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Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2005 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 29: 'Already Knew'

Another great Chapter. please update soon and often . Looking for some answers to what is on that list.

Author's Response: Thank you. I will probably get them to the apartment and open the vanity in the next chapter. I'm debating about revealing all of the contents of the list, but I might! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2005 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 29: 'Already Knew'

I don't blame you for having a little fun with this chapter, especially after writing so many serious and angsty ones before this. I personally enjoyed it and was happy to see that they're going to live together- I'm sure that'll make things rather interesting:)

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm uhm, kind of debating on whether to have them open up the vanity in the next chapter, and, if they do? Read and reveal the contents of the list. It will have to be a long, long chapter! Thanks, luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2005 - 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 28: 'The Key Revealed?'

Wow - very clever! Books of the bible ...

Author's Response: I can still on respond on my office comp! Anyway, thank you. I don't know why but that phrase always got to me! thank you, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2005 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 28: 'The Key Revealed?'

Nope not too corny. Good make up chapter and good mystery chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. If you love angst, however, there will be some later for our duo. They will be in danger, soon. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: pj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2005 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter 28: 'The Key Revealed?'

I just caught up and I must say, lovely marriage twist! Good angst with that and all the making up. And I'm glad Spike finally told Buffy about the key because I've been dying for them to open the freakin vanity lol.

Author's Response: Thanks! I liked the marriage twist because I always felt that Buffy and Spike made such good 'partners' all around in the show. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2005 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter 28: 'The Key Revealed?'

AHA! Thank god that part has been solved:) I think it was really damn clever of you to have that be on the key- major kudos to you! I can't wait to see what's in the vanity...I'm super excited to see what happens next, especially now that the mystery is beginning to unfold!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked the 'clue.' Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Bethy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2005 - 03:45 am Title: Chapter 28: 'The Key Revealed?'

ECCl114 - I wud say bloody brilliant... never thought that's what it wud stand for.

Author's Response: Thanks. Actually, my husband thought it was kind of corny when I ran it by him, but... Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Beranrdette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2005 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter 28: 'The Key Revealed?'

i just knew it . I was sure the vanity was waht the key would unlock. Cant wait to see what is in it. Cant wait to see what is on the list. OH Please update sooner and often. Love this story. YOur are doing great.

Author's Response: Thanks! There will be 'lots' on that list. I'm going to give you a hint (frankly I'm not sure if they'll get to the damn vanity in the next chapter!) anyway: Holden was looking for a little redemption before he was killed. He left some 'info' on the list about Buffy. Seems she meant more to him they anyone could guess? Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 27: 'Never Going To Let You Leave'

Glad they made up :-D Looking forward know to find out more about the key

Author's Response: Yeah, they're going to really make up, next chapter! Thanks Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 05:07 am Title: Chapter 27: 'Never Going To Let You Leave'

Can't wait to see what the key is for. I'm glad they got everything straightened out- very sweet chapter!

Author's Response: The etchings on 'the key' are truly 'the key' to what it opens! Thanks Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter 27: 'Never Going To Let You Leave'

Great Chapter. Loved all the info in this chapter. I think I know what the key goes to but I do not want to spoil it for anyone reading the reviews. cant wait to see if i am right. Glad to see Buffy got the answers she needs. please update soon and often. i must admit secreatly Angel is the bad guy all around and ends up in jail or worse. Please update soon and often. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you, especially for liking the loads of info. Sometimes I think I go into way to much detail and prolong the plot too much? Angel is 'shady' but, he might not be the 'real' baddy of this?!! (tee hee) Thanks Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 02:49 am Title: Chapter 27: 'Never Going To Let You Leave'

Seeing what ends up being the 'four' is going to be interesting LOL And I think the explanation behind the cop's death is more than acceptable- I'm glad he didn't actually do it:) Loved it!

Author's Response: Interesting you should mention that. This next chapter, Buffy will find out about the key, however, I'm having a bit of a block as to how she should figure out what it goes to. Spike, God love him, is a bit clueless because he 'won't' know what the etchings on the key mean. They are important, and Buffy, well, she will know what the words mean...hope that isn't too confusing. Anyway, remember the etchings? They read: ECCLII4 They definitely mean something and Buffy is the one who'll recognize the meaning. She just has to find out about the damn key! (Oh, now that our duo is married and 'helping' each other on this case, I'm going to go with a kind of 'Nick and Nora Charles' theme here. I loved the Thin Man Series and thought having Spike and Buffy do detective work together could be fun! (I might even throw a dog in this!) Thanks Luv, Spuf Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter 26: 'Giving You The Best'

I'm glad he was able to find her and they're going to talk. And wow, Buffy actually took some responsibility- if only she'd done that in the show. Great job!

