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Reviewer: Sara m. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Tarded people!! You should know better than to doubt the the author, she is after all the one writing the story! OK, so calling people retards wont get the point across but still, don't doubt the person writing the story, unless its you! And its a great story at that! So, Eve's standing at Buffy's door, is she going to do her little song and dance of “he’s my boyfriend, stay away!” I’m glad Buffy came clean with Robin, he’s a good guy. And Spike told Buffy how he felt, something for her to think about and work on. As always thanks for a great Chapter!

Reviewer: Shauna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I'm glad Buffy made it a clean break with Robin, all upfront and honest about where things stood for her. I think that's a sign that Buffy's starting to get it. Plus, stringing Robin along would have hurt him, and I like Robin (even if he did some not-so-likeable things on the show).

I thought the conversation between Spike and Buffy was very enlightening, and I think it's good that Spike got the chance to really lay it all out for Buffy, how he was feeling about her lack of support. After all, hadn't Mona been at the studio with Rory almost every day? Buffy only showed the one time. I think that these conversations Buffy and Spike have been having are giving them a chance to talk and grow, and really understand what they need from each other in order to make a relationship work.

I also wanted to say that I for one really like the pace of the story. I've loved this story from the get-go, and I have faith that you will bring it about to a satisfying end.

Very interested to see what Eve wants...

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Okay...playing scenarios in my head? Why would Eve be at Buffy's door? a) Spike's just dumped her, she blames Buffy & has come to give her bitchy 2 cents worth; b) She's tapped Spike's phone & is coming to tell Buffy to stop talking to her guy; c) Eve is a closet psychic & is coming to tell Buffy to stop talking to her guy. LOL! Personally, I'm hoping for choice A. No matter what happens, you can bet that Spike knows nothing of this little visit & it's all gonna backfire on Eve. Nanny nanny boo boo :P ! Can't wait for the next chapter. This is gonna be good!

Reviewer: Satindoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Oy! People really try to second guess your decisions as a writer. That really burns my butt, figuratively speaking, of course. I'm frustrated that Buffy and Spike had such poor communication that they broke up to begin with. But, hello, this is not exactly uncommon in the real world. So all you fantasy seekers - who don't like a spicy dash of angst with the lust and the passion - should seek elsewhere. Okay? Or just flow with it and see where it goes and then decide if you like it. But, please, let Addie be Addie. She's sooooooooo good, and deep down in your little hearts troll hearts, you know it too!

Cheers,

Sd

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

"She couldn't keep telling herself she'd done the right thing by leaving. Part of her had always known that was a lie, but now, the lie was too hollow to offer her any comfort. "--And the light bulb has finally gone on for Buffy. I love the fact that all this time after their relationship ended that the ghosts of it are such constant companions. That kind of earth shattering love doesn't just end and cannot be something that a person re-enters without much debate and consideration. And I'm so proud of her for cutting Robin loose before he furthered muddled up things for her. I wonder what Spike would think of that little development. (I also hope she doesn't let that little fact slip with Eve. That would be all new kinds of hell breaking loose!) And the thought of another confrontation with Eve, that's all kinds of exciting, too. Maybe we'll learn a bit more about Eve's motives, cause it sure seems like she's got something going on... Loved the chapter. Loved the story. I love every phone conversation they have and can be very patient. Looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I anticipate their reunion but then I dread that that will be the end of the story. I love these guys too much to give them up so I would be content if you dragged this on forever.

I agree with Spike that Buffy should have been a bit more emotionally supportive but the way he dropped that on her and then hung up was not cool.

Eve being at Buffy's apartment cannot be a good thing. Don't leave us hanging too long.

Reviewer: samsarah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I get what you say and i think the fic is just great as it is... it wouldn't feel real if they just got back together after all that happened between them, so congrats on another great chapter and i'm really looking forward to the next... chaito... :-)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

WAT IS TAHT BITCH DOING THERE!!!! i really hope that eve didnt go to buffys house to start something with her. i love this story and am so happy u updated. im glad that spike got all of that off of his chest and even though it hurt buffy to hear it, she needed to to understand wat he really wants in a relationship. also i understand that spike and buffy cant suddenly get back together but i hope it happens soon. please update as soon as u can, im dying to read the next chapter and see wat happens between eve and buffy. thanx

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Wow... where to start? This chapter is brimming with developments and there is all the flame nonsense to boot! I haven't had much time to read other reviews, but your detailed explanation at the end of the chapter piqued my curiosity so I went back a couple chapters. I'm really sorry that you have had to put up with all the craziness and just hope you know that there are many of us who just appreciate the fact that you take the time to share your work with us for our entertainment. That said, on to the chapter at hand...

