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Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 09:31 am Title: Sunnydale Mall: The Second Hell Mouth

Love the story so far, I kinda want Jake to keep buffy @ the mo though as Spikes being such a major jerk! Wicked so far!

Reviewer: eireanne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Sunnydale Mall: The Second Hell Mouth

wow, you have done the impossible, im totally in love with ryan right now and really dont like spike. he was sweet in this chapter but he is still an ass, but yeah really good job with the ryans character he is so sweet (plus skater boys, yum)

Reviewer: Revello_1620 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2005 - 10:36 am Title: Sunnydale Mall: The Second Hell Mouth

It happens to all of us, great idea that refuses to play out....But in your case this chapter was really good :)

Reviewer: James Lee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2004 - 09:59 pm Title: Sunnydale Mall: The Second Hell Mouth

Really good chapter

Reviewer: Juanita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2004 - 12:10 pm Title: Sunnydale Mall: The Second Hell Mouth

Buffy is one naive little girl, isn't she? The whole mall thing worked out as best as I could imagined it. She had every right to leave with her guy. Not like they were on a date. Good chapter!

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2004 - 04:58 am Title: Sunnydale Mall: The Second Hell Mouth

I didn't think it felt forced at all. I liked it...specially the comments she made to him...kissable? and then the underwear...*giggles* that's right make him beg for it. :D can't wait for more.

Reviewer: SoulNyte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2004 - 04:47 am Title: Sunnydale Mall: The Second Hell Mouth

This chap was good. Jumped around a bit but was full of me likeys. As for Buffy she really ain't scoring savage points here. To ditch a friend (even if it is asshole Spike) is just plain wrong. Hopin she can redeem herself in the future. Also liked Spike being a gentleman; so sweet. Again good job

Reviewer: raspy_luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2004 - 04:09 am Title: Sunnydale Mall: The Second Hell Mouth

I wonder why you don't like this chapter. I think it is good. I also think it is great that Buffy ditches Spike to leave with Ryan. Serves him right!

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