Date: 01/26/2005 - 12:47 pm Title: Epilogue
Aw, I will miss it. The kids are adorable and i am so glad Mr.Gordo is still around u made him a great character, even though he ia a cat.
Author's Response: thanks, I missed this the minute I finished it!
thank luv, spuf
Date: 01/26/2005 - 12:36 pm Title: Epilogue
it was great
Author's Response: Thank you!
Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/26/2005 - 12:23 pm Title: Epilogue
I really liked the ending. The epilogue was sweet, but almost seemed a little too busy. Might be better suited to a sequel (hint hint). I love the trip these two took and I love the fact that it wasn't easy or perfect. Great story.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Yes, the epilogue was rather long, I know.
Thanks,
Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/26/2005 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 25: 'No Contest!'
Awww. thats so sweet. He still has his money though doesn't he? He has been saving a nd earning for years.
Author's Response: Yeah, I suppose he's got a dime or two!
Thanks,
Luv Spuf
Date: 01/26/2005 - 06:51 am Title: Chapter 24: 'Bridges'
Aww, thats soo sweet, like sugar. This chapter is short compared to your marvelous normal ones though. Nice touch with Mr Gordo
Author's Response: Thank you.
Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/26/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter 24: 'Bridges'
I hope next you have the talik they have been needing to have!
Author's Response: Thanks
Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/26/2005 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter 24: 'Bridges'
GrrrAhhhhG!!! I still cannot respond on my home comp! Anyway, I wanted to hop on and especially answer 'Mac's' inpupt... Hint, Yes, William/Spike has changed, but not completely as will be shown in the next chapter and epilogue. Actually they are written, edited and ready to submit, I'm was just going to wait until tomorrow AM/PST to do it. Buffy is definitely stronger and more in charge of her own life, although she does love Spike/William totally. I have to admit, when I published this on another site, this last chapter 'Bridges' was one of he most controversial ones. There was two sets of opinions on how I wrote the characters in the end. One camp felt I had turned Spike into a bit of a 'wimp' while one camp felt I had Buffy relent to easily. I felt, myself, and it is up to the readers to decide, that I had met some happy medium with the couple. That they could go on, make a life together and still embrace all aspects of their families and own personalities. I will definitely submit the last chapter and epi tomorrow morning before I go to work. (I leave my house at 6:00 AM PST so it's early!) Thank you, Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/26/2005 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter 24: 'Bridges'
Wasn't sure where you were going with this tender reunion, but am glad you ended where you did. Now, how much has really changed? And will she believe him? I think she wants to - maybe wants to more than is good for her really - so it may not take much to convince her. Hmmmm....He's still too freakin' possessive to be a healthy partner, and super control freak is just an irritated moment away. Until he can let her do what she wants to do without attacking her motives and her intelligence for even having a mind and desires of her own, he'll still be a rather dangerous partner to have. But she's proven she is hopelessly drawn to him in spite of traits that might make another woman smack him and walk away forever, so who knows what she might do next. .....Oh, right. You do. Don't keep us waiting too long for the big denouement. Thanks for the frequent updates. :-)
Date: 01/26/2005 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter 24: 'Bridges'
loved it!!! keep up the great work. i'm glad he went to go see her.
Date: 01/26/2005 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter 24: 'Bridges'
awesome chapter. you did a great job with them meeting again. awesome writer!
Date: 01/26/2005 - 01:03 am Title: Chapter 24: 'Bridges'
This is a great and almost peaceful chapter. Very sweet. The story is shaping up so well. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 01/25/2005 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 23: 'A Mother's Insight'
I'm so glad that there'llbe Spuffiness coming up! Can't wait!
Author's Response: Thank you, next couple of chapters, for sure.
Luv, spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 23: 'A Mother's Insight'
loved it!!!
Author's Response: thank you!
Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 23: 'A Mother's Insight'
You wrote this chapter just fine.......
Oh and I like the fact that you post two chapters in one day :)
Keep up the good work......
Author's Response: Thank you,
Luv spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 07:22 am Title: Chapter 23: 'A Mother's Insight'
since Jenny will telll him where Buffy is i hope!
Author's Response: Spike has finally realized where Buffy is. Now he must go mend their bridges while he still can.
Thanks,
Luv, spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter 23: 'A Mother's Insight'
i love this story and i hope that you will continue to update this story, i love it!!!keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you, I will.
Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 04:36 am Title: Chapter 23: 'A Mother's Insight'
Excellent turning of events. Wanting to change and changing are two entirely different things though. And changing your basic personality is almost impossible. Spike/Wiill has a very big mountain to climb before anyone could reasonably trust him to act properly toward Allyson and stop treating her like property he owns. Because if she goes back to soon she's condemning her babies to the same temper tantrums and control freak imperiousness that made her leave in the first place. Sometimes loving someone just isn't enough to overcome those kinds of deep problems. Well, I guess we'll see what you do with em now. Thanks for the update tonight.
Author's Response: Thank you.
I wanted to emphasize that Spike was always more of 'William' deep inside. This destiny of his was rather pushed on him amd Buffy helped him realize that other things in life are more important then money, power, etc.
Now, if only, when Spike does go to Buffy, he can convince her that he has changed and will continue to grow into the kind of man, husband and father for their children, that they want him to be.
Thanks again,
Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 23: 'A Mother's Insight'
great talk from jenny. thanks for updating so much. not many writers do n its nice to have two chapters instead of one. makes it a better story to read. great job.
Author's Response: Thank you, I often wonder if I update too much?
Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter 23: 'A Mother's Insight'
I thought Jenny was great. And I thought that Spike did really well also. I think you need to show Rupert just a tad more scared or sorry. Maybe have Jenny leave him for the weekend or something. Let him sweat it out.
Author's Response: Rupert is in deep, but we'll have to assume Jenny handles him quite well herself!
Thanks
Luv, spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter 23: 'A Mother's Insight'
great chap!!! more more i added this story to my favs(grins)
Author's Response: Thank you.
Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 22: 'This Is Getting Ridiculous'
Come on Jenny. Kick some ass. What have you got to lose by now? If you'd stood up to your husband years ago, maybe your son wouldn't have grown into the man he is. This is your chance to fix it... I have faith in you. Go Jenny! (yes I do talk to the television as well).
Author's Response: She's quite a gal, Jenny.
And full of surprises.
Thanks,
luv, Spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter 22: 'This Is Getting Ridiculous'
Loved the chapter - babies!!! not baby? Guess they're having twins! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Yup, twins.
I almost always do twins in Spuffy!
Based on the comic 'Fray'
thank you,
luv Spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter 22: 'This Is Getting Ridiculous'
great chapter as always. im glad jenny finally stood up n said somethin, giles was startin to get on my nerves.
Author's Response: Thank you, now, if Spike just goes with that and find Buffy himself.
Luv, Spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter 22: 'This Is Getting Ridiculous'
Your still amazing anyway. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Luv, spuf
Date: 01/25/2005 - 12:03 am Title: Chapter 22: 'This Is Getting Ridiculous'
I'm in no rush for you to finish it. Only two chapters left, oh well. I notice you kept mentioning babies. This chapter got me to thinking. When Buffy was in England and she was having those dizzy spells, she really was pregrant right? Enjoyed the chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Yes, babies...
twins.
thanks, Luv spuf
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