[Report This]Date: 12/31/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Great, I can't wait to see some Buffy fight scenes
Author's Response: I think I have a couple of those, lol ;)
Date: 05/19/2005 - 05:21 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Yeah! Kick her skanky evil butt! Love the chapter! Really want more! Please? Pretty please?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/19/2005 - 04:46 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
loved the new chapter! very exciting
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Date: 05/19/2005 - 04:27 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
What, Skim a PJ tale? Not on your life, you'll miss all sorts of twists turns, hints and hidden plot agendas! So glad that at least someone gets to knock Leanna around (even if only for a bit?). So is the little magicks guy the "other" pronoun or just some poor lackey L/K is using to her advantage. Hope W & T kick his glowy little magickal ass! More please and your forgiven for lack of S&B interaction by letting B kick L/K across the cave! Nice! More please.
Author's Response: Aww, you know me so well *beams* LOL, I realized today that some people didn't catch a bunch of things in the fic, and I just scratched my head not knowing what to do about it. *shrug* And yes, magic guy = pronoun male, lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/19/2005 - 02:47 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Buffy's all slayer like again. I can't imagine Kerala/Leanna would just completely miss that point. But, hey, makes a much better story for us if she did. And there are still so many unanswered questions. And who's this little Indian guy? Was he obscurely in some earlier chapter? Oh, well. Update soon, answer these questions if you feel like it :)
Author's Response: Well, its not like anyone else has ever tried to reverse the world, lol. She might have just thought the cave changed herself only. Indian guy = unnamed male. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/19/2005 - 12:24 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Oh, how I missed you and your story! YES! To quote Buffy, it's good to be back! Love it. Can't wait for the newest.
Author's Response: Aw! Thanks :D
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:46 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
omg omg omg omg omg OMG.o i cant believe that happened im so happy that she has her powers back. i love this story and im SO happy that u updated. i loved this chapter and cant wait to see the out come of the fight. i really hope buffy and spike win( which they should). i cant waIt for buffy and spike to get together and im so happy that he was afraid of her and that he had the claim to find her. please update as soonn as u can, i cant wait to see wat happens next and read more athnx
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:39 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
omg omg omg omg omg OMG.o i cant believe that happened im so happy that she has her powers back. i love this story and im SO happy that u updated. i loved this chapter and cant wait to see the out come of the fight. i really hope buffy and spike win( which they should). i cant waIt for buffy and spike to get together and im so happy that he was afraid of her and that he had the claim to find her. please update as soonn as u can, i cant wait to see wat happens next and read more athnx
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 10:43 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
hey, I only speed read cause its so good i gotta have it all now. like biting into a sucker rather than licking it...instant gratification, oh yeh. You shouldn't be depressed...its a compliment coming from me. ;) I'm doing my "Buffy is kicking some Leanna ass" happy dance!
Author's Response: LOL, good skimming excuse. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Awe, Spike was an idiot to believe Leanna when she met them, looking for Buffy. Good think that Spike could feel her through the claim. I wonder what will happen with the claim later. AND looking forward to the second part of this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 05:54 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
I didn't skim- I always read your work thoroughly:) Very cool idea about the cave- that should help quite a bit. And Leanna deserves something truly horrible now- I can't wait to see what's in store for her
Author's Response: Thanks Alli :D Your partner in crime is another story. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 05:25 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Great update! The cave is like her real world. Love it. This story is progressing nicely. I hope you are able to update again soon.
Author's Response: Yes, exactly. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 03:50 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
God i love this story
It's been awhile glad you updated
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 02:31 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
no skimming here...... well a lil bit at the beginning though..... but hey still enjoyed the chapter.... *grins widely*
Author's Response: LOL. Well at least you enjoyed it :P
Date: 05/18/2005 - 02:14 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
A fight of epic proportions. I'm loving Xander and Anya, how I miss them, but you brought them back full force, so another great chapter, another reader satisfied :D
Author's Response: Oh good! :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 01:44 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Oh goody! Is Buffy going to kick Leanna's skanky ass now!!!
Yeah!
Glad to see this update,
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: Thanks for the reivew, Spuf!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 01:25 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
No skimming from me :-) But I'm very much hopped up on cold medicine so this probably won't make a lot of sense. So happy that Buffy is 'back' and kicking Leanna's ass- more of that please :-) And I loved- Anya rubbed her hand on his back comfortingly, “I’m gonna miss you.” That cracked me up- poor Xander. Can't wait for the next chapter- going to rest now :-)
Author's Response: Lies! LOL. "What indian guy?" says Ashlee. And I'm glad you liked the line ;)
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:32 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
I read it! I read it! :) Will Spike see her as Leanna now? Will things get better? UPdate!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing ;)
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:01 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Great chapter!! I read the whole thing, no skimming at all! More now please
Author's Response: Devoted non-skimmer :D Thanks!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:53 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
YAY! You updated! Don't wait too long
Author's Response: I won't - revising ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:51 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
nice action in this it moved the plot right along. Not every chapter has to be chock full of spuffy, plot is good too. :)
Author's Response: Yep :) I work hard on non-spuffy as well, but that was just an A/N to the mass ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:27 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
LOL, oh you had better post rather soon, LOL.....great chapter...........
Author's Response: :D As soon as I revise. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:26 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
I really like the chapter over all, but the last 2 lines really made it. I think you should devote half of the next chapter to Buffy kicking Leanna's ass. And make her wear Leanna's face while she gets her ass kicked. Normally I'm not into the fight scenes, but this one I will read blow by blow.
Author's Response: Hm, thanks for the opinion! Helps in the revising :)
Date: 05/18/2005 - 10:24 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Can't wait for part 2. This is so exciting.
lipuff
Author's Response: Thanks! Coming soon :)
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