Date: 07/15/2005 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 24
Øh............... NO i am sorry but i just have to say this. It is a veru good story and i love the way you write it but i really don´t like that Xander is the bad guy, that is sopmething that really has fucked up my brain because i can´t take it serously because when i see Xander in my head i REALLY don´t see that... that... thing you have made him to in your story. So it kind of fucks up the effect that it should have that there is a dangerously murdere inthe house. It is your story and you can do with it whatever you wan´t tio and i am not trying to critizie or anything, i am not doubting yuor writing skills or anything i really think you write it good.. but the hole Xander thing reeeealy fucks up the effect. Sorry
Date: 06/17/2005 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter 24
well that was good still cant hold on to the xander being one of the bad guys
Date: 03/31/2005 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 24
aww hwo sad xanders evil, but oh well ill deal. omg i wonder wat will happen next its so great and i cant wait to read more. i love this story its so creative and very well written, u can just picture it in your head. ne ways please update as soon as u can, im dying to see wat happens next thanx
Date: 03/31/2005 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 24
maybe Angel perhaps or Riley..... i just can´t belive that Xander is one of the bad guys...hmm...but girl i love it..keep it up
Date: 03/31/2005 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 24
ooohhh, more mystery, more please!!!!
Date: 03/31/2005 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 24
man u know how to write a cliffhanger and good ones too anyway great story so far luv it to death and hope u update soon luvs tina
Date: 03/31/2005 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 24
more i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
thats great! what does willow have to do with all of this? is she a good guy or a bad guy. I'm assuming she has no knowledge of what xander is doing. This is completely out of character for him...it's a nice change from the loyal little puppy dog known as our Xand. This is like, way intense.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 24
i would of never guessed xander thats like wow but anyways great chapter cant wait for the next one
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 24
MORE! i am loving this! please update soon. i was so scared when Xander brought that knife up! argh! so tense, please update soon.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 09:13 am Title: Chapter 24
Angel.....or Giles......I can never tell with you........I'm going to pick, Giles....you made it to obvious to be Angel with his Harmony rough and tumble....and we've not seen much of Giles.....
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 24
OMG Can't wait to see what happens next!!! Please Update Soon
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter 24
hmmmmm.... mystery man number one revealed, Xander.... now mystery man 2..... who is that..... darn cant wait for more!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 24
Yeah, who's the mystery man? Angel?! Can't believe he acted like that to Harmony. And Dru's creepy, but no surprise there LOL If Xander would've cut Spike, I'd have screamed. And thank god he didn't do anything vile when Buffy was in the shower
Date: 03/30/2005 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter 24
eppp...xander and dru..hmmm tad creepy lol =P well again good chap. i know i say it everytime but i do mean it ever time. =)
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