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Reviewer: Loz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2004 - 08:35 am Title: Righting Future Wrongs

now im just confused! the story's excellent, but so hard to read coz you keep switching between past and present tense so its becoming really inconsistant... and present tense is always hard to read in a narrative anyway....

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