Date: 04/18/2005 - 07:47 am Title: Unforgivable
In a way a sad chapter (for Buffy), and a funny one (cupcakes) an a chapter bringing the truth ;-) Spike will hopefully stop denying now that he loves her. I wonder if that was a claim or not? Maybe it could help him to find her - if he would hear. But he's so heavy in denial... Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Well, he's a bit less in denial now that Buffy is once again in danger, real stuff this time, not just something we all knew she would get over. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/18/2005 - 06:40 am Title: Unforgivable
heh Giles having to admit Xander is right...Fantastic chap. Really grabbed me in and now I'm chomping at the bit to see where Buffy actually is. Kind of weird to think of Buffy being confronted by her soulless self.
Author's Response: lol, I didn't even know you had started reading! What a nice surprise :) Anyway, thanks for the review!
Date: 04/18/2005 - 04:43 am Title: Unforgivable
I think this entire story is just amazing! I'm totally in love with it
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm very glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 04/18/2005 - 04:07 am Title: Unforgivable
So glad you updated! I wanted to yell at Spike for beign such an ass when buffy was trying to talk to him, but then again, you're right, not like she was ever that nice to him.
Author's Response: Well doesn't he feel like a big jerk now? lol. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/18/2005 - 03:23 am Title: Unforgivable
I can't get behind Buffy being hurt. Sorry, but I always thought that Buffy was as nice to Spike as she could be.
Sorry, please forgive me, but Spike was 'undead, evil and a child of the night, you know?' He said it so many times. Of course, I was a Buffy fan first, a Spike fan second.
Sigh...I know, I'm in the minority here but I can't help it.
I always felt that Buffy, in Season 7, went above and beyond her call of duty to protect and help Spike. If that's not love? What is?
I guess I watched too many convos with Joss at the end of the Dvd's. He made it clear that Buffy and Spike were the 'epic love story' even over Buffy and Angel.
Kind of like Wuthering Heights and all?
Anyway, please keep up the great work! Love it, even if I think Buffy's been punished enough.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: Hurt emotionally that Spike is mad at her? Or you mean my AN at the end? Anyway, as for in the fic, I think she would be hurt if she let herself get into the fantasy world of being so caught up in a relationship like she was with Angel. As for Buffy and how she treated Spike, she was cruel at times, but I always say that Spike was a jerk also. Initially the fic was meant to deal with my issues with Buffy and how she used him, but at this point, it's not about punishing her anymore. It's a pivotal part of how the story resolves, and if she did not have the chip, I would make her kick more ass :) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/18/2005 - 03:05 am Title: Unforgivable
OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please please let him get to her on time and have every thing work out. i cant believe he was so mean to her even after he heard her say i love u, thats so mean. i love this story and am so happy that u updated, cant wait to read more.please update as soon as u can , im dying to see wat the out come is and to see if they get back together. thanx
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and compliments!
Date: 04/18/2005 - 02:58 am Title: Unforgivable
Oh, you have me all on the edge of my seat. I love Buffy's answer that it was real because it felt real and she wanted it to be real. I can't wait for an update. lol. now i'm going to go bug you for an update.
Author's Response: lol, thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked her lines.
Date: 04/18/2005 - 02:40 am Title: Unforgivable
Loved it! And I'm never going to complain about angst. I love it.
Author's Response: Then I won't have to worry about impatient flames from you, lol. I hope. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/18/2005 - 02:36 am Title: Unforgivable
3 Things. 1) Love the cupcake analogy. 2) OOC? 3) excellent chapter, loved it!
Author's Response: Out Of Character. I realize Buffy on the show and Buffy in the fic is different, but you really can't be in character when Buffy was never a real couple with him on the show. And thanks for the compliments!
Date: 04/18/2005 - 02:29 am Title: Unforgivable
Great fast paced chapter.!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Hope it wasn't fast-paced to the point of rushed...
Date: 04/18/2005 - 02:20 am Title: Unforgivable
LOL- I was cracking up at the cupcake analogy and then I got the weirdest case of deja vu and then thought, 'Duh' LOL! Loved the angst in this chapter and the fact that Spike really does care for her (even if he was acting like a jackass when she apologized). Can't wait for the next one- update soon, pretty please, with a sugary Spike on top :-)
Author's Response: LOL, I can't believe you forgot I sent that! How many other cupcake analogies are there? lol, jk. And I decided, you're just trying to make me fail school, between making me want to write more, and giving me too many fics to read. *Evil eye* lol.
