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Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Save Me!'

Poor mates - I hope Oz can talk some sense in Willow.

Author's Response: Hopefully, Thanks, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 04:59 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Save Me!'

say it isn't so!

Author's Response: Yes, it's so! thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 01:44 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Save Me!'

ALL of them really need to have their asses kicked!! please make it happen in the next chapter!!! keep up the great work

Author's Response: Yes, but hopefully they'll mend their ways. Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 01:24 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Save Me!'

great update but i want to see them together again

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Author's Response: Me too, hopefully they will be! Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2005 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Save Me!'

They are gonna let her go right.. right?? CAnt wait i really cant wait....

Author's Response: Well, someone might have to let her go? Thanks, luv, spuf

Reviewer: Tasha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2005 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Surprising Allies'

OOOOOO ... sweet chapter update. I like Oz and Spike bonding there. Very good. I always thought those two could have a lot more in common if Oz had stayed on the show longer. I loved Buffy and her "promise" at the end. They are going to find out just what Oz warned them about ... don't try to break the claim. They are a bunch of idiots. I hope Oz can talk some sense into Willow. If not, she's going to go down with the rest of them. Buffy and Spike aren't going to be happy campers once they are reunited. They are going to want revenge of some sort. Excellent update. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: I wanted Oz on the show too, but alas I wanted a Spuffy baby (I know that sounds weird, but still. Which leads me to a 'rumor' from season 6 that I was E-mailed, revealed on a fan site and truly believe would have panned out had the show gone into season 8, but....) anyway, they are idiots, the gang, but hopefully they'll come around? Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 08:56 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Surprising Allies'

That was a got one! I hope the scoobies will understand one day what they have done to them - and regret it.

Author's Response: Thank you! They may never understand...however, they may have to learn to live with it! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Surprising Allies'

I love Oz and hated them writing him out! so go you!

Author's Response: I always like Oz, too! I always felt he was the voice of reason! Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Surprising Allies'

I hope Spike and Buffy make them all pay!!!!!!! keep up the great work

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try! Luv, spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 11: 'Surprising Allies'

loved the updates

Author's Response: Thank you, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Patroling Together'

I hope something very painful befalls the scoobies. And of course make it so that Spike doesn't die.

Author's Response: Oh, no, Spike will not die, again. thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Patroling Together'

Oh no - I didn't need to have the angst. And again, the scoobies knew all better, huh? Hope Buffy can convince tham before Spike is dust.

Author's Response: Spuffy has an unlikely ally and he will help them. Thanks Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 06:01 am Title: Chapter 10: 'Patroling Together'

Oh the Scoobies are going to be in deep trouble..... Buffy is gonna be extremely pissed....... CAnt wait for more!!!

Author's Response: No, Buffy is 'not amused' by this turn of events and she will kick butt, hopefully. Thanks Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Tasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter 10: 'Patroling Together'

NO NOOOOO ... I swear I'm going to kick all of their arrogant, self-absorbed, self-righteous asses. Hope they get their just deserves. I think Oz needs to come kick some Scooby ass. Even though they don't want to tell Riley that Oz is a werewolf, he might have to so that he can get his point across. Oz, being a territorial breed, would understand the nature of claims. {growls} So going to kick someone's butt for separating our two lovers.

Author's Response: Yes, Oz truly understands the claim thing. He will be instrumental in helping Spuffy. Thanks, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2005 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 8: 'Ain't Nobody'

Sorry to think but - I don't think the scoobies will let go to brake the claim. Sorry for them!

