Date: 01/28/2005 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Working the streets
I enjoyed The World in Between so much that I wanted to read this one and I think I'm going to like it even more!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 15: A chance
Amazing story. I need more! Getting Adam to help Buffy face who she is and what she wants to become was genius. And she's so good to Spike. I love everything about this fic.
Author's Response: Thanks, I really felt like he was about the only person who could help her to see herself. :)
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation
I'm loving it (though I know I haven't reviewed before, sorry about that). You are a great writer and character development so far has been great, however just a little nitpick, you may want to go over the last four paragraphs because I think you switched the names of Faith and Buffy in a couple of places.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation
Hi! Great chapter; I like the truce conversation. Did you flip the Faith/Buffy references in the last couple of paragraphs?
Author's Response: Bloody hell, I don't know how my beta and I both missed that :) I guess that means we are tired and need a break! Thanks for the heads up!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:51 am Title: Chapter 15: A chance
Yay, that was a quick update- FANTASTIC- more people should update that fast!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:37 am Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounter
I loved Adams bit in this story. I think you have great creative writng skills :-)
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:37 am Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounter
I wasn't expecting that twist. Right now it seems awkward in the story, bt I'm sure that will smooth out. This story is so great so far.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 06:05 am Title: Chapter 13: Trapped
please don't turn angel awful!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 05:39 am Title: Chapter 1: Working the streets
She was bought by the council- god dammit
Date: 01/28/2005 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter 13: Trapped
I love how emotionally complex your characters are. Even Buffy, who claims to feel nothing, or at least, refuses to feel anything. But you can still see that it's all there, buried deep within her. This is a great read.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 13: Trapped
I love Buffy! My poor heart aches for her and the decision that smug bastard Travers forced her into. That heart of her may be walled off and sorely bruised, but it is still good and kind. I love the grayness of this story; that nothing is ever simple.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 13: Trapped
I just HATE Quentin Travers.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 13: Trapped
Poor Buffy! I know what it is like living in a cage imposed upon you by forces outside of your control. I just want to hack and slash at the Council for her. Assholes! It sounds like Buffy's emotional walls may be wavering. If handled right by outside forces this could be good. If no one notices, this may mean that Buffy's emotional walls become even harder to break through. I sincerely hope Spike gets to her in time. Wonderful chapter again!
Date: 01/27/2005 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 13: Trapped
does anyone else hate travers right now. cause i sure do. its a great way of keeping her around for a while but i hope she gives her new watcher a hard time. i love spike in this story. he seemed to hard in the show and this shows his true gentle nature. please keep up the good work and don't let anyone get you down by flaming this story. it's wonderfull and i can't wait for more.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 13: Trapped
Great Chapter. I wonder who will be assigned as her watcher. There's a battle of wills I'd love to see! I like how you are very slowly opening her heart. These things never happen easily. Can't wait for the next installment!
Date: 01/27/2005 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 13: Trapped
Watchers counsil is evOl! That was emitonal chapter, and I loved it. The lack of smut was okay, no one (=me) hates you because of it. Thank you for the great chapters.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 13: Trapped
A wonderful chapter for such a riveting story. Loeve it! cant wait for more!
Date: 01/27/2005 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction
save the smoochies for when they matter :) i think it's a great idea!!
Date: 01/27/2005 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction
Oh, I think you did the right thing about the sex....it was just sex for Buffy, she felt nothing really is what it implies and Spike knows it......and I'm sure you will add to it as she begins to feel something. Interesting changing of the slayers, and I'm so happy no Faith and Spike....LOL! great job
Date: 01/27/2005 - 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction
more more more!!!!!!!!!!(grins)
Date: 01/27/2005 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction
You are absolutely amazing. Tell whoever doesn't like it they can stop reading and screw themselves because the way you are turning out this fic leaves nothing to be desired ...and I LOVE to bitch. Keep it up! How long do you intend this story to be? At least 30 Chapters I hope?
Date: 01/27/2005 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction
Love your decision to not write this sex scene; your reasoning is completely valid and I think the right one. I love that Spike got some brains early on and is taking things slow, approaching with friendship because that would be all Buffy could handle yet. Looking forward to Spike breaking down her barriers.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction
Another great chapter!! Can't wait for more. Thanks.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction
I totally get why you skipped over their first sexual encounter and completely agree with you on it. Who wants to read a story about how Spike gets off and Buffy doesn't, even if it's something she chooses? Their first real time together (detailed in this story) should be when they both feel the connection. Not necessarily love, but let the girl enjoy it.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction
THis chapter was great!! And i cant wait for more!!
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