Hmmm, very very nice and romantic almost in a Romeo and Juliet kind of way. I hope that doesn't mean the last of Spuffy. Will Joyce continue to let her daughter date a older man. Oh so much you can do with this story and I can't find out in which direction you are going.....

I loved it how it turned from sweet to hot. Althought the hotness was also sweet. But in a hot way. You mushed my brains. I would love to read more sex, but it's not necessery. I love this piece of fic.