Date: 07/25/2008 - 03:13 am Title: Epilogue
I came across this story and I really liked it. I'm one of those who thinks that Xander has too many issues and I really don't like him. I can see him being a murderer but I don't like that he got away with it.
Still, the plot was interesting.
One thing though, I see this is an old story but you may want to revise it, your writing style is rushed at the very beginning and your phrasing needs improvement. I'm sure a beta would help you and I'm sure that you have matured your style which would help this story tremendously.
Good job!
Date: 05/27/2006 - 04:26 am Title: Epilogue
great story!! I loved reading it. even with all the drama with dru and angel and xander, it still had lots of spuffy lovin' and happiness. also a funny story!! all around thumbs up from me!!! keep up the great work!!!!
Date: 08/24/2005 - 10:13 pm Title: Epilogue
wow wat a great story!! I luved it to pieces!!!!
Date: 06/13/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: Epilogue
i loved this story your a good writer keep writing byes
Date: 06/10/2005 - 05:33 am Title: Epilogue
i loved it it wasw so good
Date: 06/10/2005 - 02:34 am Title: Epilogue
awww i loved the epilogue it was so cute. im so happy that u wrote it. i thought it was so sweet and am so happy tha6t u made her pregnant. thanx so much for writing it, i enjoyed reading it. cant wait to read more of your other stories
Date: 06/08/2005 - 02:04 pm Title: Epilogue
great ending to a brilliant story! loved it.
Date: 06/08/2005 - 03:50 am Title: Epilogue
awwww!!!!!! that was a lovely epilogue!!!!!
Date: 06/07/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: Epilogue
That was A really great story
Date: 06/07/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Epilogue
The epilogue was very cute! I'm happy Buffy and Spike had a baby- I think that was a nice touch to the ending of this fic. I'm just happy everything worked out so well for them!
Date: 06/07/2005 - 09:40 pm Title: Epilogue
i loved it!!! Im so glad you ended it this way instead :) Great job cant wait for your next!!!xxx
Date: 06/07/2005 - 09:39 pm Title: Epilogue
I am so glad you added an epiloge made the story have a nice sweet ending now if there were another chapter..........
Date: 06/07/2005 - 09:22 pm Title: Epilogue
absolutely loved it and the epilogue