Date: 10/20/2006 - 03:08 pm Title: Chp 7 Just Children
"The world would go mad" What a good tale. Love it.
Date: 04/17/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: Chp 7 Just Children
Well turned into children doesn't sound so bad.. but just until you think about it. All the consequences leading at last that mankind will die (no new children to be born). But I didn't think the other children would try to kill them.
Date: 09/12/2005 - 02:12 pm Title: Chp 7 Just Children
I'm glad to see a new chapter of this story. Very exciting and strange!
Date: 09/12/2005 - 01:23 am Title: Chp 7 Just Children
Love the story. It reminds me of the Star Trek episode, I think it was called "Meri", where they go to a planet inhabited only by children and there's an illness that's killing them all as they age. Very well written. Looking forward to future updates. Can't wait to see what happens next. B
Date: 09/12/2005 - 01:08 am Title: Chp 7 Just Children
good update loving this story so far
Date: 09/11/2005 - 11:50 pm Title: Chp 7 Just Children
This is really a good story. Just remind other readers in Authors Note: in your other story to come back and read recent updates. Don't stop writing in any of them, you are gifted.
Author's Response: Thank you for review. Glad to know someone out there enjoys it! Will be updating soon.