Date: 04/08/2005 - 11:26 am Title: Chapter 14 - Hitting the Proverbial Fan
It's a really good story, I love it and I hope you will update very soon ! Thanks
Date: 04/08/2005 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter 14 - Hitting the Proverbial Fan
What a great chapter. Glad to see buffy did not get jaded by the chip not working. Hopefully Spike will not do anything to make buffy worry about the chip not working. Hopefully Giles and the withches will be able to see past the chip as well. HOpe buffy will be ok. Please update soon and often.
Date: 04/03/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Family Ties
Wonderful update, wonderful explanation of the claim, and ending with a cliffhanger :-D Good chapter!
Date: 04/01/2005 - 04:56 am Title: Chapter 13 - Family Ties
this was another excellent chapter, i hate xander, please dont let him do anything to Spike...please
Date: 03/31/2005 - 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Family Ties
Oh, you naughty girl to leave us with poor befuddled Xander on his way! This chapter was such a riveting read. I loved the familial claiming ritual - the way Buffy was so excepting and willing to talk about the mating claim as well - the way Giles acted so smartly about the situation - the way Dawn insisted on watching. I can't wait to see the bond, and Xander, in action.
Date: 03/31/2005 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter 13 - Family Ties
This chapter was awesome Tasha! I loved the whole familial bonding thing. I'm glad Giles showed some sense and didn't argue it. What happens wth Dru, Riley and Xander in the next chapter? Dun Dun Dun Dun
Date: 03/31/2005 - 06:51 am Title: Chapter 13 - Family Ties
Great update Tasha!!!! Love this fic. When do we get more and also more of the new one too cause really like the first chap of it.
Date: 03/31/2005 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter 13 - Family Ties
you know between you and jeni and star and kari i'm gonna go insane. i love you story. and thank you so much for explaining whats going on with the different claims. usually your just left to guess what happened and taht gets anoying. if i beg really really really hard can we see xand make a fool of himself and have dru adn buffy meet in the next chap. please??? oh and i just had a thought if dru can feel spike claim buffy what about angel? is he going to cause trouble in the future? and now that this review is now a novel i will say again awsome story and more soon please.
Date: 03/31/2005 - 05:53 am Title: Chapter 13 - Family Ties
Oh man, why do I have the feeling that Spike made it worse? Eep, and Xander's going there while Spike and Buffy are together?! Crap! Can't wait till the next one!!! (I'm still reading your story on BSV, but since it was up here, I couldn't control myself)
Date: 03/31/2005 - 05:06 am Title: Chapter 13 - Family Ties
*big grin* great update. I like the different types of claims that you have happening here. Will be interesting to see the reaction when Dru meets up with buffy for the frist time. haha, and vampi riley. heehee. can't wati
Date: 03/28/2005 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Let No Man Put Asunder
i'm loving this story and i like how you gave her a slayer dream even if she didn't recognize it as one and i love how spike has his warring personalities. it's fun to listen to what spike has going on in his head. you didn't get that much on the show so you were always wondering what he was thinking.keep u the awsome work and update as soon as possible. small side note you have me obsesed with your other story after one page so if you could find it in your heart to update that one too i would love you forever. but i swear no pressure. just a wish.
Date: 03/28/2005 - 01:04 am Title: Chapter 12 - Let No Man Put Asunder
OOH Tasha! What a cliffhanger! Can't wait to find out what's going to happen. I can't believe that Dru turned Riley! And that nightmare! Ack! Can't wait for more
Date: 03/27/2005 - 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Let No Man Put Asunder
Awesome chapter! Love the POVs switching Williaml/Spike. Hope he'll claim Buffy soon - maybe that can help changing the future. It seems Buffy had a prophetic dream - at last the Riley part, regarding the last chapter. :) And I'm hoping for an update soon *smile*
Date: 03/27/2005 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Joining of Heart & Body
Loved the chapter! Very hot - and verrrry bad Xander and bad Riley! Spike was way better than the super soldier :)
Date: 03/27/2005 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Let No Man Put Asunder
That was an action packed chapter. We have Spike so kindly explaining the claiming rights in this story - very cool and nicely detailed (sets us up for all sorts of worry!). Then we have Buffy's dream sequence which had me completely on the edge of my seat - dream or no! Then the sex. Well... who doesn't like that. *clears throat* And then Dru and Riley - Yikes! I can't wait for more. Which means - more please.
Date: 03/27/2005 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 12 - Let No Man Put Asunder
OHHH! Cliffhanger...how could you do that to me?! I guess you had to bring a little bit of Dru in the mix.
Date: 03/27/2005 - 04:06 am Title: Chapter 12 - Let No Man Put Asunder
Great update
Date: 03/27/2005 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 12 - Let No Man Put Asunder
Tasha, I believe I promised you a review! And I'm happy to give it! This was an awesome chapter-you've suceeded doing what I try to do in my writing, showing Spike as both vampire and William and you did it beautifully! Loved the whole Slayer dream and then Spike feeling Dru. Hope the two of them share the news with each other in the morning.
Date: 03/21/2005 - 05:52 am Title: Chapter 11 - A Joining of Heart & Body
ok, this is a great story... i hate riley and i hate xander they are freaks and they suck please dont have them hurt spike, and if they do, have buffy kick their buts! please update soon
Date: 03/20/2005 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Joining of Heart & Body
Tasha this chapter was sooo good. You're doing a great job on the fic, can't wait for more.
Date: 03/20/2005 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Joining of Heart & Body
excellent update
Date: 03/20/2005 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Joining of Heart & Body
Bad Riley! Bad Xander! Plotting against Buffy and Spike. Glad to see that Joyc i sokay. Can't wait for more!
Date: 03/20/2005 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Sneaking Around
I absolutely love your story! This has always been one of my favorite episodes. I adore William, and just had to let you know how I love the way you have William and the demon working together to get Buffy! I can't wait for more... I often wished Buffy had turned to Spike instead of Riley. I never did care for Riley either!!! Love it!!!
Date: 03/20/2005 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Joining of Heart & Body
Great Chapter. Can't wsit to read the rest of this story. Please update soon and often.
Date: 03/20/2005 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Joining of Heart & Body
Psychooooooooooo good Stuff Tasha....stupid Xander, Psycho Riley (its a mantra) Why do i think Buffy's really not gonna care if the chip stops working? make her not care!
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