Author's Response: Yeah, their loss, but hopefully, things will work out? Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Tasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2005 - 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 9: 'Celebration'

Yeah ... {Claps} Spike and Buffy really laid it on Giles. I was glad to see Oz chipping in there for the couple too. Wolves are very territorial and mates ... very essential to a werewolf/wolf. I hope Willow takes his advice. I don't think she realizes what kind of insults she would be doing to Oz too if she tried to get between someone else and their mate. That could make Oz feel that she doesn't treat mating as a sacred union if it doesn't suit her purpose. That definitely wouldn't bode well for the two of them. Look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm very interested in wolves (especially as connected to BTVS/ATS) for very good reason. First off, I always thought it interesting that Spike was 'Randy/Randalph' in Tabula Rasa. Randalph translated from old Germanic tongue means: Rand (rim/or protective shield) 'Alph' or (Rand)Wulf which of course equals wolf. Also, Dracula transformed into a wolf in that episode and was quite attached to them (creatures of the night) in the book and movies. Also, wolves, as you said are extrememly devoted to each other, especially the Alpha Female/Alpha Male. Anyway, I digress, but yes I wanted Oz as the 3rd person POV because he seems to get left out in alot of fictions and I just loved him! He will play a major part in the fiction as it progresses. Thanks, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Tasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2005 - 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 8: 'Ain't Nobody'

I love how the Scoobies found out. LOL. What a way to go. {smiles} Lay it on em all at once. Now just Mom and Giles left to go.

Author's Response: Yeah, I was rather fond of that way myself! Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Seraiza` Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2005 - 04:05 am Title: Chapter 9: 'Celebration'

Finally caught up with the story, amd i cant wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. Luv, spuf

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2005 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter 9: 'Celebration'

I came across a great song today and want to share it with you and maybe you can use it in this fic and if not in another one...it's very appropriately titled Love Song For A Vampire by Annie Lennox: Come into these arms again And lay your body down Come into these arms again and lay your body down The rhythm of this trembling heart is beating like a drum It beats for you, it bleeds for you it knows not how it sounds For it is the drum of drums it is the song of songs Once I had the rarest rose that ever deemed to bloom Cruel winter chilled the bud and stole my flower too soon Oh loneliness Oh hopelessness to search the ends of time For there is in all the world no greater love than mine. Love o love o .... still falls the rain Love o love o .... still falls the night Love o love o .... be mine forever Let me be the only one to keep you from the cold Now the floor of heaven is laid the stars are bright as gold They shine for you they shine for you they burn for all to see Come into these arms again and set this spirit free I love this fic, btw and great job on the chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! You know, this song is perfect for what I have in mind for the next chapters! I'll try and interweave the song in! thanks again, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2005 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 8: 'Ain't Nobody'

I loved it!!!

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2005 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter 8: 'Ain't Nobody'

nice cliffhanger!

Author's Response: I Really loved writing Oz into this. He was always so laid back and I thought he would 'approve' of the marriage, even if the others didn't. Thanks, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 8: 'Ain't Nobody'

How cute what Spike did for her! But know everyone will have heard of the wedding – it was announced loud enough *smile*

Author's Response: Yes, the cat's out of the bag, kicking and screaming! Thank you, the angst is headed our way. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 8: 'Ain't Nobody'

I really like your story but I am not looking forward to the unhappiness that will happen to Buffy and Spike. Can't wait for the next update. I did like this chapter and the prior chapters where the scoobies were not involved. The only thing I hope is that Riley is not actively involved in this story.

Author's Response: Riley is a pain in the a**! That said, it's not going to be him so much that is the problem, but the Scoobies and Giles. Thanks, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 8: 'Ain't Nobody'

cute, funny! please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. Actually Chapter 9 is written and re-edited already. It's after the next chapter that I need to pound out the keys and create the angst for our Couple! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 7: 'Honeymoon!'

much more sanity based...however living in the midwest; Oklahoma, where the wind comes sweeping down the plain, I completely get allerigies! Hope you are feeling better

Author's Response: Thank you. Living in So. California, where the smog blankets you...well, you get the picture! However, right now, we're swimming for our lives! I'm expecting an old man in a big boat to come floating by, asking if we want a ride! Thanks, Luv, Spuf

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