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Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2005 - 02:15 pm Title: A bad first impression
Date: 10/30/2005 - 02:15 pm Title: A bad first impression
I'm interested in the story, but why don't you use any punctuation at the ends of sentences, periods to be exact? It's very weird to read that way.
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the reviewing. and Sorry for the dodgey punctuation. it may be just me, but my comp is being weird lately.
I will try to do better with the punctuation and stuuf.
thanks for the advice!
Reviewer: 1MindlessAutomaton Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2005 - 01:46 pm Title: A bad first impression
Date: 10/30/2005 - 01:46 pm Title: A bad first impression
This is a really great plot.
Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2005 - 07:09 pm Title: A bad first impression
Date: 01/29/2005 - 07:09 pm Title: A bad first impression
can;t bellieve he didn't follow her!
Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2005 - 03:22 am Title: A bad first impression
Date: 01/29/2005 - 03:22 am Title: A bad first impression
good so far
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:51 pm Title: A bad first impression
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:51 pm Title: A bad first impression
The plot sounds interesting
Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 02:36 pm Title: A bad first impression
Date: 01/28/2005 - 02:36 pm Title: A bad first impression
great start. keep up with it. good job.
Reviewer: Slayer rock chick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:53 am Title: A bad first impression
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:53 am Title: A bad first impression
The plot isn't half that bad. I should know i helped write it, lol. but seriously this story does have tons of potential mate
Author's Response: thanks mate, you're a weirdo sometimes, but, hey, i don't care coz....more reviews!