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Reviewer: Niamh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Aww. For me? Aww. . . gonna make me cry, dammit. Don't do that. Its nearly by birthday. . . don't wanna cry on my birthday. *sniffles* I didn't want this one to end either, but hey, I know what you've got cooking (hey, I can cook bunnies, did ya know? well, plot bunnies anyway). This story was just really good and a nice way to get them all back . . . to get certain things cleared up and, well, get that happy ending I keep carping about. Thanks sweetie. Love you lots.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 02:34 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

So glad she faced Angel and told him in no uncertain terms that Spike was the one for her! GREAT CHAP, great tale. gonna hate to see this one end. bring on the last chap.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Awe, Proposal :)) Lovely chapter. Good answer to Angel's question: You told me once you'd always be my girl." "I did. But I'm a woman now" Loved reading it.

Reviewer: redwulf50 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Loved the chappie, but if Angel happned to trip over his feet and land on a stake I would send you a virtutual chocolate chip cookie :P

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Oh, cute proposal! Like this chapter very much indeed. Also loved the resolution with Angel. I adore Angel, but let's face it; he and Buffy have both moved on. He doesn't always do "gracious looser" very well; even though it seems to be Cordy he's in love with these days! ""You told me once you'd always be my girl." "I did. But I'm a woman now." Buffy walked out then, into the daylight." Loved this part!

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 04:52 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Wonderful once again! I love the sharp insights you have into the meaning of the B/A relationship in contrast with S/B. Very realistic to have Spike still be insecure about Buffy going to Angel as well as Buffy trying to sneak off to see him. They're not quite there with letting go of all bad habits but are working towards it. I'm so happy Buffy is so confident and secure of and in her feelings -- something she never achieved in canon IMO. The parade Spike predicted must be marching by. :) It was great to have her be so unwishy-washy with Angel. And great line about being a woman now.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

"Good, cause I'd have to kill any bloke that tried to get you away from me, and I'm not supposed to be doing that anymore."--I loved the proposal. And the references to them being engaged for four years. And the bit with Angel, that was some pretty cool closure. And Angel asked her a really good question. But, I would have liked to have a bit of a sidebar about her breakup with the immortal... and I'm sad that there's only one more chapter... But the whole thing is so darn fabuous. Wonderful job! Please, update soon!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

I really enjoyed this chapter! I hope you included their wedding in the last chapter! I can't wait to see what thats like!

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

I LOVE that last line, "I'm a woman now" That's great. Like it's finally time for her to "put away childish toys." We get to see the wedding, right?????? please?? Update soon!

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

loved this chapter. cant' wait for the next. great job. wonder how you're gonna end it. please post soon. great job. loved it.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

I really liked the last part about how Buffy once said she'd always be his girl, but she responded that she was a woman now. That was so perfect. Great way to end the chapter.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

i did like the direction you took this. i also loved this chapter. buffy was able to tell angel to back off the way a "woman" would. no miscommunication at all. loved it loved it loved it!!!

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

WOW...........awesome chapter addie. i love this story and i'm very happy the shanshu went to the right vampire.....

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

No need to fret. This one is lovely. The interplay between Spike and Buffy while they were in bed was great. 'Is this a date?" "No. . . do you want it to be?" transformed beautifully into "is that a proposal?" "No. Do you want it to be?" Oh sweetie. Gorgeous. And hey, nice conversation between Buffy and the butthead. Very nice. Alas, though, I too am sadly deficient in the banner making, but you know I'd make you one if I could.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Good chapter, sorry the story has to end. A bright ending is much better than what we had on the TV series.

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I loved this chapter, Addie. Excellent! It was a nice tie in and tie up to the previous chapters with its own flair of emotions in it. I loved it. I am sad to see it end, but I look forward to the last chapter.

Reviewer: Katrina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Good chapter - liked the way Buffy went to see Angel and cleared things up. Glad to see she would've still chosen Spike :) Looking forward to reading the final chapter :)

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I loved the last line! I really like how you've betrayed Angel. I think it's true to the character, he's a good guide, but he has a VERY hard time not being stubborn and closed minded. It will be sad to see this story come to end, but it's been fun while it's lasted. Glad you brought Cordy back!

Reviewer: NEO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I liked where it was going, send me an e-mail on what things you want to be included in the banners, and the names of the fics, and I will try to make them. I was sort of dabbling on one for your pirate fic, but it is slow going, and the awesome place I get screencaps from is having errors all the time. Also you should ask sueworld2003 at live journal if she will do it before you have me try them, she is REALLY really good at manips, way better than me, I am just starting to get the hang of it. trinityknot@yahoo.com Banner offer is open to anyone else who reads this too.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

PERFECTION! Well worth waiting for (see, go at your own pace and you have a masterpiece of passion and love that melts socks and curls toenails!) And the confession of 26 yr old Victorian Virgin William was very sweet. LOVED IT.

Reviewer: bitchee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 11:11 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Can I just say that I totally loved this story it would have to be one of my favourite post nfa fics. It's just a shame that you cant send it to Joss, coss I really would like to think that if he ever mad a movie about Spike and Buffy meeting again after the end of Angel that it would be just like you wrote it. I've read hundreds post nfa stories and I have to say as much as I may have loved some of the others, I think this one is the closest to cannon. All the points you made about Angels decisions were extremly valid... I allways wondered why he was never there to protect her when the oracles told him that if he wasnt a vamp he wouldnt be able to protect her, I meaan what was the point of him taking the day back and staying in LA when she lived in Sunnydale.. seems to me it really didnt matter that he stayed a vamp. And I liked the fact that Willow didnt go all gushy on him like in some of the other fic's it lent to the credibility of the story. Anyway I've rambled enough... Loved it to the power of ten as I do pretty much all your work. Keep up the writting cos it brings a little brightness to our lives. Thanks.

Reviewer: Miela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 08:37 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Heyah Addie Ü Yeah, I think it's great that you don't let reviews stop you from writing in your own pace and using your style. This is another of your very well-written chapters and I am hoping to see more! I am absolutely adoring this story so far. This kind of story always reminds me of how much I love William the Bloody. Keep it up! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

"It's just… Whatever happened to 'I've always been bad?'" "Never said what I was bad at." So terribly endearing! I adore that they are together, and they certainly seemed to do it right. I love how Spike gets so uncomfortable about his human self, and how Buffy just already kinda knew. They have such a great dynamic together. And I can't wait to see what happens next! Please, update soon!

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 12:00 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

bloody hell woman, it's hot enough all over the place,but damn you turned on the oven to broil *laughs*. That was fantastic. I loved the bantering between then and yet they both love each other so much. Great chapter and believe me it was WELL worth the wait....

Reviewer: timeofchange Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

I've been away, so this is commentary on this chapter and the one before. I think you controlled the build-up, as it were, very well. I'm fascinated by the idea that it was Spike all along who was intended to Shanshu. It makes sense. And the coming together of Buffy and Spike was all the more moving because of the slow build-up of trust between them. Plus, very hot.

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