Author's Response: Yeah, I love responsible Buffy! Thanks, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 26: 'Giving You The Best'

AH so glad to see they got married. hopefully Spike can explain his past And Buffy will realize it is the past and not the future. Please update soon and often

Author's Response: Well, Spike has an explaination for his past. In fact, he's got an explaination for the present. The problem is, Buffy had to decide if she believes him or not. Thanks, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 26: 'Giving You The Best'

It is good that Buffy came to the decision to speek to Will the next day. So it was good that Will is there now. Looking forward to learn what's true about the stuff Angel told Buffy.

Author's Response: I almost went with the old 'missed' connections thingy. Where Buffy left the cottage to go home, Spike misses her and yada yada. Changed my mind. Enough with the angst for Spuffy (for a while that is) Thanks, luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 05:09 am Title: Chapter 26: 'Giving You The Best'

Yes, it's good to see that they're both going to figure things out and not let Angel just ruin everything, the jerk he is. I'd love to be in a cottage on the ocean, so I don't know what Buffy dislikes so much LOL Great job:)

Author's Response: Thanks. It's the loneliness that hurts Buffy. She's usually all alone with her thoughts. That's okay though, Spike's gonna' take care of that! Luv,Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 25: 'The Getaway!'

Wow – what a twist! So they are married now… Told you – secrets have a tendency to come to the light. Even when I doubt that Angel has the whole truth told Buffy (given her to read).

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Angel is not telling the whole truth, he's leaving certain things out, but it's up to Buffy to 'choose' who she wants to believe. (hint: she'll choose right!) Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 25: 'The Getaway!'

Well, I figured he was married and that was another reason why she was so angry, but I like this twist better- although, poor Buffy. Now he better do some serious explaining when he finds her. Excellent chapter- loved the twist!

Author's Response: Oh, he'll explain, will she accept it? Thanks, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Bernardette Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 25: 'The Getaway!'

AS DAwn would say I love it I love iti iloveitiloveit oh great chapter please update looner and often

Author's Response: looner? Am I loony? Well, yes. Anyway, thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying. Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter 25: 'The Getaway!'

Wow- super twists and turns in this chapter! They're married?! Fun little detail to throw in there LOL Poor guy, though- hearing that message from his new wife had to have been heart-wrenching. And he killed a cop?! Poor Buffy! That's not exactly something she'd want to find out, from Angel, nonetheless. Spike really should've told her everything from his past before they got married. Awesome chapter, and I'm happy that Spike's determined to fix things!:)

Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted a real twist of fate here, and something impulsive, something Buffy would not normally do. The next chapter will begin to explain some things. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 24: 'Some Things Revealed'

loved it :) Glad Buffy stand against Angel. I think she won hi hi. Looking forward to read more

Author's Response: Thank you, but I'll warn you: Angel is going to 'do' something that will threaten Spuffy in the next chapters. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 23: 'Won't Let You Down'

Well - even if it's a short chapter - I have another one to read. :-D Glad that Amy was only shot in the arm.

Author's Response: Thank you. Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 24: 'Some Things Revealed'

Loved how Buffy put Angel in his place! Feel free to have her do that as much as possible :-) Great chapter- I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks, I was happy with Buffy's convo with Angel too! However (spoiler for next chapters) Angel is going to pull a bad stunt and hurt Buffy with something. Spuffy will get angstsy. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 23: 'Won't Let You Down'

How did I miss two chapter? Well, I'm getting caught up now and I was so glad that Buffy put Xander in his place for taking Angel's side. Great chapter!!

Author's Response: I don't know? Don't you just love it when Buffy yells at Xander! Thanks Luv Spuv

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2005 - 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 24: 'Some Things Revealed'

GREAT Chapter. Hopefully the key will find its home. Cant wait to see what is on the list. OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND OFTEN PLEEEASSSEEEE

Author's Response: Thank you and I will be updating again tonight (2/25) or tomorrow. Luv, Spuf

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