Date: 03/24/2005 - 02:27 am Title: Something to Prove
hey this has a really good plot so far. and it's just hilarous when she fell through the door. great writing
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! and I'm glad you like the plot and the door thing ;)
Date: 03/23/2005 - 09:20 am Title: Something to Prove
Wheres the next chapter *pouts* I NEED IT!!!
Author's Response: soon! soon! I think...lol. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/23/2005 - 04:48 am Title: Something to Prove
“Have you forgotten Leanna has a soul?”
Xander opened his mouth to argue, but then closed it again. “Ok, good point.”--That was a really good point. Love the belated irony about killing each others lovers, and the fact that they really don't seem too bothered by it anymore. The bit about the hickeys was pretty priceless too, but the absolute laugh out loud bit here was Anya trying to determine Xander's intentions towards Spike. Very, very in with the characters. And this missing spell, and the bit about what Leanna is up to. Definitley smelling some trouble. Really looking forward to it, too. Really wonderful chapter. So glad it's still rocking even now that they're all Spuffy. Great job.
Author's Response: Well is Buffy not bothered because she's not bothered or because this isn't her real world? *suspicious look* lol. Anyway, I'm glad you liked all my little moments in there :D Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/23/2005 - 04:40 am Title: Something to Prove
Since you "put out" such lovely snacks at your charity function I don't mind donating a review. You are intriquing me no end - I feel like a Salmon on opening day - so many lines in the water I don't know where to nibble first! I sure hope when things return to normal SunnyD Buffy remembers how Spike spoke up for their relationship - of course if she's not learning anything - what's the point of the tale? Leann things she's put a damper on things, but I have a feeling you have something up your sleeve to put out her fire! Still wondering about those mysterious pronounces that are plotting (for and/or against) our good guys and now you've gone and thrown a hidden, suspious spell into the mix! You really know how to keep me coming back for more charity functions! THANKS FOR THE GREAT, WONDERFUL, ENTERTAINING, etc, etc, etc tale - I LOVE IT and can't wait for MORE. Please Please Please (but take some well deserved time for yourself as well) oh and the hickey? Nice touch! HUGS!
Author's Response: A mysterious pronoun was revealed in this chapter ;) The clue was that 'female' commented how it took her thousands of years to find said gem and then the page that Leanna burnt talked about a goddess and a gem. And thanks soooo much for all your encouragement and nice compliments :D and the review!!
Date: 03/23/2005 - 04:21 am Title: Something to Prove
love the finding of the spell...I assume it's the missing page!
Author's Response: Oh, a while back, Leanna stole the missing page from the book and that was the one she burned in this chapter. The spell is a diff page ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/23/2005 - 04:03 am Title: Something to Prove
aww i loved this story i just wish giles and xander would get over the buffy being human thing. ne ways i really really hate leanna and i want her to die. please make her die soon. i love this story and cant wait to read more. please update as soon as u can i really want to read more thanx
Author's Response: well, you gotta give giles and xander props for not TOTALLY freaking/flipping out on them, lol. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/23/2005 - 12:22 am Title: Something to Prove
AH! Cliffhanger! Great update. REally loved it! I like how in this world, buffy is able to see who life COULD be in she told her friends the truth. Can't wait for more. Have fun on spring break
Author's Response: Well, there is the fact that in this world she's ALLOWED to like Spike because he's on the good side and she isn't ;) But yes, lessons will definitely be learned! Thanks for the well wishes ~ I need my tan back! Oh, and thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/22/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Something to Prove
Well, I'm glad my "Charity" is amusing... hehehe! That show of lust and affection was really adoreable!! I think I swooned! And that idiot Leanna!! Lemme guess... what she burned, it's the only copy right?? Can she like, maybe, trip and fall off the edge of a canyon? Grand Canyon maybe? That would be spiffy! And go Anya for finding a new mysterious thingy! Know I have more questions to add to my ever growing list.... What the friggin heck is the spell??? Oh! And is the reference to "The Greatest Slayer" referring to Buffy, or maybe a child of Buffy's?? Cos that could explain why they are trying to keep Buffy and Spike apart... OOOO!!! I am on to something here?? Or am I completely looney?? Update REALLY soon ok?? Please??? Pretty please??? I'll give you cookies!!
