Date: 12/29/2004 - 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 3 - One Heart, Two Heart, My Heart, Yours
The grammar is little off and the timeline got me really confused. First they killed Cordy and then they killed her again? I guessed there was flashbacks, but they got mer eally confused. But I like the plot and I believe that this could really be a great fic.
Date: 12/28/2004 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 3 - One Heart, Two Heart, My Heart, Yours
Okay, it occurs to me that that may have been a little harsh in tone. I'm sorry - my cat just did a death scene straight outta Shakespeare, very traumatic, and I may not be in the right frame of mind to be reviewing anything. Sadly, I meant what I said there, but I didn't mean it to come off so hostile. I really appreciate you offering your story to us and want you to continue to write this one. Just, you know, fix it up a little bit. Thanks, and Merry Christmas, etc....
Date: 12/28/2004 - 06:58 am Title: Chapter 3 - One Heart, Two Heart, My Heart, Yours
haha nifty lil graphix...
Date: 12/28/2004 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter 3 - One Heart, Two Heart, My Heart, Yours
Love the chapter!