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Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2005 - 11:30 am Title: Chapter 5: How to say hello, Sunnydale style

So in either case Buffy can kick Faith's ass... lol, ok then! =D

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Date: 07/01/2005 - 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1: Bitter Revelations

Really really interesting point there... about Angel leaving the way he did. That gives me something to think about! Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2005 - 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1: Working the streets

Just started reading this, sounds awesome so far!! Poor Buffy! Her comment about not having a soul.... very sad! And she killed a vamp with her shoe??? LOL! Spiffy!

Reviewer: baby spikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2005 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter33: Haste

wow i didn't realize how enraptured... hmm not sure tat the right word... anyway... how enraptured i was to the story till there was a glitch and i couldn't read for some reason i couldn't read it!!!! well i absolutely love the story!!! although buffy sounded a lot like faith at the beginning but yeah then u kinda changed her bak to buffy... well i realli like it!!! i hope u update soon!!!

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction

I'm enjoying this story very much. This Buffy is different and I love her. I won't be sending hate mail. I think you made a wise desicion to leave out the sex in this chapter. To me it helped the chapter and I can see how it will enhance the story in future chapters. I can't wait for Spuffy lovin, but I like it to mean something.

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2005 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter33: Haste

Need more updates please!

Reviewer: cee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 07:34 am Title: Chapter33: Haste

You left us at a crucial point. Hope to see a continuation soon...

Reviewer: Vanessow Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction

Quite possibly the best line i've ever read: “I will remember you.” Slowly he reached out and laid his hand over her heart. “Even after this stops beating, I will remember the lines of your face and the scent of your skin. I will mourn you and I will never forget a single moment I spent with you.” I love this story. LOVE.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter33: Haste

loved it!! please post soon. I want a spuffy chapter next time. spike and buffy are sooo cute in this fic.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter33: Haste

Nice one with the chip part, and i cant wait to see what else is gonna happen with Adam.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter33: Haste

Willow was such classic Willow in this chapter- I loved it! Made me think a little too much for this time of night, but that's okay. I'm all caught up now, so pretty please update soon with a sugary Spike on top ;-)

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter 32: From joking to screaming

Thanks for clearing up the chip explanation in your A/N. And I loved Spike trying to talk Buffy into letting him kill Wesley. It was...oddly sweet LOL! It was such a light-hearted and fun chapter- until the end. I have to go read what that's about now.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 31: A plan

Personally, I thought Wes deserved a Slayer-sized slap, but the normal one works too. I'm wondering why Xander wouldn't throw a fit about Spike's chip, but I'm sure you have your reasons. I also remember that he had a semi-understanding of Spike in relation to Anya, so I'm guessing that's a factor.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter 30: Getting aquainted

Definitely not the Wes I was expecting. For a while he was more like season four of "Angel" and then he made that...revelation and threw me for a loop :-)

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 05:25 am Title: Chapter 29: It's a small world

Well...didn't expect that pairing- or former pairing. And jealous/protective Spike is always fun.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter 28: Connections

Loved the vampire mythology in this one. It's always been a point I wished Joss and company would have touched on a little more- I think the only ep. they mention it in is "Lie To Me" and that's only Buffy saying that vampires are particular about who they turn. Anyway, I'm babbling- great job!

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter 27: He loves me....or does he?

I loved the romanticsm of her biting Spike- after the bite that Angel gave her, since his was almost like an attempted rape and it was nice to see the exact opposite with our Spuffy couple. I can understand what Buffy was insecure about- there's a huge difference between lust and love and she did what she had to do to survive. Having the knowledge that Spike loved someone and she could be a replacement would be devastating (I would assume). Wonderful writing in this chapter (and in every chapter!)

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter 26: Silent prayers

I figured it was Dru- what else could it be? Harmony? LOL- sorry, I'm in a funny mood right now LOL! Great chapter and I loved how she put Angel in his place.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter 25: Buzz kill

I can understand why people would think Buffy went against Spike, but honestly, I think it was Angel (with more than a little bit of Angelus mixed in) that preyed on a vulnerable situation and turned it to his advantage. Buffy was simply caught in the crossfire of their eternal rivalry.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2005 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter 24: Natural progression

Doyle was her guide- that's so sweet!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter33: Haste

O.K. You make me think too much. Thank you very much, my brain hurts. Now I draw the line at ACT/SAT type problems. You give us a scenario about Buffy and Spike on 2 different trains, going 2 different directions at 2 diffrerent speeds, I'll quit. Unless somehow it has to do with sex, then I'm in. :) BTW Great chapter.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2005 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 23: Road trip

Their sisterly talk in this chapter was great and I loved Faith's last line!

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2005 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 22: From death to life

I loved Xander being the voice of reason! It's about time that his narrow-minded views were broadened a little bit and if it couldn't happen in the show, at least it can happen in fics :-) Interesting twist in the chapter- I'm glad they won't need to do the curse.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2005 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 21: Surprise

I'm finally able to start catching up on this story and I'm still loving it!

Reviewer: Ashlie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2005 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter33: Haste

OMGOODNESS! This chapter actually made me laugh, after we got passed the whole Spike dying thing, but wow awesome work! Next one, please? ~Ashlie~ PS: I want to visit your site, so can you send the link to ashie_dawn_dykeman@hotmail.com please?

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