Author's Response: LOL, two hilarious reviews in a row! As for the plot, I seal my lips! Thanks for the review though!
Date: 03/22/2005 - 11:16 pm Title: Something to Prove
**Ching** (That is the sound of my humble donation). Social life is good, more updates are better! I"ve been following this story from the get-go and yes, this is my first review.
Love it!
Can't wait to see what Leanna has up her sleeve and what the spell in the book means. UPdate soon!
PS: The hickey scene was just too cute!
Author's Response: *jingle jingle* Oh nice! I got some cool change in my donation box ;) And a first review is definitely better than none at all! So thanks for following the fic and for taking the time to review!
Date: 03/22/2005 - 09:31 pm Title: Something to Prove
Oh and the plot thickens and is now taking upon a life of its own.......love the Spuffy and hope Buffy remembers all of this and is able to know the difference between love and lust when she gets back to her reality.....
Author's Response: Sounds like you're following the plot, which is good, lol. I realized with this chapter I have some people turned upside down, but I'll be clarifying bit by bit ;) I'm glad you liked the Spuffy and thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/22/2005 - 09:12 pm Title: Something to Prove
See this just proves me point. Spike was nicer to Buffy than Buffy was to him in the same position. I like this turn of events. And I liked the hickey thing too.
Author's Response: Spike is definitely nicer, or I think he could have been had he been given the chance! Because really, he was a jerk, but he had major potential and sweet moments when it came to Buffy. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/22/2005 - 07:36 pm Title: Something to Prove
Scorchin chapter. Really loved the Anya bit...keep the word "orgasm" comin!
Author's Response: yay! Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm glad you liked the ch! :D
Date: 03/22/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: Something to Prove
Your analogy at the beginning cracked me up LOL! Willow yelling about Xander and Giles taking the sticks out of their asses was great (and something that I very much wanted to see on the actual show)! Loved the conversation about lust vs. affection and the way Spike proved his point. Nice little shout out to all the Spander lovers out there with Anya's question to Xander. And never be sorry about the hickey thing- fluff is always welcome, if it comes in that form LOL! Wonderful chapter, as usual- can't wait to see what else you have planned :-) This review is kind of worded funny, but I'm watching 'The Prom' so I just kept going back and forth and making notes, instead of remembering all the things I wanted to comment on- if you noticed the jumpy sentences LOL!
Author's Response: lol, you nearly commented on every scene - which is a good thing! I don't think the review sounded that weird ;) And my 'non-profit organization' isn't failing at all, but there was a jump down from ch 16 to 17 so I decided to add that in there, lol. Thanks for the review!!!
Date: 03/22/2005 - 06:07 pm Title: Something to Prove
I have to be honest with you, I'm loving this more and more each chapter.
The way Spike explained the difference between love and lust? Wonderful!
I think I'm beginning to see what's going on here, hope I'm right!
Luv, spuf
Author's Response: Aw thanks! I think I'm growing as the chapters go on :D I'm really glad you liked the love and lust thing (though he didn't call it love, those two doofs) because I was happy with it. And as for the plot, I get the feeling people's ideas are all over the place, lol - my words seem to be interpreted in lotsss of ways, but I know you're very plot centered so let me know in the end if you were right ;) Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 03/22/2005 - 05:50 pm Title: Something to Prove
Loved the hickey thing too. And Dawn teasing when she opened the door and Buffy almost fell. And Anya (Xander, are you gay?) And Spikes explanation about the difference of lust and love. So now it's clear thet there is danger for all the slayers... Hope the spell will help and not make it worth (because is was discovered like the first book). Are you planning to make this bitey (for the Bloodshedverse?)
Author's Response: I actually didn't think about they bitey factor - I'll contemplate it for a while. I'm glad you liked the chapter and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/22/2005 - 05:29 pm Title: Something to Prove
I think the hickey thing was great! And Anya asking Xander if he liked Spike was hilarious!! Leanna's a horrible person, but then again, we all know that:) Enjoy Spring break!
