Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:42 pm Title: A Shattered Image
No flaming here. Just a request for a quick update on your story. Buffy running away is just Buffy. I never really noticed that until you mentioned it. :)) She was always denial girl so...no big.
Adriana
Author's Response: Lol, well I was sort of quick this time, right? Ok only by 3 days but that's like some sort of major accomplishment for me. And yea, Buffy does that so I decided to use that and remind people not to flame me for all the drama in the chapter, lol. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:04 pm Title: A Shattered Image
LOL I wouldn't flame you ever, but even so, the way you ended the chapter doesn't deserve a flame, so if someone sends you one, point them in my direction:) I really liked this! Xander's 'toy' comment was hilarious (did you remember that one after watching "Intervention" the other day?), and all of the emotions throughout the chapter were perfectly written. I'm so excited to read more and see if A) things will work out between Buffy and Spike and B) if she'll return to her rightful dimension
Author's Response: lol, you figured me out! I so remembered that from intervention and I couldn't help but add that in there. I also wanted to get some comedy back in Xander's character to compensate for his utter-jackass attitude at the beginning. He always eventually comes around ;) I'm glad you're liking it and thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 02:54 pm Title: A Shattered Image
Well...I wanted Spike to hit Buffy at the beginning and knock some sense into her and now I'm thinking that Spike will once again be kissing some major ass. He's supposed to love her and he doesn't even take the time to listen to her. The idiot doesn't even realize that he fell in love with this Buffy and not the other one (nice little twist, bringing her back for a moment). And I just realized that I'm making no sense. It all boils down to him being a stupid jackass LOL! Maybe he'll learn eventually. Now, you know what I'm going to say, so should I say it anyway? Start writing! Great chapter :-)
Author's Response: Actually, all that does make sense and is exactly it! I don't know about the kissing major ass part yet, since they are both pretty much at fault, but maybe two way apologies are needed! We'll see ;) lol, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 02:47 pm Title: A Shattered Image
Well, she did tell them at first, didn't she. It's their own damn fault for not believing her. They really shouldn't be mad at her. I hope they stop freaking out and realize that and just try to help her go back. It would also be nice if she started understanding what life was like for her Spike at home and how he felt all the time. Maybe a little wake up call for our favorite Buffster would be nice. Love the story. It's really interesting and has a great plot. Kudos.
Author's Response: Yep! She sure did, those non-believing mockers. Now that the secret is out, she'll TRY to do much wake-up call-ing in order to get out of there ;) Thanks for the review - I thought I lost you back in chapter 3! lol.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 02:40 pm Title: A Shattered Image
OMFG
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 01:45 pm Title: A Shattered Image
Oh sh**!
Well, we knew that had to happen. Just a matter of time. However, it may help Buffy (our world Buffy) to understand her feelings for our world Spike? Yes???
This story is so intricate! I love it.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: Oh good job spuf! Exactly what needs to happen ;) Thanks for liking the fic and reviewing!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 12:38 pm Title: A Shattered Image
Way to toss me around like a bobble head on volcanic rocky roads. I was like aww poor Spike, then it aww poor Buffy, then haha funny Xander, then aww poor Spike, and you leave me with aww poor Buffy. It's so beautiful. More soon please.
Author's Response: LOL. I realized that it ended up to be a ping-pong paddle up in there, but isn't it fun? lol. Ok, maybe not. 'It's so beautiful' - lmao. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 12:08 pm Title: A Shattered Image
This is definitely my favorite fic right now! Awesome chapter, hope you can update soon.
Author's Response: Really?? Wow, thanks! :D
Date: 04/10/2005 - 11:52 am Title: A Shattered Image
Ooh this keeps getting better and better. And definitely no flaming coming from this end. I love angst! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Oh good! Angst-lovers will like the next few chapters ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 11:37 am Title: A Shattered Image
Oh how the emotions blinds them.......the gem in is use and Buffy is the one to find the truth.....I hope someone remembers that.......and this time, Spike made Buffy leave, bad rude man, LOL
Author's Response: Oh he sure is pissed, isn't he? I would say they are both at fault but I made him have the upperhand at the end of the scene because he was so puppy whipped the past few days trying to get her to talk to him ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 11:19 am Title: A Shattered Image
Dang the other Buffy seems Bitchy!
Author's Response: Hehe true. I had to make it a contrast that Spike would notice, plus she's been stuck in goodness knows where for a long ass time. I think regular Buffy would probably be pissed off too. Oh and Spike loved Buffy back on the show but he was still a jerk sometimes ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:53 am Title: The Thin Line of Truth
Oh man ... what a cliffhanger. Don't leave our pair like that ... pleaseee. I hope you update very soon. I was really getting into this, and now I'm all bummed out again. {Sniffles}
Author's Response: LOL, didn't you see it coming? The angst only makes it that much better in the end. I promise they will be right again eventually ;) I guess you are not an angst-lover, huh? lol. Thanks for the reviews! I loved em!