Date: 04/18/2005 - 02:19 am Title: Unforgivable
Oh! Fun little cliffhanger! It's sad that Spike won't just stop being stubborn and go for her, and the 'claim' convo between everyone was interesting, as well:) I just hope Buffy will be okay until Spike can come to her rescue
Author's Response: Lol, these days it's like a cliffhanger has been imprinted into my brain as a way to end the chapter. Who can we blame? Ahem, lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/18/2005 - 02:13 am Title: Unforgivable
I love love love this story - please update again soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! I hope I can!
Date: 04/15/2005 - 10:19 pm Title: A Shattered Image
At last they know now that Buffy is right, because she is in the wrong place :) Even if it didn't go well with Spike. I'll cross my fingers that all will turn out well!
Author's Response: No need to cross your fingers, unless you mean turn out well right NOW. lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/13/2005 - 08:43 am Title: A Shattered Image
I want updates, crave them NEED THEM. I love this story sooooooo much and i am on the edge of my seat
Author's Response: lol, did I start making you yearn for them? That's a good thing though! Don't fall off the edge just yet ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/13/2005 - 03:50 am Title: A Shattered Image
Whew! Had to play catch up cause I went out of town. That was an awesome couple of chapters! I love all the info coming to light. Boy their Buffy must really be a bitch. I can't wait to see how you keep both Spikes happy and (hopefully) both Buffy's happy in both dimensions. Thanks! More please.
Author's Response: Well I think of that Buffy as on the same level as Spike on the show at that point. The guy woulda bitched her out too, even if he did love her. Sometimes his looks just make us forget! Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/12/2005 - 09:26 pm Title: A Shattered Image
i'm so in love with this story!! i trust you completely...
so please please update soon!!
thanx
Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm glad you have faith in our lovely couple ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 07:09 pm Title: A Shattered Image
No flames. I promise. I loved this chapter. We need angst every once in awhile, otherwise it's just fluffy.. spuffy... and no I did NOT mean for that to rhyme. *sigh* Anyway, awesome chapter! So the "evil" Buffy was stuck in a cave? She wasn't involved with the real Scoobies? I can't wait for more! Update REALLY soon!
Author's Response: Funny thing is, I never planned for fluffy spuffy but then I couldn't help myself for about 2 chapters or so. Now it's back to the drama! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 03:46 am Title: A Shattered Image
Oh, I do hope that things get better soon. I was starting to get happy, but then we went back down to nothing at the end. At least they know that Buffy is the one that doesn't belong. I hope they realize the true story about her dimension, etc. I hope the next update is soon. Really want to see them get this all straightened out. Good writing though. You definitely have my attention riveted to each upcoming chapter.
Author's Response: It might take a while to straighten out all these issues, but it'll get there ;) Thanks for the review and bear with me!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 03:24 am Title: A Shattered Image
At last the truth is revealed. I'm sure Spike will calm down, he usually does. And a happy ending? Though I completely trust you, I can't help but wonder which Buffy and Spike get to be happy. Does "our" Buffy get to go home or does she belong here, and what's the deal with the Buffy in the cave, where is this cave? Oh, so many questsions, I just love getting the answers. Really wonderful chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response: lol, so many questions make for an interesting read! I'm glad you're not too upset about getting the answers later in the game ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 08:24 pm Title: A Shattered Image
and the walls come tumbling down!
Author's Response: Oh yes ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 06:01 pm Title: A Shattered Image
As long as there is a happy ending i dont mind waht u do to the end of the chapters..... And that is one really pissed of Spike.... cant wait to see hwat's gonna heppen next!
Author's Response: Oh good, then you won't mind the next few chapters ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: A Shattered Image
Much angst. And you say there will be a happy ending? OK, I'm still hanging in there. I guess the point of this is so that Buffy can see what it's like to be Spike. Well, I guess that part has worked out. Now you just need to work on happy.
Great chapter either way. I do have a question though. Was their Buffy in our dimension?
Author's Response: But don't you want to be tortured and find out in a couple chapters? lol. I would hint and say to focus on the part where she showed up all dirty and our Buffy went to a cave for a minute. Shhh, secrets! (and if you never watched conan then you won't get that joke) Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 05:25 pm Title: A Shattered Image
OHHH! Awesome update chica! What is that cave that the other Buffy is in? That spell was amazing! And grr to Spike for throwing Buffy out, even if she has been a b**h for the past few days. update soon!
Author's Response: Oh I'm glad you liked the spell! I thought it might turn out stupid, but I just added in the comedic lines about the cauldron to point it out as silly. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 05:15 pm Title: A Shattered Image
Very exciting chapter! i loved it! I want spike and buffy to be together in the end, but i still enjoy this story as it is! GREAT!
Author's Response: Drama only makes the end much sweeter ;) Thanks for the review!!
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