BuffyRat08/26/2005 - 05:34 am14: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounterSigned
Love Adam's interest in her. It makes good sense. And the fact that she's running to Spike, maybe his plan is working afterall. And to be a bit cliche, we all know to want something done right, if not at all means doing it yourself. Wonderful chapter.


Ashlee01/28/2005 - 06:50 pm14: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounterSigned
Very good job of writing Adam. He wasn't a very complex character in the show, but he had a lot of complex questions (if that makes sense) and you were able to capture that.


Slayer rock chick01/28/2005 - 10:37 am14: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounterSigned
I loved Adams bit in this story. I think you have great creative writng skills :-)


Franchesca01/28/2005 - 10:37 am14: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounterAnonymous
I wasn't expecting that twist. Right now it seems awkward in the story, bt I'm sure that will smooth out. This story is so great so far.


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