Date: 03/20/2005 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter Eight
Still loving the story. The characterizations are dead on and your writing is delightful, fast-paced and I can't wait to read more, so I'm off to keep reading. :D
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: 03/20/2005 - 01:24 am Title: Chapter Five
I'm loving how you are developing this fic. Spike's confusion over his reactions towards Buffy and Buffy's guilt over how she treated him in her past/his future and her trying not to make the same mistakes twice. Loved that he simply couldn't not kiss her once she was so close and how despite his best intentions he can't stop thinking of her. Off to read more!
Author's Response: thanks - I hope you continue to like it.
Date: 03/19/2005 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Cool chappie. Addressing how Buffy attempted to change fates, but they still occurred were great. I hope she will be able to change some things.
Author's Response: thanks.
Date: 03/19/2005 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
OMG! okay just tuned in to your story and i gotta have more. so this is me on my hands and knees begging for more soon.
Author's Response: LOL Get up, get up! :)
Date: 03/19/2005 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
i LOVE this. the way Buffy has all those feelings for Spike but can't tell him. it breaks my heart. and the scene when Angel loses his soul...woah! did not see that coming!
I can't wait for an update. i'm on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: :) thanks for reading
Date: 03/19/2005 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Another great chapter. Please continue to update soon and often. Can;t wait to see how it turns out
Author's Response: TY
Date: 03/19/2005 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Angel has a moment of happiness?! Having Spike and Dru leave is for the best, even though Spike would be nice to have around still. Kendra's dead- that's sad but necessary. Now if Angelus can just skedaddle, too:)
Author's Response: thanks for reading
Date: 03/19/2005 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter Nine
I found your story yesterday and read through all nine chapters. It's absolutely wonderful, and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: TY hope you enjoy it.
Date: 03/19/2005 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter Nine
I love the way you have Buffy and Spike responding to each other. I can't wait to see what happens next. You are truly a gifted story teller, grin! (Nothing like Adrew, giggle!) I love the direction you are taking your story and timeline. Totally believeable and truly enjoyable! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! May your muse be kind and productive! :-) You have stayed very true to the original characters. I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: TY and thanks for reading.
Date: 03/19/2005 - 04:56 am Title: Chapter Nine
This is great. You've got the tone of all of them down pat. Please keep it coming. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 03/19/2005 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter Nine
Now this story is really getting interesting. Please continue to write. Update soon and often please
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 03/19/2005 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter Nine
update asap. love the story, its really good, my comments are really lame, but im totally into this story!
Author's Response: hee! thanks. all comments are good not lame.:)
Date: 03/18/2005 - 11:54 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Ah, it's got a hint of Lover's Walk to it LOL I'm glad Angel is willingly going to help Dru, and the fact Buffy told everyone the truth (mostly) is good. The sire/childe bond thing is going to be fun to read:)
Author's Response: Um, maybe not as much fun as you think...
Date: 03/18/2005 - 10:29 am Title: Chapter Eight
I just have to say that I am loving this story. Keeping us interested and seeing how the changes Buffy could make is keeping me glued to my seat. Great work.
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/18/2005 - 06:27 am Title: Chapter Eight
The heck with Spike, I think I may be falling in love with this story. The words, the plot, and yeah, the characters, too... It is just so phenomenal, I forget how much I love it until I just dive into another chapter. This bit here, with Spike, definitely my favorite so far. So amazing watching her watch him, and knowing that the changes she makes for the "better future" may just keep him and Dru together (we know better, but..) that emotion is very powerful. "It's a start." And the part about who taught Buffy to kiss, really made me smile. So wonderful, update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! As always, your reviews are well-thoughtout and encouraging.
Date: 03/18/2005 - 12:12 am Title: Chapter Eight
I really like how you set this up- Spike knows the truth pretty much now, which is good, and I found it sweet that they fought together:)
Author's Response: TY.
Date: 03/14/2005 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Fantastic story. Looking forward to reading the next chapters. please continue to update soona nd often.
Author's Response: TY
Date: 03/14/2005 - 04:36 am Title: Chapter Seven
Not really a cliffhanger, but boy do I want to find out about her talk with Spike. Also liking the idea that there may be another cosmic reason why Angel would lose his soul. That could make things very interesting. Also, liking the fact that GIles is all suspicious. And can you imagine this Spike at the scooby meeting? That's yet another reason to cling to this story. Absolutley fabulous.
Author's Response: TY :)
Date: 03/14/2005 - 04:26 am Title: Chapter Six
Buffy, you knew you could never fool Spike, and everyone knows that you don't really want to. Tomorrow. I think I have to head to Ch 7 now. Also, loving all the avoidy bits with Angel, and the annoying internal battle about how much of the past she can or can't change. Love, love, LOVE the story.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 03/13/2005 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter Seven
oh please please keep writing! This story is such a cliffhanger - well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 03/13/2005 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter Seven
Rupert's such an intelligent guy LOL I'm still awaiting Spike's reaction because I think it's going to be classic...and seeing how her friends respond is going to be interesting, too, especially Willow, the reason Buffy's in this mess in the first place
Author's Response: :)
Date: 03/13/2005 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter Six
I can't wait to see how Spike reacts- this whole situation is really going to change things. I just hope it's all for the best:)
Author's Response: Keep reading! :)
Date: 03/11/2005 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter Five
They really are so hot playing this "I know something you don't know" game. Purely brilliant.
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 03/11/2005 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter Four
How lovely would it be if she could get away with changeing things. So loving this story. Kinda want to run into Spike again.
Author's Response: oh, I"m sure she will....
Date: 03/11/2005 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter Three
Gosh I love this story. Sorta fulfills that dream of how you wish you could do life over knowing what you do now, when you were younger. Great chapter... kinda nice letting her mom in on things... slowly. Fabulous.
Author's Response: Thanks.
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