Wow! What a great story, I had a feeling that Joyce was going to get turned, and the way you had her come into the house didn't give anything away. While I like Joyce this is a way she has never been portrayed this way and it should be interesting. Thanks again for all your hard work!

oh! I was hoping he wouldn't be able to get to Joyce!! :(
Poor Buffy!!!

Joyce vamped sure surprised me! Great chapter!

you have got to be kidding me. joyce is a vampire? that's just not right and she wouldn't have been allowed back in the house. she would have needed an invite. i couldn't stand seeing her like this. a little warning would have been nice. i don't remember seeing anything about a character death, i usually try to avoid those. i really liked this story, but it's ruined for me now.

Author's Response: No I'm not kidding you. I'm sorry if you don't think it's right, unfortunately it is my plot development and this was plotted almost a year ago. Joyce didn't need an invite, as further chapters will explain. I'm sorry you can't hang around to see what happens and that you don't trust my ability to tell a story fairly, but i understand if you have to leave it. It just flabbergasts me that you couldn't post your name. As for the warning, you're right. I should ahve done that and I hadn't even thought about it as I get caught up in main characters and didn't even consider the significance of Joyce. That was wrong and I've gone back to edit, but unfortunately there is no character death warning in the options. All I cna do is pop it in my authors note or summary for the chapter which I don't have time to do now but will this afternoon when I get home. Again, I am sorry that it has ruined the story for you. It is by no means at an end, and as I don't actually like vamping characters or killing them off, it's ironic the first time I do someone jumps on me about it. To each their own.

evil joyce. wow you wrote her so well.