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Reviewer: slaye Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 02:17 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

i love this story ...i read it a while ago and i was hoping that you would update it....it is a shame that this story has not an ending....
sorry if my writting is wrong ...i am studing english
bye

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2005 - 04:37 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Like the story. Looking forward to reading more. Hopefully soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm hoping for update quality work soon too. My muse has been off drinking margaritas since right before graduation, back at the end of april. I'm begging her to come back now that I've just started teaching and can attempt the focus again.

Reviewer: virce Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 05:11 pm Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Working on it. I recently started teaching and have been begging my muse to come back from drinking margaritas...soon though, I do already have the ending written..

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Haha. Okay this chapter was so funny. I think that they both overdid the whole "I'm not jealous" thing. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 03:11 am Title: Bumpy Rides

"I'm going to hell. That's ok though, I'll have friends and well, it's just funny." LOL!! That was wonderful.

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 12:02 pm Title: Shaken Not Stirred

wow! great story...i love your writing style...and the pov-thing is sooo good....more soon

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2005 - 06:15 pm Title: Shaken Not Stirred

omg i just started reading and LOVE it soooo much more plz!!!!

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2005 - 06:18 pm Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Please update soon! Man I can't believe Buffy would pass up an oppertunity to be with Spike! Thanks for not getting into detail anout Harmony, cause I got more than enough fron "BTVS" and "Angel" and it made me a little nauses to say the least. Can't wait for the rest! Kuddos

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 06:36 pm Title: Shaken Not Stirred

thank god for this update!!! i love this story and all its possibilities...please say that you'll finish it...want to know what happens next!! thanx...hope you update soon **hint**hint** ;)

Author's Response: I promise that I will finish this story. After all I'm on a roll of completing things... :o)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 01:42 pm Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Glad you updated anyway. With the S/H... even if their are description or not - I simply don't like it. And Buffy did make it even worse at the dancefloor. ... She can thank herself for driving Spike in Harm's arms (and more)... Hoping to read more soon when you have time.

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 11:19 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Yay! Thanks for posting again! =) Loved how they were both trying to make the other jealous. I can tell I've grown up in the past couple of years because I know what Will is going to do with Harmony and it doesn't really bother me anymore. That's life. But he just had to get that last word in to Parker, didn't he? lol so evil. Make it even worst and then fix it! Heehee. =)

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 09:42 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Yay update! a good one too! waiting for more!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 08:09 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Great stuff! I know the whole situation shouldn't be seen as funny, because two people here are in danger of damaging / being damaged by a potentially beautiful relationship, but... you've written this with such humour I have to admit to giggling at the pair's antics on the dancefloor! You really have Buffy down pat! That girl really was Queen of the River. That's why I finf fanfiction written by talented authors so refreshing. You have the vision and talent to place the character is new scenarios and the power to decide whether they re-live their choices of the series or allow them to grow and evolve. We reader hang on to every update, waiting in anticipation to find out which direction your muse takes us. I'm putting my fragile heart in your hands here Jennice... be kind to me, or at least let me crumble with a smile on my face! Thank you for a great update. Have fun at graduation!

Author's Response: Honestly I had to laugh my butt off at the dance floor antics too. If I actually knew how to dance or the names for dance moves there would've been more to that scene. Believe me the way it played out in my head was about 10 times funnier.

Reviewer: ebontier Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 03:21 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

awesome story...De Nile is NOT just a place in Egypt. Hopefully, Spike won't do anything too stupid.

Reviewer: spufette Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 03:01 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Oh Shi*! I wish Spike would be above fu**ing Harmony for revenge or anything. Call me sappy romantic. Anyway, I do miss this fic, but just get Spike and Buffy together, soon, please. Luv, Spuf

Author's Response: I wish he was too. However he's really hurting right now and well Buffy isn't helping matters any.

Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 02:26 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

whenever they REALLY get together..I have a song sugg. Why Can't I by Liz Phair which talks about two people who fall in love while they are with other people. And they finally get together!

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 02:19 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Darn it! Spike is actually going to have sex with Harmony? I thought he loves Buffy. Buffy isn' having sex with Parker. Why can't men keep it in their damn pants?

Author's Response: Will is a guy. Buffy has stomped all over him. Rejected him. It's revenge sex. Guys and girls do it all the time. Sad, but true.

Reviewer: H Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 02:15 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

Good story! Different than the stuff I've been reading. Looking forward to more:)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 01:51 am Title: Shaken Not Stirred

great updates

Reviewer: Kellie Mulder Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2005 - 09:11 pm Title: Bumpy Rides

LOL. That's funny about he gay crack. Keep writing this story. I want to see Spike's reaction about that remark.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 06:18 pm Title: Bumpy Rides

Well, I hope the Harmony thing will really make her jealous. And that will bring her to the knowledge, that she loves Spike *smile*

Reviewer: katj Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 10:10 am Title: Bumpy Rides

This is great. Very amusing with Harmony! I can't wait for more to be revealed about Buffy (I hope that's where this is going) so she can get over it and be with Spike again. :)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Bumpy Rides

great story so far

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 07:47 pm Title: Bumpy Rides

That message Spike left was just so amusing. I could totally hear his voice in my head saying it. Perfect.

Reviewer: Juanita Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2005 - 07:02 am Title: Bumpy Rides

Love it! Please update soon!

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