Again, the oogy tummy feelings surface with the phone conversation. His apology for not calling the previous night tells her that she should expect a phone call every night going forward? And then the abrupt way he ended the call when she got upset at the topic? AHHHH... it's torture!!! But in a completely good way ;)

Very glad that Buffy decided to be mature about ending things with Robin and being as honest with him as she could be. It wouldn't have been fun to see him get hurt.

Now someone it would be very enjoyable to watch get hurt is Eve!! The rational part of me says that I would probably react the same way if my relationship felt threatened. But the Spuffy part of me thinks 'back off, be-yotch... Spike is for Buffy and Buffy alone!!". Can't wait to see where you take this impromptu visit by Eve.. (Believe me, I want to know that all is right with the Spuffy world right this instant, but please take all the time you need to get us there!)

On a personal note, I'm leaving for a two week vacation soon and was very relieved to find out today that at least my accommodations the second week have wifi access. *Packs laptop now* I wouldn't dream of logging on for work, but my Spuffy stories.....?? How could I possibly stay away, especially from this one??

Reviewer: Janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

*GASP! what's gonna happen?! lol, guess ill have to read on ;)...thanks a lot for updating, you're a star.

Reviewer: Clara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I actually really like that you're not rushing things. It makes everything more realistic and believable. Not to mention the wonderful writing....more please!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I still love this and I think you are making it very realistic to live.

Reviewer: Paige Conners Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

good point you are a great writer addie it is hard to be able to put chariters into true time frames. and you are cruel with the cliffhanger at the end. lol just kidding looking farward to the next.

Reviewer: Paige Conners Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

good point you are a great writer addie it is hard to be able to put chariters into true time frames. and you are cruel with the cliffhanger at the end. lol just kidding looking farward to the next.

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 12:30 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Don't worry about people who say the time line is taking too long. I think your story is briiliant just as is. Think about how long relationships take? I think the waiting will be well worth it. Can't wait to read more.........hopefully soon (she begs so sweetly)

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I have to say I love this story and I love how this is turning out. And even if I didn't, I still respect you as an author and trust that you will deliver a tale worth all the angst...because what is a good tale without angst.

Anyone that gives you shit for your decisions is pure bs. You write what you want to write, and let them figure out their own issues. You got one fan rite here.

As for the story, I love how you write Spike. You don't sacrifice his character to build Buffy and I love you for that. This chapter is another stepping stone to their reconsiliation that will result in them having a more fulfilling relationship then they had before.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Wow...that was a lot to unload for Spike and Buffy! I wonder what will become of their relationship. Uh oh....Eve. She's not gonna jump Buffy or something is she? Or go crazy and try to threaten her or kill her? I wonder how Spike will feel when he finds out what Eve's been doing.

I can't wait for them to break up though. Even if he doesn't end up with Buffy I don't want him to end up with Eve. I just don't like Eve at all. Poor guy has no idea how she really is.

I do think Spike was a liitle unreasonable about Buffy being unsupportive. For the most part, she did try. She moved to another state and quit school temporarily for him. Not many people would give up their life and future for their partner. Some of the blame lies on him as well though in my opinion. He never told her and he could have once he figured out that she really didn't know to do it. INstead of going off to drink all the time, he could have went home and talked with her, but he didn't. Sure Buffy should have asked about more, but she tried in the ways she knew how to. I think they both had fault in the end of the relationship and pretty much neither can be blamed more than the other, but that's just my opinion.

Sorry bout the long message that probably seemed like it would never end. Hehe...I just love this story though! It's real life to me! Update soon please!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Great chapter.

