Date: 03/01/2009 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm sure this is a great story and all, it's just that I'm having a really hard time getting through all of the "text type" and incorrect grammar. If you're still a writer and would like to maybe re-post this (or get any of your current work) beta-ized, I'm an English major. I'd be happy to help.
:D
Author's Response: Actually, that would be great! My email is jcarothers2008@yahoo.com or you can reach me on yahoo at xxx_angelwings16_xxx :) I wrote this story when I was like 14 or 15 so there is alot of mistakes of course lol
Date: 10/05/2007 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
it's really good so far. i like.
Date: 06/07/2005 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
very good loved it. realy good
Date: 06/04/2005 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter 2
I loved the quote unquote asshole line. Great so far.
Date: 04/01/2005 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter 2
ALL I CAN SAW IS AWESOME
Date: 03/15/2005 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
i just posted my first fic yesterday so i know how you feel lol!Well i have to say ive read a lot of spuffies and this ones really cute, keep up the goodness!
Date: 03/11/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
loving it so far
Date: 03/11/2005 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
your doing awesome for it being your first fic...almost too good! :)
Date: 03/11/2005 - 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
A cute story! cant wait for more!
Date: 03/11/2005 - 11:48 am Title: Chapter 2
aw, very cute =)