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Reviewer: buffy25122003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 12:20 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

your gr8 do u get money for this be/c ill tell u what u should, i love this story yay spuffy

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2004 - 08:49 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

Sheezz!!!!! please dont keep us hanging here!!!!!! PLEASE please please pretty please!!!!!!

Reviewer: crenchy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 07:42 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

OK, here's my suggestion. Have her have an abortion. Sure, Spike would have issues with it, but he'd end up supporting her because he loves her unconditionally. 'Cause really, another baby story where Buffy either drops out or becomes the model teen mom and she and Spike live happily ever after after gaining the support of their friends and family would be just that, another baby story. Just my two cents, but I've read enough stories that start really well and then just go all to hell when it becomes a baby story.

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 05:12 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

I suggested in my IM to you that you used if you marry them Hero and if you want to be more original I also want to give you an alternative...Keith Urban's I wanna love somebody like you ...no one uses country and that one is perfect for this fic!I will list the lyricsThere's a new wind blowing like I've never known I'm breathing deeper than I've ever done And it sure feels good to finally feel the way I do I wanna love somebody, love somebody like you. And I'm letting go of all my lonely yesterdays I've forgiven myself for the mistakes I've made Now theres just one thing, the only thing I wanna do I wanna love somebody, love somebody like you Yeah I wanna feel the sunshine shining down on me and you When you put your arms around me You let me know theres nothing in this world I can't do I used to run in circles going no where fast I'd take one step forward and look two steps back I couldn't walk a straight line even if I wanted to I wanna love somebody, love somebody like you Whoa here we go now Yeah, Hey i wanna love you baby Yeah I wanna feel the sunshine shining down on me and you When you put your arms around me Well baby there ain't nothing in this world I can't do Sometimes it's hard for me to understand But you're teaching me to be a better man I don't want to take this life for granted like I used to do I wanna love somebody, love somebody like you I'm ready to love somebody, love somebody like you And I wanna love somebody, love somebody like you (yeah) Hey I wanna love you baby

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 11:56 pm Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

Nope, wasn't expecting that. Looking forward to Spike's reaction and how they decide to handle the situation.Holy s--t! Angel's gonna kill Spike for this!

Reviewer: Essi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 06:33 pm Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

Oooh, unespected to me. I hope the baby is Spike's. Sorry, but I can't offer you help with the future. I hope you figure it out. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 06:06 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

Oh! God that better be Spike's baby! I'd be sad if it wasn't what a careless person buffy is. But then again caught in the moment you cant really do anything about it. Please make it be Spike's I'd so totally worship you if you did! Well not that bad but i really want it to be Spike's. Sides that would be cool cause he could prove himself to Angel and Buffy that he is really in love with her and that he would do anything for her. And angel and spike could finally let the anger they had harbored out on each other! that would be neat! but then it would look good on spike's part too if it wasnt his and Ryan wasnt willing to accept it and leaves buffy alone and spike reguardless takes care of Buffy and the baby as if the kid were his own and have the love and devotion he claims to have for buffy show. But it is your story just like you said you needed help well i provided you with some hopefully it helped. If you dont like my review and ideas its okay! i just thought i'd throw some your way! Update soon

Reviewer: james lee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 06:04 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

really good chapter

Reviewer: Lady Brandywyne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 05:39 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

I like all of the suggestions that have been made so far. Except that I would have Angel be an ass for about a chapter and have Buffy smack him down for it. He's still acting like he should have some sort of say in her life. For the other reviewer, the procedure that she's thinking of is.... and bear with me here, cause the spelling will be all wrong.... called amneosentesis. A needle is injected through the wall of the stomach and amniotic fluid is removed and tested. Paternety can be discovered this way but it's not offten that a doctor will do it because of the risk involved. It's usually only done when looking for genetic anomolies and such, then they will do the test. Some will do it others will not but if you wanted to use it in your story...... There's the info.... at least enough for this type os story. But great story and I'll be looking for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 02:41 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

I know there are paternity tests so you can do that if you want to have that confirm the paternity instead of the baby at nine months...but I like the suspense...

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 02:28 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

excellent update

Reviewer: SassySlayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 02:28 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

OK make it Spike's baby ultimately in the end , but at the moment since she doesn't know have her tell both of them Spike first and explain the situation then as just perfect torture to Ryan have her tell him it could be his !

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 02:21 am Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

here is what I would do: have Buffy tell both Ryan and Spike; but Ryan doesn't want a kid; however, have spike being spike, support her and tell her that even if it is Ryan's that he will love it like it's his own. Have spike ask buffy to marry him...then do an epilogue for nine months later to say whose baby it is...you can go either way with that. Also have Angel be real supportive during this entire process.

Reviewer: darla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2004 - 11:22 pm Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

IT ROCKED BABE

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2004 - 11:08 pm Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?

I like it excpet for the fact that seh doesn't know who's baby it is...please please please have it be spike's baby!!!! it would jsut ruin the story if it wasn't!!!

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