Date: 02/02/2005 - 06:25 pm Title: ch 4
That was really wonderful. Poor Spike, poor Buffy, poor Joyce. I wonder how Riley will react. Just really makes you wonder how they will be able to defeat Glory. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I do want to clarify that I had Riley die, though. Maybe you should check out chapter one again.
Date: 01/25/2005 - 03:58 am Title: ch 4
This is coming along beautifully. :-) More please?
Date: 01/24/2005 - 04:44 am Title: ch 4
spuffiness to be resumed again I presume?
Date: 01/24/2005 - 03:36 am Title: ch 4
Normally I'm not huge on baby stories, they come off false. But I really really like this. Very believable.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 01:40 am Title: ch 4
You should be proud of how it turned out. This was a wonderful chapter. I love how you dealt with Buffy's range of emotions and reworked the events of FFL for this piece, using the stake stabbing as the catalyst for Buffy to connect to her baby. And the Spike moments were equally well developed and compelling. Then adding on top of Buffy's situation with a) being pregnant and b) it being a non-tradition, slayer related pregrancy, she has to deal with her mother's disappointment. Reminds me of the times pre Joyce knowing Buffy was the slayer and Joyce being disappointed in Buffy for her supposed bad behavior. More soon!!
Date: 01/23/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: ch 4
Yes, it's a good chapter!
Date: 01/23/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: ch 4
please tell me how much longer until she tells him that the child is his and not rileys
Date: 01/23/2005 - 06:29 am Title: ch 4
i would be proud too!!! it was a beautiful piece poor buffy she really carries the weight of the world on her shoulders and nobody helps her nor understands her please more soon thanx
Date: 01/23/2005 - 04:00 am Title: ch 4
I really like the story so far, but I hope Joyce mellows out a bit.