Date: 05/15/2005 - 05:20 am Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
i like this story and all, but it's too upsetting for me right now, i can't read anymore knowing that buffy is getting an abortion and that spike is okay with it, i don't believe in that, sorry, other than that the story is okay, i just need to find something with less angst.
Author's Response: There is no need to apologize. I respect your decision. Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Date: 05/15/2005 - 04:19 am Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
I just found this stroy and i've read all u've wrote so far, I love it.. butyou keep typing "want" when i think you want to say "wont" i've noticed that a lot... but its a great story plz update soon
Author's Response: You are absolutely correct. Thank you for pointing that out to me. I will it a point to watch that in my future writing. I'm glad you liking the story. Thanks for the feedback and the review
Date: 05/15/2005 - 03:35 am Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
I feel bad because i found this fic and read it right through without leaving any reviews so i hope this extra long one will make up for it :) I know that Cordy is supposed to be her bf so i dont understand why she looked down on buffy so harshly for being with Spike. I know she asked her not to go with him but that wasnt her place, a bf should encourage a friends happiness. I know she's friends with Faith but faith and Spike werent even dating, they where fucking a ton of other people. I hate people who have "open" relationships mutually but then freak out. It doesnt make sense to me. Cordy should have been there for Buffy esp. when she found out what Faitth did at the Doublemeat palace. Im so glad that Spike seems to have changed his ways even though i dont like the whole Dru incident. I feel bad that Buffy is getting an abortion but sometimes (in my opinion of course and im sorry if it offends anyone) its the only thing someone can do. I know someone who 'had' to get one and shes the strongest most wonderful person i know, not a monster like some people think people who have abortions are. This fic is absolutely mind blowing and i cant wait to read the rest once its posted. Im so happy that i found it, you are incredibly talented. BTW its 'nice' to see a fic where she doesnt keep the baby, in most fics it all magically works out evn if they are both too young and not close to ready. Good job, i cant wait to see where this gos and what happens after the abortion in terms of how Buffy handles it seeing that spike is suposed to be leaving!
Author's Response: This is the longest review I have ever received. First, let me say thank you for taking the time to leave such a nice one. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Yeah, that whole Cordy situation was bad but hopefully they will find their way back to each other again. God, you are so right about those couples and their "open" relationships. They are so full of s**t. The whole abortion thing is delicate and I know some people who have gone through it. Its all so sad. Boy the next chapter. I've already started writing it and I'm finding it a bit difficult but I'll get through it. It may take a while to post it. Thanks again for the wonderful review.
Date: 05/15/2005 - 03:26 am Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
oh please let them keep the baby
Author's Response: These fics have a tendency to write themselves. I can't make any promises. Thanks for the review. Keep reading
Date: 05/15/2005 - 01:56 am Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
I really love this story and I'm glad Buffy and Spike made up, but I really hope they keep the baby . . . . anyway, can't wait to read more so please update again soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review Jessica. I had to keep them together. Its the spuffy thing to do but not without some difficulty. Unfortunately there is more to come for these two. They got to pay that karma bill. I'll try to update soon.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 10:44 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
It was really cute that Spike was dreaming of Buffy when Xander was fixing his arms/shirt. I'm so glad they sorted things out about Dru and the other stuff that happened the day before; and that Spike will be with Buffy for the appointment (I hope he keeps his promise). =)
Author's Response: He would be a jackass if he doesn't. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Everything is working out for them for now. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/14/2005 - 10:31 pm Title: The Gang's All Here
Sounds like a fraternity party... someone holding up the bathroom line...and the guys clapping as they walked down the hall.. such a guy thing.
Author's Response: I know. I've been to a few in my day. I thought it was perfect to put it in the story. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/14/2005 - 10:14 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
i wonder what buffy is gonna do about the baby. is she gonna be able to go through with it???? Keep up the great work. i love this story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still reading and liking the story. The subject is so sensitive and I wouldn't be surprised if I got flamed. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/14/2005 - 10:08 pm Title: Friends With Benefits?
Ugh... Bad Boyfriend Spike.. tell her after..hope he's just playing macho for Xander. Guess I will see in the next chapter.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 10:05 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
Even though I'm against the idea of Buffy having an abortion because I really think they'd make good parents and that they could work things out between them, I'm not going to leave a flame or anything because I know how you write and I know that you won't let me down. It's good no matter what that Spike will support her no matter what and that he didn't sleep with Dru. It'll be interesting to see what happens in the next chaper and if Buffy changes her mind.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback Allison and not flaming me. i know this is a touchy subject. I'm glad this chapter didn't turn you off. The next chapter will be interesting. Thanks for te review
Date: 05/14/2005 - 10:02 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
Seems like Buffy and Spike are still together - yet. But too sad she won't keep the baby so far... We'll see what else will happen.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 09:54 pm Title: Right Girl, Wrong Time
Oh my - such a sad chapter... I missed 2 chapters, gonna to read the next one, too.
