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Reviewer: samica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 09:59 pm Title: Bonding

Wow!

Reviewer: Jason P Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 07:48 pm Title: Bonding

HOT!!! I hope he goes after her

Reviewer: Jason P Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 07:46 pm Title: Double Date

If only she knew

Reviewer: Trina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 05:40 pm Title: Bonding

This Story gets better and better! Please keep updating

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 05:21 pm Title: Bonding

That was just hot. More please?

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 05:13 pm Title: Bonding

you guys are really doing a great job of building up the UST in this story. I think this is the sexiest chapter I have ever read in one of your stories Ashlee, and they didn't even have sex. I loved the attention to detail and description in the make-out session. very real. can't wait to see what the fallout is!

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 05:05 pm Title: Bonding

I LOVED IT. Now that's what I'm talking about. Awesome chapter...i can't wait for you to get rid of Angel. More please

Reviewer: Wicked Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 04:51 pm Title: Bonding

This is getting better with eah chapter! I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: spikeslovebite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 04:48 pm Title: Bonding

evil!! you're trying to drive me crazy aren't you? LOL love it as always and update soon please!!!

Reviewer: Essi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 04:20 pm Title: Bonding

Love it, it was hot, even with this little action. Spike really put himself to big mess. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: tahmoe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 02:41 pm Title: Double Date

Really liked this chapter and the sweet kiss at the end...the build up is awesome...more soon

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 12:34 am Title: Double Date

Ah, sweet torture! TELL HER IDIOT! LOL. No,seriously, I love the build up (I think I said that in my review for your other story lol). And I know you've got a plan. Plans are good and your writing should not be compromised. I appreciate that. :) Good gob.

Reviewer: Loz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 10:17 pm Title: Double Date

poor buffy... if only she knew :) loving the slight angel bashing- more of that please :) and i like the way you guys write xander as a nice guy, he always seems to cop it the most in a lot of other fics :)

Reviewer: Essi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 08:20 pm Title: Double Date

Spike is being a meanie. I'm not saying that you should write the finding out part yet, just that he is making Buffy sad and all. I love reading this.

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 07:46 pm Title: Double Date

spectalcular ending...like I said now she is thinking she can convert him...

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 05:45 pm Title: Moving Day

I never review mid way... but I have to say that I love this Buffy. Very cute and strong (I hate it when people make her a wimp). Also, love that she ran into the door like a doofus. Very cool.

Reviewer: sailormickey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 12:14 pm Title: Double Date

oooh... a little kiss... this story is 'evolving'... hahaha... got the giggles at that bit. i seem to be getting that a lot.... ah well, another great chapter and glad to hear we're at the halfway mark. i really didn't want this story to become dragged on or forced... really love it! =)

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 11:07 am Title: Double Date

*snicker* He just told her everything with that smile and kiss and she doesn't even know it! Love it! Please let her tell Angel to take a hike before Spike hurts him. Or after...That would be even better.

Reviewer: spikeslovebite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 07:16 am Title: Double Date

GAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! *SWOON*

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 02:49 am Title: The 'Oops' Factor

mixed signals much!

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 01:01 am Title: The 'Oops' Factor

Great chapter! Can't wait to see what the 'real story' is :)

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 11:26 pm Title: The 'Oops' Factor

Love the new chapters. Great UST...and Spike fresh from the shower is always nice. Looking forward to the next few chapters.

Reviewer: Juanita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 08:00 pm Title: The 'Oops' Factor

Damn that phone! Grrr!

Reviewer: Jason P Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 07:30 pm Title: The 'Oops' Factor

Damnit! So close!

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 - 06:59 pm Title: The 'Oops' Factor

I love the chapter. Cant wait to see when buffy finds out the truth about spike. Hopefully it will not be too bad for spike. Update soon and often , looking forward to the rest of the story.

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