Reviews For Lost Love
Reviewer: Ebontier Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2004 - 09:05 pm Title: Goodbye
Date: 04/08/2004 - 09:05 pm Title: Goodbye
It's great sotry, wonderful concept...but I kept getting distracted. If you got a beta, I think your story would flow so much better. Some of your tenses are wrong and it throws the rhythem off. They can also help you flesh your story out some. But it's a great start!!
Author's Response: Well, I've been meaning too. Now, I just need to know where to find one. Do you know any?
Reviewer: Karen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2003 - 04:23 am Title: Goodbye
Date: 10/04/2003 - 04:23 am Title: Goodbye
I love your story! Please write some more soon!
Reviewer: Katy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2003 - 02:10 am Title: Goodbye
Date: 10/02/2003 - 02:10 am Title: Goodbye
Love it so far. Please write more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
This is my first fic so I was nervous about recieving reviews, So thanks again.
Dreamy