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Reviewer: 1880girl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2005 - 10:40 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

Angry bitch alarm, there could be blood. Amazing spuffy chapter.

Author's Response: Lol, angry bitch alarm is right. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 07:03 am Title: Anger and Ice Cream

Well, I guess he doesn't appreciate true talent. This chapter was wonderful and not vague at all. Besides... it was and essay draft. Drafts always need work. That's why there drafts... and I know I never spent much time on drafts.

Author's Response: lol, yea I guess I never had a draft GRADED before. Who does that?? lol. Thanks for the encouragement - I ended up kicking ass on the final draft :)

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2005 - 04:45 am Title: Anger and Ice Cream

Firstly - perhaps your "grader" said the story was vague because he/she has no imagination and needs every little tiny detail spelled out for him/her - no doubt a real "wanker." I love your writing and you should go with what your READERS say, not what some putz with a degree and fart crosswise thinks! Keep on writing and thanks for sharing it with all of us!

Author's Response: Thanks for the support! I really appreciate it :) I just got back from another bashing from that t.a. grader. ugh. ..

Reviewer: Heaven Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2005 - 01:51 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

Don't ever listen to anybody about writing, even if they are a professor. In my honors comp my freshman year ( oh god that's been a while now) we had peer edits. All my classmates were, Oh I don't think this is what he's looking for and Oh you should do this and say that and yada yada yada....I didn't change a damn thing and I got an A+ and written on it was "a pleasure to read." I bet none of those assholes got that......Great story plot, Can't wait for a new chapter...:)

Author's Response: Aw thanks for the encouragement! I'm not saying the T.A. didn't have some good critiques but I think he was really overly harsh and petty, grr. Anyway, thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2005 - 12:01 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

Buffy tended to be nicer to spike around Joyce and Dawn too...in the real world; she just didn't around her friends...

Author's Response: *thinks for a moment* yea, you're right. She's not 'nice' but 'nicer' sometimes...Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 11:05 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

loved it

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 10:26 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

Well, I loved it! Looking forward for more - at the moment Spike and Buffy are not fighting. That's good to see.

Author's Response: yea they sure did need a break from all the bickering but of course it never lasts too long ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: samica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 06:30 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

I totally like the fact that Spike and Buffy are not being really mean to each other. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yea I was hoping not to have them yell at each other the ENTIRE fic, even trhough it makes for good tension. I think people get tired of it at a certain point. I can't promise they won't be mean to each other anymore but hopefully I can provide a good balance. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Revello_1620 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 04:57 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

Ohhhh, please update soon ...

Author's Response: lol, I think soon will never be soon enough, but I'll try! Most likely expect it this weekend because I have another paper due :( Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 04:36 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

Great chapter, and no, I don't think Spike was being too nice to Buffy. He acted pretty much the same way she did when she was in her own world. Maybe a little bit nicer, but it fit in the story considering that he's been warming up to her for the past couple of chapters anyway. And don't let one person's opinion kill your confidence as a writer. It's a grader, not God. There is as many opinions out there as there is people. Even the greatest author has received critics and negative comments. Don't ignore critic because it is useful, but don't let it stop you from writing. Well.. unless you get nothing but negative comments, but that's not your case ;) Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks Isabel! I'm glad Spike wasn't too nice and yea, I just think he would be if it were reversed and were 'good.' Luckily, I haven't gotten any negative reviews for the fic so I can revel in them to soak my sorrows for that stupid paper. Thanks for your review!!

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 04:35 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

I think 'the bitch is gone' would have been an approprate title for this chapter LOL! Don't mind me, I'm just doing a little happy dance about Leanna (yep, it carried over from the last chapter). This was a great chapter and you're getting me more interested in the unidentified characters. For a while I thought they were good and then you throw this little twist in there. And don't worry about the grader- there's a huge difference in writing something you love and get enjoyment out of, insead of writing an essay! Loved the chapter and I will be waiting anxiously for the next update!

Author's Response: LOL I was like what the heck do I name this chapter - funny you say that. Originally I set it up so that the mysterious people could go either way because I wasn't sure, but then I had that one epiphany remember? The one where I wrote you some email rant in the middle of the night, lol. Thanks for the long review! I needed the encouragement :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 04:25 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

i really love this story and cant wait to read more. i think the writing of this story is very good and cant wait to read more. please update soon i cant wait to find out wat happes next and want to read more thanx

Author's Response: I'm really glad you like the story so much! Hopefully I won't disappoint in future chapters - thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 03:25 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

Hey! I loved this update...nice Spike is always good to see, and thank god for losing Leanna (for the moment, at least). And don't worry about what grade you got for your writing- you have to remember that what you write here is different than what you turn in for classes, and let me tell you that what you write here is worth an A, my dear. Don't let a teacher/professor get you down because it's not worth the aggravation. But thanks for updating even though you have so much homework:)

Author's Response: Thanks Allison! Your review and encouraging words mean a lot to me!

Reviewer: Essi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 02:56 pm Title: Anger and Ice Cream

You are doing great. Another question... If Buffy is in that universum, then what is happening in the universum Buffy should be? Love this.

Author's Response: sadly, I can't answer that until the end of the fic, lol. But don't expect some kind of crazy world mix around cuz it's really not essential to the main story ;) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 11:15 am Title: Anger and Ice Cream

Thanks for the update! and it was a wonderful chapter! all i can say is take ur time and dont strees urself too much.hope to hear more from ya!

Author's Response: aw thanks so much! definitely helped in the cheering up :)

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