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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

I recently found this story and I find it very entertaining. I think you're doing a great job with it!

Author's Response: Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

Love the story - Can't wait for the ceremony! :D

Author's Response: Thanks. That's going to be a little tough, but I hope it works. spuf

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

OH a great chapter. Please continue to write and update soon and often. You are a very good writer and do not let anyone tell you different. It takes a very unique person to put words together and creat the enjoyable stories you write. Regain your self esteam and ignore the negativity. They are jealous of your talent. Don't let it hurt you and take it as a compliment. In life you will come across people that are just plain evil and are not happy unless they are picking on someone. Use it as a learning experience and enjoy the thought that you have something they don't. Readers and other writers that enjoy your hard work.and writing skills. Yes I know I sound like a mom here actually I am a mom I'm 58 years old with experience. and a spike and buffy fan.

Author's Response: Thanks. I am going to continue with all my fics. I decided to let the bad reviews go. I'm a mom too and I really should take my own advice more! spuf

Reviewer: Infatuation Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2005 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Absolutely'

really well done. i was a bit iffy about the story when i read the summary... but now i love it. you've taken things your own way the narrative is great the dialouge is superb and it all because of you! Keep it up... wishing you happy places with lots of shiny things Infatuation

Author's Response: Thanks. I hoped to keep this kind of like the Godfather movies, the Don is really quite a marshmellow where his family is concerned. spuf

Reviewer: Ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2005 - 01:23 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Absolutely'

Glad you had a better night to finish this!!! It was worth the wait.

Author's Response: Sorry for the late response. I've been feeling a bit down lately, but I'm back. Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2005 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Absolutely'

I'm so glad that you updated this chapter. And the quote about power in the beginning, very true. I liked the cuddling scene with Spike and James. So very sweet. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to show the paradox that is Spike/William. Even in the show, Spike had such a human, sensitive side that was so out of whack with being a vampire! Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Charisma Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2005 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Absolutely'

Great story! I came into kind of late so I had a lot to read...but it was worth it. I have only seen a short number of mafia/buffy fics and loved every one I read and was happy to find another. I hope you update soon! xoxox

Author's Response: Thanks. I've been real lax on this fic. I'm going to try and update more regularly. Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2005 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Absolutely'

Cant wait for the claiming ceremony! Love the story!

Author's Response: Thank you. Right now, I'm debating on who will be attending the ceremony!!! Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Absolutely'

Well, whatever happened last night, I hope it's okay today! You wrote an excellent chapter if that helps! :)

Author's Response: Thank you. Things are calming down a bit. Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Absolutely'

Great Chapter. Great Update. Please continue Need more chapters to read. I enjoy looking forward to this story. If the Recommend this story had Yes absolutely it would be my choice. What is going to happen with Riley , How will they get the ring from him. And when will Quentin be taken down too. Oh Please continue to write and update sooner and more often

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm a unsure about the claiming ritual chapter. On one hand, I want it to go smoothly? On the other, I'm thinking a little upheaval might be in order! Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 08:16 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Absolutely'

Been waiting for this update.

Author's Response: Thank you. Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 07:54 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Absolutely'

*hugs you* I loved seing you updated this one; it's really one of my favourites. :) The thing about absolute power. That's right. But I hope Buffy will be able to 'ground' him. These two are good for one another. I wonder if there's something about the words Buffy won't like? We'll see. And hun - this was no short chapter. A short one for me is one just reaching the limit of 1000 words :) I hope you'll feeling better.

Author's Response: Thanks, the next one will be longer. It's the claiming ritual, however, I am debating another way to go with the plot. We'll see??? Luv, spuf

Reviewer: heather Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Absolutely'

this story is great, keep at it! i can't wait to see how it turns out.

Author's Response: Thank you. The claiming ritual chapter is going to be a little tricky for me but I'm going to give it a try. Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Order of Protection'

I loved the update. The Godfather and James playing hide and go seek was too cute. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yeah, that Godfather! He's just adorable, huh??! Thank you, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Ash Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2005 - 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Order of Protection'

You don't have to try to make them enjoyable, they just are! :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I've been so lax with this fic, I'm sorry. I'm trying to 'perfect' the claiming ritual chapter, so... Luv, spuf

Reviewer: allspikeallthetime Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2005 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Order of Protection'

Thanks for the update!! I loved the take charge Will--so commanding! I can totally see it. I'm really dying to know what happened with RJ and who's helping out Riley the tool Finn! Have fun on your weekend but please update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, I love take charge Spike! Thank you, luv, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2005 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Order of Protection'

Very cool. Love how they all interact with each other. Have fun this weekend and please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. Something is going to happen, something very bad soon. It will bring on the 'gang war' that was inevitable. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Order of Protection'

Great Chapter. Want to say update soon and often. Enjoy your personal not business tee hee. Have a great time. Will be looking forward to your next updates.

Author's Response: Thank you. Luv spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2005 - 04:24 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Order of Protection'

Thanks for updating! I'm glad to see this fic continued. Love to read more (when you have time!) I'll read one of you other WIP instead.

Author's Response: I'm trying to keep this fic alive. Thank you, luv, spuf

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2005 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'More Human Then Human'

Didn't see that coming. Great chapter. I love it when people who are normally calm and dignified are drunk. Always a laugh. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: The Godfather is a big old softy, where his children and grandchildren are concerned that is. Thanks Luv Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'More Human Then Human'

Hope some reviews will make it better. I thought too it would have been the ring..... And it seems to me that Spike isn't so eager to turn Buffy... Looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response: No, it's not the ring. It's a human helping Riley. Thanks, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'More Human Then Human'

Hmm, mystery . . . love the story, can't wai to read more :)

Author's Response: Thank you. luv, spuf

Reviewer: allspikeallthetime Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'More Human Then Human'

I really love it. I'm glad that we're going to get some chapters in this story! Is Riley's ring like the Gem of Amarra? Does it let him walk around during the day? I loved the Godfather and Giles drunk!! Too funny.

Author's Response: Thank you. Actually, the ring isn't really the method Riley's using to 'daywalk' and all. There are some evil humans afoot, doing the newest Master Vampire's horrid dirty work. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 06:29 am Title: Chapter 15: 'More Human Then Human'

Great family party. a little confused at RJ's demise. But Pleae continue to update soon and often. And how was it done at daylite.

Author's Response: I enjoyed the party part, too. RJ was merely the means to let Buffy and Spike know that Riley could get to them through connections. (Actually, I kind of got the idea by the scene from Godfather when the fish shows up!) Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2005 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Anything'

Great chapter! I loved how Spike acted when they were talking about the rings. Very sweet. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks, Luv, Spuf

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