Date: 12/19/2004 - 10:19 am Title: Father Knows Best
i really like this story, its different in a good way.
Date: 12/19/2004 - 09:38 am Title: Father Knows Best
Awesome chapter. You are doing a great job with this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12/19/2004 - 08:13 am Title: Father Knows Best
Nice story. I am sure it's hard to write AU when it seems as if all of the "stories" have been told before. You're doing a good job. One thing constructively: Your beta should be catching grammatical errors such as "him and I" (should be "he and I").
Date: 12/19/2004 - 05:05 am Title: Father Knows Best
that was so sad..........I hope spike gives him a royal thrashing!!!!! very good chapter though...............can't wait for more :D Oh and happy b-day a day late *blushes*
Date: 12/19/2004 - 04:34 am Title: Father Knows Best
ooh hanks a bastard. im glad Spike wants to defend Buffy.. i just hope he doesnt lose his job. great chapter :-)
Date: 12/19/2004 - 03:46 am Title: Father Knows Best
"I'm doing somewhat of a good job with this!" Your not. You are doing a great job! I am really enjoying this story, you are a great author. Update soon!
Date: 12/18/2004 - 08:47 pm Title: Unbelievable
oh my god, I love this story! I'm so glad I took Ashlee's advice to come and read this. Can't wait for more Spuffy!
Date: 12/18/2004 - 07:13 pm Title: Unbelievable
He gave up way to soon! he should have gone downright on to his knees to be for forgiveness. Ahh the Spuffiness ended so quickly! But the angst has me caught in the Spuffy trapt and I can't wait for more!
Date: 12/18/2004 - 06:25 pm Title: Unbelievable
great chapter! and the hell happen to her boyfriend!
Date: 12/18/2004 - 02:56 pm Title: Unbelievable
great job......
Date: 12/18/2004 - 02:21 pm Title: Appointments
wonderful job......really liked false pretenses too.........
Date: 12/18/2004 - 09:55 am Title: Unbelievable
*pouts* Well, that's no good! everyone has a big ole case of "foot-in-mouth". Poor guys! Good chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Date: 12/18/2004 - 03:31 am Title: Unbelievable
Sorry, but Spike is being an ass. Not so much about the STD thing, but about the Miss Kitty thing. And then using the key she gave him after she obviously didn't want to let him him. I'd be asking for that damn key back. Except that it is Spike and probably not.
Author's Response: In theory, I'd seriously ask for the key back, too, but I'm such a pushover that I'd probably let him keep it...and yeah, he is being an ass
Date: 12/18/2004 - 02:58 am Title: Unbelievable
I'm sad now
Date: 12/18/2004 - 02:57 am Title: Unbelievable
GREAT CHAPTER!! WHY DOES SPIKE ALWAYS HAVE TO PUT HIS FOOT IN HIS MOUTH? HOPEFULLY HE'LL MAKE IT UP TO BUFFY IN THE NEXT UPDATE. KEEP UP THE GOD WORK.
Date: 12/18/2004 - 02:10 am Title: Desktop Romp
One word: YUM!!! Well, actually that's 3 words total. And that was 9. And now it's up to 13. Oh great, now it's 19. 24. Crap! 26. Better break the cycle. 31. Bye! 33.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 11:50 pm Title: Desktop Romp
Happy B-Day! Hank's office was very naughty. I do so love naughty stuff. I'm eager to find out what happens next, so get those nasty exams out of the way. Update soon.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 02:15 pm Title: Desktop Romp
Happy Birthday! I loved it; Buffy being nervous and babbling baout Harmony and whole speach before sex thing.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 11:56 am Title: Desktop Romp
Good story so far! Can't wait to see what happens next! Will Hank notice anything "different" about his office? lol! Also... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Date: 12/17/2004 - 10:19 am Title: Desktop Romp
I don't get it... her dad's desk? Trying to get back at Dad?
Author's Response: I knew I wanted it to be in Hank's office, but the desk...well, I figured why not? I guess a little bit of the reason was to get back at Hank, but the other part...I thought it'd be more interesting that way.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 05:03 am Title: Desktop Romp
Since when does the birthday girl gives presents to people? Huh? lol Happy birthday Allison, and thanks for the NC-17 action. That was great. Go easy on the angst love, I'm getting a little tired of reading drama in every fic ::pouts:: Gmme some lovin man! lol I think I'll have to write something horribly fluffy to make myself feel better. But I trust you. Love your fic. Good luck on the exams!
Date: 12/17/2004 - 04:22 am Title: Desktop Romp
Great chapter Allison. I really like how you didn't have them jumping into anything right away when Buffy proposed sex in her dad's office. Spike's reluctance just shows his character. I am intrigued by the fact they didn't use protection, but you said it will be addressed so I will wait to see what happens. Happy Birthday, btw! I hope it was a great one!
Date: 12/17/2004 - 04:21 am Title: Desktop Romp
absolutely loved the updates
Date: 12/16/2004 - 05:02 pm Title: Go To Your Room
*giggles* lets go to my dad's office instead.....I love it. And so appropriate ;) Oh and a HUGE happy birthday sweetie. Probably early but hey.....still counts. Have a great one!
Date: 12/16/2004 - 07:38 am Title: Go To Your Room
Great chapter. But wow odd couple Hank and Harmony! I cant wait for the next chapter.
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