Date: 05/11/2005 - 07:59 am Title: Right Girl, Wrong Time
great update but i hate the fact that dru had to come along and ruin things for buffy and spike...i hope that they make up soon....otherewise i wil be so upset
Author's Response: I think this is the most you have written in a review. This chapter must have ticked you off a little bit...LOL Buffy and Spike are having some karmaic situations right now but if its meant to be its meant to be so keep reading and find out. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/11/2005 - 05:37 am Title: Right Girl, Wrong Time
Have I mentioned lately how much I despise Dru? OR how much I want to slap Xander at the moment? And for that matter Buffy for waiting to tell him? LOL Can ya tell I'm PMSing? Just want to commit violence on everyone. Great chapter...just choc-full of plot bunnies.
Author's Response: Well you don't have to worry about her anymore. She's done her damage. As for Xander, yeah that was a sh***y thing to say guys huh? I can tell you're a little pissed but its okay and I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/10/2005 - 08:39 pm Title: Right Girl, Wrong Time
Xander's line about Faith was mean, and Spike's reaction was predictable, but it still hurt to read. He has to realize she's just as freaked out with the situation as he is. And Dru is a vapid hoe who doesn't deserve to know the love of Spike- poor Buffy for having to see Dru with Spike
Author's Response: Allison you sound pissed. I wrote that about Faith because unfortunately some guys feel that way. Yeah I had to throw Dru in there. She appeared in the beginning of the story. I almost had him with Faith but I've had enough of her. Now keep in mind Buffy THINKS he was with Dru. No doubt because of what the bitch said. I will be updating soon. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 05/10/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Right Girl, Wrong Time
Oh no! Wrong place wrong time! Eeek! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, It sucks doesn't because its so true. I smell karma. New update coming soon. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/10/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Right Girl, Wrong Time
Just started reading this, and omg!!! So good, so sad! I can't believe everything that is going on. Buffy pregnant, Spike leaving, misunderstands, evil Dru in the mix... I totally support Buffy's decision but it would be so tragic if things didn't get cleared up before Spike leaves in two weeks. =(
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. There is a lot going on but I promised drama..lol Thanks for the review
Date: 03/11/2005 - 11:26 pm Title: Bad Timing
loved the updates but i wish we could have seen her tell him that she's pregnant so we could see his reaction
Author's Response: She is going to tell him in the next chapter. It will certainly put his love for her to the test. Thanks for the review
Date: 03/10/2005 - 08:58 pm Title: Bad Timing
I won't flame too. Well, I hope Buffy gets a chance to tell him ... if he get te job, what then? ... I'll waiting for the update to find out.
Author's Response: Always thinking ahead Cordy but I will tell you this. You will definitely get your answers. Thanks for the review
Date: 03/10/2005 - 07:51 pm Title: Bad Timing
No flaming.. promise. =D I just wish Buffy had told Spike. *sigh* More twists!! Good twists... so yay! I have NEVER heard of pairing Kendra and Faith.. interesting. Anyway, please update soon!!
Author's Response: So far so good on the flames. I thought Kendra and Faith made a hot pair. Thanks for reviewing
Date: 03/10/2005 - 07:37 pm Title: Bad Timing
I think that you should have Buffy tell Spike soon, like within the next few chapters. I think that you are doing great. Keep the updates coming. Good luck.
Author's Response: I promise to not drag it out..trust me on that. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. The next few chapters are going to be pretty draining. Thanks for reading and leaving me a review. I really appreciate it.
Date: 03/10/2005 - 07:22 pm Title: Bad Timing
I don't want her to get an abortion, and I have a feeling Spike wouldn't like the idea, either. Quite a nice movie role he landed:) I wish Buffy would've told him...yes, I'm a procrastinator, as well, but I don't know if it's a good idea to keep news like that to myself for too long. And poor Anya- to be 16 and have a decision like that to make.
Author's Response: Things are going to be a little rough in the next few chapters. Peoples lives are really about to change. Thanks for the review
Date: 02/26/2005 - 11:43 am Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
Great chapter. Very sexy & romantic. Oh...and can I volunteer to kick Faith's ass...please?
Date: 02/26/2005 - 05:50 am Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
that is soooo sweet! What a true romantic!
Date: 02/26/2005 - 02:17 am Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
I'm really enjoying this fic & I can hardly wait for more! God - Faith's really insane, isn't she lol!!! anyways, please, please update as soon as you get a chance.
Author's Response: Good and I hope you still feel the same way with the next few chapters. There is more drama to come. Thanks for the review
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