Date: 02/22/2005 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter 1
I've loved everything I've ever read of yours, but this seems very different to me. I'm intrigued, but it just seems almost flat to me. Maybe it's simply her depression and deadness that is effecting the mood of the chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Maybe it won't be so depressing.
Author's Response: Hope you ended up liking the story. Thanks for trying if you didn't.
Date: 02/22/2005 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1
awesome beginning!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 02/22/2005 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww! What an awesome beginning for what I'm sure will become a great fic! I'm totally hooked already & I can hardly wait for more, so please, please, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. And updates should come fairly quickly since I have the first few chapters written!!
Date: 02/22/2005 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhhhh -- sounds great! Can't wait for more. I glad you made the guy nameless/faceless not someone from the show -- 'cause the other guy isn't important -- the Spuffy is :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Elanor. You're exactly right. The other guy isn't important and that's why I did make him nameless.
Date: 02/22/2005 - 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, you made me cry. Spike's entrance really was classic- I can't think of a better way to interrupt a wedding LOL And there were just so many emotions, all of which were perfectly written. I hope Spike can get her back on the right track- I think she deserves to be happy. Amazing beginning:)
Author's Response: Thank you, Allison. Spike is going to do everything he can to help Buffy get it together again so they can be happy.
Date: 02/22/2005 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1
good so far
Author's Response: Thank you!!
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