Author's Response: I almost didn't have the whole Anya-Xander thing in there! I did it at the last minute the night before i posted ;) I'm glad you liked the hickey thing - wasn't sure if ppl would think it was too cliche but then I enjoyed writing it so I just put it in there anyway. Thanks for the review!! (oh and i went to catch up on reviews for you, lol.)
Date: 03/22/2005 - 08:18 am Title: Sweet Nothings
You're doing great! More more more!
Author's Response: Thanks! and thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/18/2005 - 11:17 pm Title: Sweet Nothings
Well between Leanna and those two plotters that are watching the whole mess with sadistic glee, you've got yourself quite a little adventure here and I am totally enjoying every word! Can't wait to see how everything is going to come to a crescendo. What's up with the ripped page, why is the female voice so set on destroying buffy (or B&S lovin'), what's up with the male voice (he seems kinda benevolent) what other powers are helping/hindering S&B, what does Tara know. Why is Leanna such a bitch (oh well, I guess you really already covered that one). I'm on pins and needles -- more -- please -- quickly! Thanks!
Author's Response: lol, I'm so glad you're following though! Even if it is still ambiguous ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/18/2005 - 06:45 am Title: Sweet Nothings
"Buffy and Spike had acted skittish, but sex was not an obvious assumption for them – they were not Anya."--That is such a perfect line. This was a fun and wonderful chapter. So nice to see Dawn and Joyce so accepting of their relationship. And the mystery about those people and the gem. You sure have me wanting more. Stupid finals. But, do update when you get a chance. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! ;) Don't worry, the mystery about the people is slowly being unraveled until the big showdown or whatever you want to call it. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/18/2005 - 05:00 am Title: Sweet Nothings
what I can't completely understand is who is Leanna supposed to parallel? Riley? Angel? who?
Author's Response: Ah see, Leanna has strayed away from parallels. At first, she was like Riley - in terms of the significant other. But I also planned to have this fic be original plot, since none of this crap ever happened, lol, so Leanna's character is just becoming part of my orig plot storytelling ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/18/2005 - 04:25 am Title: Sweet Nothings
Now Now dont run away ... COME BACK AND TELL US!!!! QUICK or i'll come running after u!! Great chappy, cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/18/2005 - 01:49 am Title: Sweet Nothings
Leanna is part of the plan??? What is the plan??? Who is she gonna hurt??? Buffy??? How??? When??? What's the plan again??? And please give us more details!! And when is everyone gonna figure out that all is not well in Sunnydale??? And are we going back to the real SunnyD?? Will everyone remember what happened in the Crazy SunnyD??? GAHH!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response: LMAO. Ok those are all good questions but I can only answer the first one and say yes. Seriously, your review made me bust out laughing - thanks!!
Date: 03/18/2005 - 01:22 am Title: Sweet Nothings
that was great!! and now for my own question hehe
When is the next update!!! love cant wait for more!!
hollowtear
Author's Response: thanks! hehe it'll be sometime next week, since I have finals, but not more than a weeks time from this one. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/17/2005 - 10:00 pm Title: Sweet Nothings
Did I mention I hate Leanna? I did? You sure? Anyway, still waiting for her long and torturous death, but it's excellent- as always. I just love the sweet Spuffyness in this chapter, even though I know you, so it probably won't last long- I'll take what I can get LOL!
Author's Response: lol, really? I thought she was your favorite character...hm. And shhh it's a secret! lol, let the people dream for now. Thanks for reviewing cuz I'm developing this sulky face as I watch the count go up and no one review!
Date: 03/17/2005 - 07:09 pm Title: Sweet Nothings
It's good you're not leaving answers LOL- that'd be too easy:) Leanna deserves a horrible death, loved Joyce and Dawn in this chapter, Spike's still a sweetheart, and I'm glad Anya knew what was going on between Spike and Buffy- you'd think the others would've jumped to a similar conclusion
Author's Response: Lol, just thought I'd remind people of what questions to be asking ;) I wondered why on the show no one ever suspected that they had a sexual relationship - blind I tell you! But I just had to have at least one person suspect something! And I went with sweetheart Spike because if you take a look at the show, he can be really sweet and protective IF she had given him a chance (like how he treated dru, or how he acted when buffy came back from the dead). ok end rant, but thanks for the review!!
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