken up with Eve, prompting her to stalk Buffy! Robin was quite the man in sucking it up and taking rejection. But especially since he is also Buffy's boss, he did a great job of proving what a great guy he is, even if he's not the guy for Buffy. Absolutely great update. And while it's may seem frustrating for some that it's taking so long for Spike and Buffy to get back together, it feels more authentic the way they are struggling through things. It would be one thing if they just had a roll in the hay for old times' sake, but they have to wade through serious relationship issues. They weren't communicating at the end of their relationship, so now they have to tell each other how they felt-- right, wrong or indifferent-- they just felt/ perceived things in a certain light, and they have to make peace with the past for the future to work out. We have faith in the 'ship, and you. Keep up the great chapters!!!

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 04:59 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

awsome chapter. i hope eve doesn't hurt buffy. please more soon. your doing a wonderfull job on this story and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

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