Date: 06/03/2005 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
Short but sweet, but when is he gonna dump Dru already :(
Date: 06/03/2005 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awwwwww...That's sooooo sweet. Loved Spike's last line, you're making me fal in love with Spike even more and I didn't think that was possible :)
Date: 06/03/2005 - 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
You need to make these chapters a bit longer, and although it all seems a bit rushed, it's also ok, still a great reaad....first fic I've ever read that was able to accomplish that, so kudos to you :)
Author's Response: I thought about making it longer...but i didn't have enough time. School was a bitch all through out this story, and i didn't want the readers to get mad at me if i didn't post a chapter. So i just got to the point, which is one of my bad things about my writing. On my next story i have to learn that i don't have to rush anymore and thati can make it longer. Hopefully i will stick to that lol
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
and the plot thickens :D Tough perdicament, going out with Riley because you told him you would, or going out with Spike cause he's damn sexy...Actually wouldn't have been that tough for me, I would have handed the flowers to Riley and said Cya, as i grabbed Spike and headed out the door, but that's just me :D
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ok I forgive Spikey even if Buffy doesn't and come on who would complain about having his lips touch theirs...LOLOLOL :D Very good chapter and the flow is getting better and better :)
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
ANother good chapter :)
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
Sorryt hat last review didn't come out like I had hope let me try again please, as far as spacing out the dialouge: “Ugh, fine.” She storms to the door and throws it open. She hold it open. “Alright come in, William.” Spike nods. “Thanks.” He walks over to a chair and sits down. Buffy walks back to her bed and picks up her book. “Ugh, fine.” She storms to the door and throws it open. She hold it open. “Alright come in, William.” Spike nods. “Thanks.” He walks over to a chair and sits down. Buffy walks back to her bed and picks up her book. ok I hope that looks better, if not then please delete this :)
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
Whoa ok I didn't see that coming at all...Interesting twist. And describing angel as mr. Forehead, class, it can never be overdone :D Got me on the edge of my seat here. I just have one tiny criticism, i think your story would flow a bit better if you give each person their own paragraph, like space it out, example: “Ugh, fine.” She storms to the door and throws it open. She hold it open. “Alright come in, William.” Spike nods. “Thanks.” He walks over to a chair and sits down. Buffy walks back to her bed and picks up her book. Flows better like this: “Ugh, fine.” She storms to the door and throws it open. She hold it open. “Alright come in, William.” Spike nods. “Thanks.” He walks over to a chair and sits down. Buffy walks back to her bed and picks up her book. Overall great writing and wonderful storytelling, now off tot he next chappy:)
Date: 06/03/2005 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter 36
loved the end. you can write and you should keep on writing. from the parts that i have read you can write and i am strait up saying write a book. thats it and their was licking he he
Date: 06/03/2005 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 36
great ending!!!! and i hope u'll do a sequel. love this story!!! too bad it has to end. :-)
Date: 06/03/2005 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter 36
aww how cute i loved how it ended it was so sweet. im so sad its over but it was a great ending and im so happy that ii read it. i loved reading this story and loved how u wrote it. thanx so much for writing it, i enjoyed it a lot. cant wait to read more of your stories
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter 36
I think your an awesome writter and spuffy wouldn;t be the same with out you. I really hope you continue to write spuffy
pluse you have to be one of the best writers ever!!!
YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank u sooo much!!!!! i didnt know that i was that well liked!!! thank u once again :)
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter 36
absolutely loved this story from beginning to end and i loved the ending to this chapter and i hope that you might consider to do a sequel to this story in the future. keep up the great work on your future stories to come
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter 36
i loved it from beg. to end. Good job and if you start another fic ill for sure read it to!!!! keep up the amazing work!!!
Date: 06/03/2005 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter 35
I wish it didn't have to finish. So please update soon
Date: 06/03/2005 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter 35
on the next one you should have Buffy looks up a her masculine hunk of meat. He looks back at her watching sweat roll down her body and down her breasts. he has never seen her body glicen so beautifly he soon bends down and licks the sweat rolling down her breastshis
Date: 06/03/2005 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter 35
yayness dru is put away and angel is gonna deffinatly be in jail.. mmm yummy spike =P
Date: 06/03/2005 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter 35
Great way to tie everything and everyone up. Really not looking forward to the last chapter, unless you have another great story in the works.
Date: 06/03/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter 35
wonderful chap. The part where Xan high fives Spike cuz he got away with murder had me laughing my ass off though. Cant wait fore the spuffyness :)
Date: 06/03/2005 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter 35
Awww what a great chapter and that Drusilla bitch finally got what she deserved. cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 06/03/2005 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter 35
loved this update and i will be sad to see this story go....is there any way for you to do a sequel to it ?
Date: 06/03/2005 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 35
yay im so happy that dru is going to jail and that buffy forgave xander. i love this story and am so happy that u updated it. im really happy that spike and buffy and xander and willow are happy and together agian(for s/b). im really sad that there will only be one more chapter but i no it will be great. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next thanx
Date: 06/03/2005 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter 35
I'm glad their plan worked and that Dru was arrested- that was awesome to see. It's also nice to know that Buffy will forgive Xander- he did the right thing in the end, which matters most at this point. I can't wait to read the end!
Date: 06/03/2005 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter 35
it was good havent read the hole thing but some one told me to read this. i think the next chapter in the spuffy love should include cherrys and licking
Date: 06/02/2005 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter 34
good chapter cant wait for the next one
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