[Report This]Date: 12/30/2005 - 09:20 pm Title: Just a Girl
It was amazing, you could not have guessed it was your first sex scene. It was excellent.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I remember being very nervous about that a year ago, so it's very nice to hear good things about it :)
[Report This]Date: 07/02/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: Just a Girl
Putting a disclaimer in the middle of the story really interrupts the flow! Please don't do that! It makes the story seem less than it is...
Author's Response: Ok, I think I changed that, but I'll double double check, lol. Suffice to say, I am no longer smut-shy. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:43 am Title: Just a Girl
I think you did a good job on your sex scene. NOthing ot be worried about. I know how hard they are to write though. Have courage that you did a good job. {Smiles} Sex scenes come in all different types just as stories do. Yours had a nice mix in it. {Heads for the last chapter that is available for her to read right now}
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and the review!
Date: 04/01/2005 - 05:27 am Title: Just a Girl
Insatiable little lust bunnies. Have to say, that was a pretty hot start to your writing of sex scenes. But I really love the way you've handled the whole Dawn/Joyce relationship with both Buffy and Spike. And Xander screaming like a girl, Priceless. :)
Author's Response: I might have to use that phrase, lol. I'm glad you like the whole Dawn/Joyce attitude towards them :) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/31/2005 - 08:29 pm Title: Just a Girl
first off great writing the scene it was really good. ne ways i love this story ad im happy about how its progressing but i wonder wat leannas up to. i love this story its written so well and is very creative. please update as soon as u can i cant wiat to see wat happens in the next chapter thanx
Author's Response: Aww what a great compliment :) I try to write it as well as possible, lol. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/31/2005 - 02:35 pm Title: Just a Girl
I loved it - believe me we don't all need every little detail spelled out with "nonclinical" words to describe body parts - if I want mega smut - my mind can produce it just fine. I thought the scene was VERY HOT and VERY SWEET (looks like you have to stay and write another one before the end of the tale). Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for being brave and sharing the tale and the sexy scene!
Author's Response: Aw thanks! Yea, you make a good point, but I'll also be trying to work up more nerve for a few more details. I don't ever want to write smut that's useless to the storyline, so I'll be trying to keep a balance. I think I do need another one also, lol. Not a problem now ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/31/2005 - 10:28 am Title: Just a Girl
sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/31/2005 - 06:43 am Title: Just a Girl
I know exactly how you feel about the Writing of The First Sex Scene. I was beyond nervous, but it went over well where I posted it. And yours is hot! Have no fear! You can breathe easy because I have you given you my seal of approval *hands over seal* Put it on your wall and enjoy it everyday! It's shiny too! Anyhoo, great chapter! Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad so many people understand where I'm coming from. It's not even like I have a problem reading sex scenes but the writing for the first time is strangely hard. Or maybe just the first step to start...I'm glad you approve! Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/31/2005 - 05:20 am Title: Just a Girl
so is he going to bite her?
Author's Response: Hm, time will tell ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/31/2005 - 03:24 am Title: Just a Girl
i liked it and i loved the way it was written so no runing away for u =P lol
Author's Response: lol, thanks for the review!
Date: 03/31/2005 - 12:41 am Title: Just a Girl
LOL don't be silly...it was amazing!!!
great job...hope you update soon
thanx
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it :D
Date: 03/30/2005 - 10:11 pm Title: Just a Girl
Your metally training did work out for the N17. It's was good. *smile* And I wish Buffy (from the series) would have spoken to her Scoobies like Spike does to Xander.
