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Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2005 - 07:03 pm Title: Balance the Scales

Spike delivering Parker to the police after beating him into a gooey paste surprised me in a really good way. Buffy's advances were very sad, and I loved Spike's reassuring dialogue throughout their conversation.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:59 pm Title: Balance the Scales

This line: “If you’re laughing,” he ground out between hits. “You’re not in enough pain.” was brilliant. I really liked that line. Also it's so sad to see what parker has done to Buffy's view of men, hopefully Spike can change that and prove to her that not all men are disgusting pig that need to be put down. Very well written chapter. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Charlene Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:02 pm Title: Balance the Scales

Isn't it great how Spike can kick butt and then be so loving. That is my kind of man! Great chapter, as always!

Reviewer: missy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2005 - 04:27 pm Title: Balance the Scales

awesome chapter. really glad spike n buffy just held eachother at the end. awesome job. cant wait for more. o and really glad spike beat parker up. yay

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2005 - 04:17 pm Title: Balance the Scales

oh yeah !!!!! that was a good bashing up !! Glad that he's witht he police! *sighs in relief*

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2005 - 04:06 pm Title: Balance the Scales

aawwwww. he's so perfect.and yeah for the parker beating. i love the story and hope there more soon.

Reviewer: Maddie Mae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2005 - 02:19 pm Title: Balance the Scales

Beautiful. Simply beautiful! Another wonderful chapter! Ashlee, this is by far my favorite story right now and you do a fabulous job telling it! Keep it up!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2005 - 02:16 pm Title: Balance the Scales

Finally Parker got the shit beat out of him. That was great! I"m really glad Spike refused her right there. It wouldn't be a good time, I did feel for her though. I hope everything would be okay with them and Parker won't be that much of a problem anymore. Great work=)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2005 - 01:48 pm Title: Balance the Scales

loved it. hope buffy get through this. no rush on her part. and i hope that parker pays heavily for what he's done. maybe he can meet a big guy named Rocky 'The Rock' in the jailhouse. lol. that would be funny.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2005 - 01:38 pm Title: Balance the Scales

Sniff, sniff... I love Spike. Wonderful chapter, again. Luv, Spuf (PS...I hope Parker is impotent for life!)

Reviewer: lindsay Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2005 - 02:50 am Title: Never Leave Me

wow this is incredible, i really cant wait for more

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2005 - 01:12 am Title: Never Leave Me

sorry not sending in my reviews been busy writing my first spuffy story that i will be posting later on but i decided to get caught up on this story because it is one of my favorites and i am glad that spike is still taking care of buffy and i hope that he takes care of parker

Reviewer: Minerva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2005 - 05:26 pm Title: Never Leave Me

I was so mortified just wondering what Parker could have done to make Buffy BLEED like that. X_X Hope he gets his just desserts. kudos!

Reviewer: Maddie Mae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2005 - 03:02 pm Title: Never Leave Me

FINALLY!!! I am so excited Parker is going to get what he deserves! YEA WILLOW!!! Wonderful writing, as usual, and keep up the fabulous work!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2005 - 04:48 am Title: Never Leave Me

Poor little Buffy. Those rape kit exams are a highly unpleasant thing to go through. I'm glad Spike was there to offer her support. And though I really hope Parker does get taken care of, I hope Spike can stay on the free side of a jail cell. And Buffy, she just needs all of the quiet support everyone can muster. Quite the wonderful and important chapter. Very well, (and believably) handled.

Reviewer: Spikes Sweety Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2005 - 12:40 am Title: Never Leave Me

Haha, go Willow. It's always fun to kick a guy where it hurts when he's bein' a jerk or in Parker's case... a complete bastard. Loved the update!

Reviewer: stace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: Never Leave Me

ahaha he got kicked in the balls, i loves it! he deserves it freakin little prick! arg. can't wait to see the confrontation

Reviewer: pj Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 10:24 pm Title: Never Leave Me

I loved the emotional hospital scene where a thickheaded Spike finds out Parker has been raping her. Well, duh! But I thought it was great - and the fact that he's going to 'take care of it.' Loving it still!

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 09:18 pm Title: Never Leave Me

Yay! Willow kicking Spike in the balls was awesome, and I can obnly think thwat Spike kicking his ass will bve even sweeter! Please update soon, cause I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Never Leave Me

GO WILLOW!!! *does happy dance* That was great!! SOOO sad about the whole mix up about her believing that she isn't worth it... and him not wanting to see her because of that, not because he's trying to give her privacy. Looking forward to the confrontation... although I really would love to see Spike kick parkers meaningless ASS, I don't want him to get thrown into jail because of it. Update SOON!

Reviewer: beverly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Never Leave Me

oh my gosh it just keeps getting better please update soon

Reviewer: beverly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Never Leave Me

oh my gosh it just keeps getting better please update soon

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Never Leave Me

Way to go ,Willow!! YAY Spike go and kick Parker's a$$!! Poor Buffy...awesome chapter! Well done:)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 07:58 pm Title: Never Leave Me

omg i feel so bad for buffy. no one deserves that treatment. buffy is definitly going to be lost for a while i hope she will get some help. go williow though for kicking parker :) and i like the idea of spike kicking his ass. great update can't wait for more to come.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Never Leave Me

I had hoped that he would stay with Buffy, but then I also want him to kick Parkers ass! Great update, your writing the emotion really well. My heart aches for Buffy

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