Reviews For Lost Love
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Reviewer: Ebontier Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2004 - 09:05 pm Title: Goodbye

It's great sotry, wonderful concept...but I kept getting distracted. If you got a beta, I think your story would flow so much better. Some of your tenses are wrong and it throws the rhythem off. They can also help you flesh your story out some. But it's a great start!!

Author's Response: Well, I've been meaning too. Now, I just need to know where to find one. Do you know any?

Reviewer: Karen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2003 - 04:23 am Title: Goodbye

I love your story! Please write some more soon!

Reviewer: Katy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2003 - 02:10 am Title: Goodbye

Love it so far. Please write more!

Author's Response: Thank you! This is my first fic so I was nervous about recieving reviews, So thanks again. Dreamy

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