Author's Response: Thanks :D And Spike is much braver in what he says anyway ~ I just had him hold back before because he was supposed to be in Buffy's role. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:42 pm Title: Just a Girl
that was some pretty hot stuff..... cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:36 pm Title: Just a Girl
You did very well with the sex scene:) I think it really is a matter of being comfortable with writing them, which doesn't always come easily. I loved Dawn and Joyce in the beginning, and the gratuitous Spuffyness was perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yea, you know my dilemma since we've talked about it before. But I sucked it up and did it, and I was amazingly unphased when I wrote it yesterday, so that's always helpful. Now I feel like a big weight is off my shoulders ~ not to mention, braver for the next one ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:13 pm Title: Just a Girl
First sex scene huh? Wait? There is an art to writing sex? ...you put down on the screen nicely. Lovin the story!
Author's Response: Lol, I don't mean an art, but a braveness that I was lacking a few weeks ago. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:02 pm Title: Just a Girl
great sex scene and i congratulate u on your braveness to write it! it was perfect the way it was and i loved it!! cant wait for your next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks :D I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 01:49 pm Title: Just a Girl
Very nice first real sex scene :-) Don't you feel a sense of accomplishment, now that it's completely out of the way? I loved the first (actually most) of the chapter- them acting like teenagers, sneaking around so their parents wouldn't see LOL! Can't help but wonder if you have a meaning for Xander being attacked or it was just the wrong place at the wrong time, but I'll be (semi) patient :-) Excellent chapter with mucho Spuffyness :-) Great job- now...are you still on Spring Break? Go write, woman!!! LOL!
Author's Response: lol, I seriously do. I'm all proud of myself like a big dork. I didn't even think I could make the leap, but I guess I was feelin' brave ;) And I know this is senial, but you should tell me which part it is that you didn't like, lol. Yea I know, sometimes I read a lot into people's words. Thanks for the review!! [ok, ok, I'm going]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 12:53 pm Title: Just a Girl
It was a good first sex scene. Half of the sex scene is the plot before hand. To me it's like fanfic foreplay. You're right. It could have been more detailed or graphic and maybe you'll write them that way someday. But you write amazing UST and implied sex, so there is nothing wrong with a more tame sex scene. I would imagine practive would help you fell more comfortable (hint, hint). So practice on us as much as you need. :)
Author's Response: You help reinforce some good points. I didn't think it was tame, but definitely way tamer than it COULD have been, lol. I thought it was a big jump from what I had them do the first time and I was proud for that fact. Hopefully, I keep getting braver and improve the details ;) I'm glad you think I have an UST factor in there though, because I don't want to be writing empty sex scenes...And about the practice, I'm not sure about this fic, but one of my upcoming ideas will definitely have lots of practice in store ;) Thanks for the constructive review!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 12:21 pm Title: Just a Girl
Oh I hope Xander wakes up and makes up with Spike and Buffy,......and nice hot spuffy naughty scene......
Author's Response: Xander's slowly coming around - he was not as crazy angry when he found out as he could have been, but our Xander likes to be a stubborn guy, doesn't he? lol. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the sex scene. Hopefully, it will keep improving...Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 12:15 pm Title: Just a Girl
Very good chapter and I liked the sex scene too. I hope there will be a little bloodplay too in the future.
Author's Response: Thanks! And if I don't change my mind, there will be a little ;) Though all sex scenes and bloodplay have to mean something...you'll see ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:59 am Title: Just a Girl
Great update. I know what you mean about writing sex scence, they can be quite intimidating. I enjoyed how spike was very take charge in his attitude about his relationship with Buffy versus his friends. Hopefully Buffy is learning something here. :)
Author's Response: Buffy's learning subconciously and consciously, but I have yet to have her sit down and voice her opinions on it because I was saving that for a bit later ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:55 am Title: Just a Girl
I thought the sex scene was perfect!
I love your long chapters. I'm nervous though, worried about those two 'other' beings that did not show up in this chapter. I have know idea who they are, but I'm thinking they are 'not' of the Spike/Buffy friendly.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: Thanks! And yea, I sort of am writing this Spuffy stuff with a sense of oncoming doom, lol. As for the people, one of their names was revealed in chapter 18 ;) [Leanna's now-burnt away page] Thanks for the review!!
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