Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:39 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
omg omg omg omg omg OMG.o i cant believe that happened im so happy that she has her powers back. i love this story and im SO happy that u updated. i loved this chapter and cant wait to see the out come of the fight. i really hope buffy and spike win( which they should). i cant waIt for buffy and spike to get together and im so happy that he was afraid of her and that he had the claim to find her. please update as soonn as u can, i cant wait to see wat happens next and read more athnx
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 10:43 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
hey, I only speed read cause its so good i gotta have it all now. like biting into a sucker rather than licking it...instant gratification, oh yeh. You shouldn't be depressed...its a compliment coming from me. ;) I'm doing my "Buffy is kicking some Leanna ass" happy dance!
Author's Response: LOL, good skimming excuse. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Awe, Spike was an idiot to believe Leanna when she met them, looking for Buffy. Good think that Spike could feel her through the claim. I wonder what will happen with the claim later. AND looking forward to the second part of this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 05:54 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
I didn't skim- I always read your work thoroughly:) Very cool idea about the cave- that should help quite a bit. And Leanna deserves something truly horrible now- I can't wait to see what's in store for her
Author's Response: Thanks Alli :D Your partner in crime is another story. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 05:25 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Great update! The cave is like her real world. Love it. This story is progressing nicely. I hope you are able to update again soon.
Author's Response: Yes, exactly. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 03:50 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
God i love this story
It's been awhile glad you updated
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 02:31 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
no skimming here...... well a lil bit at the beginning though..... but hey still enjoyed the chapter.... *grins widely*
Author's Response: LOL. Well at least you enjoyed it :P
Date: 05/18/2005 - 02:14 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
A fight of epic proportions. I'm loving Xander and Anya, how I miss them, but you brought them back full force, so another great chapter, another reader satisfied :D
Author's Response: Oh good! :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 01:44 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Oh goody! Is Buffy going to kick Leanna's skanky ass now!!!
Yeah!
Glad to see this update,
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: Thanks for the reivew, Spuf!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 01:25 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
No skimming from me :-) But I'm very much hopped up on cold medicine so this probably won't make a lot of sense. So happy that Buffy is 'back' and kicking Leanna's ass- more of that please :-) And I loved- Anya rubbed her hand on his back comfortingly, “I’m gonna miss you.” That cracked me up- poor Xander. Can't wait for the next chapter- going to rest now :-)
Author's Response: Lies! LOL. "What indian guy?" says Ashlee. And I'm glad you liked the line ;)
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:32 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
I read it! I read it! :) Will Spike see her as Leanna now? Will things get better? UPdate!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing ;)
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:01 pm Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Great chapter!! I read the whole thing, no skimming at all! More now please
Author's Response: Devoted non-skimmer :D Thanks!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:53 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
YAY! You updated! Don't wait too long
Author's Response: I won't - revising ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:51 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
nice action in this it moved the plot right along. Not every chapter has to be chock full of spuffy, plot is good too. :)
Author's Response: Yep :) I work hard on non-spuffy as well, but that was just an A/N to the mass ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:27 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
LOL, oh you had better post rather soon, LOL.....great chapter...........
Author's Response: :D As soon as I revise. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:26 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
I really like the chapter over all, but the last 2 lines really made it. I think you should devote half of the next chapter to Buffy kicking Leanna's ass. And make her wear Leanna's face while she gets her ass kicked. Normally I'm not into the fight scenes, but this one I will read blow by blow.
Author's Response: Hm, thanks for the opinion! Helps in the revising :)
Date: 05/18/2005 - 10:24 am Title: And It All Comes Tumbling Down, Part I
Can't wait for part 2. This is so exciting.
lipuff
Author's Response: Thanks! Coming soon :)
Date: 05/04/2005 - 01:07 pm Title: The Player
woah!!! man!! now taht was a twist! waiting for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/04/2005 - 10:44 am Title: The Player
Great chapter. I knew Leanna was somehow resonsible... cuz after all, total bitch. But I wouldn't have placed her as the goddess.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing - glad you liked it!
Date: 05/03/2005 - 01:14 am Title: The Player
Well that explains why you didn't kill Leanna off even after most of your readers begged for her demise at the hands of Buffy and/or Spike. Nice going with the twisty plot. Ok - so let us all stew for a bit, do well on your mid-terms and then dazzle us further with this epic adventure. Thanks for the great tale. Can't wait to find out what other little tricks you and your muse have up your sleeves.
Author's Response: LOL! Yep, I just completely avoided all talks of Leanna-killage. I really appreciate that you actually think my midterms matter, lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 10:38 pm Title: The Player
oh yeh, I feel like a big dork...that's what I get for speed reading. So, perhaps the other Buffy blip is the Buffy that belongs in the reality that Buffy is currently trapped in. Maybe the Buffy blip is in on it with Leanna. Hmmmmm....
Author's Response: Speed reading!?! Lol, just kidding - I admit I am guilty of that sometimes too. But at least you review so I can tell you otherwise - makes me wonder if non-reviewers got it mixed up too...Anyway, thanks for the review!!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 09:09 pm Title: The Player
nice twist. can't wait to read the next chapter, please update and really soon!!! i want to see what happens!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 05:07 pm Title: The Player
Well, I knew she was involved, but I wasn't sure how- the stupid bitch :-) Remember- I request a slow and painful death :-P Hopefully at Buffy's hands, with a good beating from Spike. Now, kick that muse into gear and get started on the next chapter- and PotDS- but you knew that :-) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Maybe one of the weeks after midterms I'll actually listen to you and write 1000 words a day. Ha, unlikely, but I'll give it a try as a return for all the goodies you gave me :)
Date: 05/02/2005 - 06:22 am Title: The Player
NO WAY! I guessed it in this chapter when you mentioned the grey eyes.. but MAN!! How is Buffy gonna get outta this?? Gah!! You MUST update really soon!! Cos I'm dyin' here! Please?
Author's Response: Yes! You caught the grey eyes :D Lol, I'll try but, stupid midterms *kicks it* Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 03:18 am Title: The Player
Well, I knew Leanna was gonna be working for the unexplained evil, can't say I had her pegged as said evil... Quite the wonderful twist, though she should know that leaving Buffy unguarded pretty much ensures that she will escape. Unless, of course, "Leanna" distracts Spike from getting to Buffy, but you wouldn't do that to us... right? And I'm still with GIles, what's up with that other Buffy dot. That certainly isn't normal. Please, update soon. I'm dying to know what's going on!
Author's Response: I plead the fifth :) Thanks for the review!!
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