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:43 am Title: Just a Girl
I think you did a good job on your sex scene. NOthing ot be worried about. I know how hard they are to write though. Have courage that you did a good job. {Smiles} Sex scenes come in all different types just as stories do. Yours had a nice mix in it. {Heads for the last chapter that is available for her to read right now}
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and the review!
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:14 am Title: A New Light
I was following this at Sinister Attraction, but you update here more often. I'm glad that I found it here. Now I get to catch up on the chapters. I"m happy to have a few more chapters to read here. {Goes back to reading more}
Author's Response: Thanks for liking it enough to find it! :D
Date: 04/08/2005 - 01:26 am Title: The Thin Line of Truth
The first of teh angst anvils huh? That one was a doozy too! Please update soon!
Author's Response: LOL, yea, hopefully people still remember I'll make it right in the end so they don't kill me. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 04/07/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: The Thin Line of Truth
this story is so amazing!! and buffy so into character!! you did great!! i just love it...never saw that twist coming...
cliffhanger from hell though...poor spike
awesome reading...thanx so much
hope you update soon ;)
Author's Response: Yea, I knew Buffy was a litte OOC because she was sooo agreeable to him. My excuse is that she's in a diff world so it's ok, but some time or another she needed to be stubborn Buffy again. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/06/2005 - 12:32 pm Title: The Thin Line of Truth
Argh! Stupid Buffy making things harder than they are. Well. At least I got the bitey part even if the results were not what I had in mind.
Author's Response: LOL, I remember you as one of the people that pushed for bitey. After thinking it over, I realized it would be a great way for Buffy to jump into denial, because that was always planned. But I knew how mean it was, so I tried to make the bitey as best as I could. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/06/2005 - 04:44 am Title: The Thin Line of Truth
“Besides, even evil wouldn’t disguise themselves in the shape of a heart. How lame would that be?”--Love the line, and though it makes me sad, I love the angst too. Seems like Buffy's common sense may be getting in the way. Stupid logic. Wonderfully sexy, angsty, plot-progressing chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the line! And yes, don't you love angst? It makes the ending sweeter :) Thanks for the review and the compliments!
Date: 04/06/2005 - 04:22 am Title: The Thin Line of Truth
awwww how sad why did she do that thats so mean why cant she except it. ne ways i love this story and cant wiat to read more. please update as soon a sas u can im dying to see wat happens with spike and buffy and a if she gets over her problems. thanx
Author's Response: Buffy sure has issues, but just sit tight ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/06/2005 - 02:56 am Title: The Thin Line of Truth
WHAT DID YOU DO?!!!!! THIS ISN'T RIGHT. PLEASE MAKE THIS RIGHT. I LOVE THIS STORY. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
Author's Response: LOL. It'll all be right in the end, I promise! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/06/2005 - 01:22 am Title: The Thin Line of Truth
the slayer's back!
Author's Response: Yep, is that a good thing or a bad thing? lol. Maybe a little of both. She had to be denial Buffy at some point...Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/05/2005 - 04:21 pm Title: The Thin Line of Truth
Wow, there's always so much to comment on in your chapters! They're so long and filled to the brim with goodies!! This chapter rocked, as do all your chapters. But what happened at the end there?? Why'd she leave like that? Poor Spike!! And I see we have a name for our evil woman. Who's the guy? Update really really soon mmkay??
Author's Response: Thanks! I try to keep you guys entertained so you won't hate me for a week ;) Buffy just got all Buffy on us. I mean, any of us would so be more than willing to play fantasy, but of course she had to eventually be 'logical' which sometimes isn't...Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/05/2005 - 04:18 pm Title: The Thin Line of Truth
uYou've really gotten into the swing of that whole naughty thing... and the plot is REALLY taking off here. Great work! Feed us more!
Author's Response: *hehe* My beta was like: where did this come from?? I guess I'm a fast learner. Hopefully, I'll get a little braver with it soon. Yes, it's plot time! Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/05/2005 - 02:38 pm Title: The Thin Line of Truth
Great update! waiting for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/05/2005 - 01:22 pm Title: The Thin Line of Truth
Wow, sweet, sexy, and mysterious! There are so many questions that need to be answered now LOL And poor Spike! I'm sure this isn't a fun time for him right now:( I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks Allison! I was hoping to do a bunch of a emotions with the chapter and you just made me feel like I did :D Thanks for the review!
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