I'm glad that Buffy let Robin down asap and nicely. (no chance of the good guy getting too hurt ... very considerate)

The phone conversations and revelations are getting better. Yes Buffy, it's the LITTLE things that count and keep a relationship thriving (too bad she had to learn this the hard way) Gotta say, I really love this Spike of yours Addie (I actually love every Spike that you create)

OK ... Eve is at the front door ... for the next chapter could you make Buffy a Slayer and could she just stake Eve???? (we all know what a vampiress Eve is) ( Joking but seriously ... ) I cannot even begin to predict what you are going to do with that scenerio! Can't wait ... but I will.

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

THANKS FOR THE LONG AUTHOR NOTE. I HOPE THAT BOTH BUFFY AND SPIKE WILL SPEND SOME TIME UNDERSTANDING HOW THINGS WENT WRONG BEFORE, MAYBE WITH AN IMPARTIAL THIRD PARTY PRESENT. I'M CHEERING FOR THE SPUFFY, TOO BUT I AGREE, IT SHOULD BE REALISTIC AND LONG TERM. THANKS FOR THE GREAT STORY

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

great to see a new chapter, thanks! as always, i enjoyed it. angst is one of my kinks, so i love it ~ can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Personally, I think the tale is moving along perfectly. I agree, having them see each other and just fall into bed together with so much between them would be a disaster. He's with Eve (even if he's realizing he doesn't want to be) and Buffy ripped his heart out 3-years ago (not an easy thing to forgive even if you love someone) and they need to clear the air between before they can move forward - like Spike said, he knew Buffy loved him, but he wasn't sure she LIKED him. That's important. He doesn't just want a bed-mate, he wants everything - friend, confidant, lover - the whole 9 yards. If they would of talked all this out 3 years ago, they'd be together today. Now it's gonna take a ton of understanding and opening up to even feel like they can be together again. They love each other (and even though some are speaking in past-tense - it's still there) they both know they love each other, but right now... they can't be together, they need to go back and be friends first, they need to trust as weel as love. Yes the tale is angsty - but hey the entire series was angsty so what's new?

I have to say, I'm shocked at the reading some of the past "reviews" (and I use that term lightly). Come on people - it's a tale, a story, a work of fiction from the authors brain and imagination that is FREELY given to us for our entertainment. If you don't like how it reads or where it goes, or how long it takes to get there - dont' read or don't review, but don't flame the author cause you don't like something they wrote - it's THEIR tale. You don't like what they wrote, go write your own tale with your own imaginings. Read the warings and summaries - if it says their angst, and you don't like angst, don't read it - it's that simple.

Addie - I've read many of your tales and loved every single one of them, angst and all. My ideal tale is filled to the brim with sweet and smutty spuffy loving, but I also appreciate a wonderful plot filled with all the things that make a tale grand and you deliver that in spades. So for every "bad review" or "flame" you get, know that there are 10 times that many people out there enjoying your offerings and reading every word you write with relish! You are awesome! Thanks so much for sharing your phenominal talent and sticking to your guns with your plots! YOUR stories are incredible and anyone who doesn't appreciate your efforts should just "change the channel"

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

It was nice of you to give your explanation, but for me....not necessary. They have issues, many, but for me that makes the story interesting, makes me always come back for more. It kind of is knowing that there is a light at the end of the tunnel, that glimmer of hope, you know the " crumb", as Spike has always asked for, that makes me see that anything can change. As bad as it gets, somehow their love will win out. Anyway, great chapter and thanks

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

You know, it's always a bad sign when a woman shows up at the ex-'s house!!!

Anyway, I hope Buffy sees through Eve.

When a woman shows up, it's usually out of desperation, sad to say and I hope Buffy gets that.

Spike should break it off clean with Eve before things get worse. I've been the recipient of the old brush off and it hurts like hell but we do get through it. Eve can too and she needs to move on herself.

Okay, that being said, I hope Spuffy happens soon.

spuf

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I love how you're slowly bringing Buffy and Spike back together. I am not one of those readers who think all the blame is Buffy's. Yes she broke them up but I really feel she felt she was doing it for Spike's career. On the other hand, how is Buffy supposed to know how Spike is feeling if he doesn't tell her? A lot of men don't usually show their feelings that well. Anyway, absolutely loved the chapter and this fic really rocks!

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