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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2012 - 10:34 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

Needs some editing, but decent plot (ending could use some fleshing out)...

Reviewer: riz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2012 - 01:28 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

this was wonderful!!

Reviewer: Cate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2008 - 12:22 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

My Gosh! I absolutely love this story and you ended it absolutely perfectly! Well Done!

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 08:42 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

Wow. This was an amazing story. I loved how you ended it. No crazy sex scene (though those are good =]) Just silence. You are an Amazing writer. Can't wait to read another of your stories!!

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2007 - 12:13 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

A nice story - there were many places where I wanted to see the missing scenes. The plot often took giant leaps into the future and I missed seeing some of the details. That just confirms it was a good story. If it wasn't , I wouldn't have wanted to read more about the parts in betweeen.

Reviewer: Q Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 - 04:05 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

The phrases you used - even in your little A/N's like the best friends sitting next to you in jail motto - are really touching and meaningful. Nothing cheesy about this! You ended it perfectly. The progression of feelings seemed a little abrupt but after the love was set in place, it worked out nicely from there. Very beautiful story.

Reviewer: pintsized_bite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2007 - 08:11 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

stumbled across this fic and really enjoyed it.
loved the way buffy used drawing to relax
liked it so much that i read it in one hit...well part from when i went to dinner. great story *thumbs up*

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2006 - 05:33 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

Nice but it need a better enging

Reviewer: Kill_Pineapples Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 02:58 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

Uhm...almost a year later another review. Surprise! Anyways, I stumbled upon this fic and I read it all at once. I loved it! Sometimes a bit cheesy, but the sarcastic comments and all that evened it out quite nicely. And if you have the same taste of music like Buffy in this fic and I think I would quite like you in person ^_^ Anyways, enough with the rambling. I love it! I said that twice.... whatever.

Reviewer: angie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

God I just read this story from start to finish in one go...how old are you anyway 11...I couldnt believe it..it just never got any better...ridiculous plots...and all the crap about your boyfriend..hello...hes an idiot who needs to be dumped..please tell me that next time you will write a story that will suit an older...like over 12 age group..:(

Reviewer: GrapeGirl4823 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2006 - 03:32 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

Ok So i'm in love with your storys. The way you flow with it rocks my world.
I'm a five years older than you but I so want to be you when I grow up..seriously enamored!
Keep up the kick ass storys!
Rachael
GrapeGirl4823@aol.com

Reviewer: claudia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2005 - 02:24 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

:D beautiful... off to read another of your fics now.. hehe spuffy love forever! thanks for writing

Reviewer: Briana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2005 - 11:48 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

wow fukin wow!! that was great!! luved it!! it was so great!! wow! lol. omfg!! i can't get over it.. It was great!

Reviewer: baby_goofy1999 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2005 - 02:17 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

Okay, I have a younger sister so the way Buffy was with Dawn's little guy friend was so understandable. It made me laugh so much because I would do the exact same thing. In fact, I have. It was a great stort. Cheesy-ness and all.

Reviewer: 1880girl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 11:09 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

Awesome Hollywood Ending, started of really sad ( made my heart weep) but in the end it was amazing. Five stars for a very powerful and well wrote story!!

Reviewer: Stine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2005 - 11:59 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

I am sorry but after eveything that happend in the story i think we all deserve a better ending. Don´t get me wrong but come on that was really a bad ending to say it civil. The writing was good but i am really disapointet over the ending.

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2005 - 09:58 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

YAY!!!!! you've made buffy happy and spike happy...haha YOU MADE ME HAPPY!!! good story.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 04:47 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

That was sooo sweet! I love the ending! It was so true. Sometimes you can understand things with such clarity without a word being said. Bravo! Kepp up the great work! Kuddos!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2005 - 07:09 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

ha ha! Very cheesy. But I still thought that it was wonderful.

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 07:30 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

i loved it but what about an epolog? plz plz plz

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 05:45 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

In the middle, with the Spike flashback (Buffy telling him to go) I thought for a moment thins one would have a bittersweet ending. I'm glad it didn't; it ended well.

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 12:29 pm Title: The Hollywood Ending

Wow! What a great and fitting end for this fic! It was a tad corny, but still really good! Take care, C ; )

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 11:01 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

LOL, are you really Joss, so am I correct in saying they finally are together...if so THANK GOD!, LOL

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 08:50 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

Almost thought we were not going to have a happy ending. Would have been ok the other way... like the Spuffy endings.

Reviewer: carri Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 03:16 am Title: The Hollywood Ending

loved the story and of all how you wrote Buffy. she was really a strong character and knew what she wanted.

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