Date: 10/02/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter 20
how could things have gone so wrong so fast? she can't leave! he can't lose her! they need to be together!!!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 20
awesome chapter! nothing better than a little angst in a story!!!! keep up the GREAT work :)
Date: 12/22/2004 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 20
love this one plz update soon luvs tina
Date: 12/22/2004 - 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 20
good chapter I can't wait for more
Date: 12/22/2004 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 20
GREAT CHAPTER!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 20
hey, that was good. Is that the end? It had an ending sort of feeling to it but i can't tell
Author's Response: Up until around 11:00 last night, yes. I decided against it, so it will be continued in this story.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh Ashlee, this chapter just had me bawling my eyes out. The finallity of every moment, every step just tore my heart out. When Buffy walked away from her mother and friends to leave town and looked at Spike memorizing his face, I just broke down. This story has emotionally affected me more than any of your previous stories. That is a true testament to your ever improving storytelling abilities and talents. You have humanized these charaters to the point that I hurt when they hurt. This story is just fantastic. I know many will say they just want Spike and Buffy to be together, but that's not realistic. The portrayal of these flawed characters you have given us in this story is completely real. Excellent work hon. :)
Author's Response: Now that's not fair, you got me all tear- that's not the way it's supposed to work :-) Thank you so much for the sweet compliments and I'm glad you think I'm improving in the storytelling department. I'm actually feeling the same way (to the point where I'd like to re-write Fire and Ice at some point in the future). I'm glad the characters are realistic, that's what I strive for because life is angsty and dramatic a lot of the time. Thank you so much!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 20
Arghh! Not fair ! You evil, bad girl! OK so you said that there would be angst, but isn't angst its torture! I just beg of you that show some mercy on Spike (and me of course!) and not let him be out of the baby's life too long! Too much of that has been going on. The story hs been beautifully written like I have said before, giving this taboo subject the shades of grey that it should truly have. Please update soon.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 20
Awesome chapter! Well done :)
Date: 12/22/2004 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 20
Why do I get this sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach every time I see that the story has been update? Damn, you terrify me. You are without a doubt, the Queen of Angst. It makes the story interesting though so don't take it as a critic or anything. I'm hoping for a bit of happiness. Just a tiny little bit, to compensate for all the badness. I don't think my heart can take much more of this. I feel sorry for all the characters in this story. Love shouldn't hurt so much.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I actually laughed when I saw your review and I didn't take it as a criticism at all! The next chapter still has some angst, but after that I'm going to give you all a little bit of a 're-building' chapter. I hope you like what's coming and thanks to everyone for reviewing!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 20
oooh where is she going? please hurry and update again soon, i need to know where this is going :)
Date: 12/22/2004 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 20
I like the story, but I'm just wondering. Are they ever gonna get together? I mean he's not her teacher anymore so I don't see why not and she is having his kid. I guess I just don't like the fact that she plans on leaving without even talking to him first. Well, guess I'll just have to wait and see. Good work and I hope things get better with them.
Author's Response: Don't worry. I know he's not her teacher anymore, but now he's a man who broke her heart. Please keep reading and thank you for reviewing!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 20
Excellent chapter! I know it's a new beginning for Buffy, but please let Spike find her...somehow!